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Allrighty, now that i have figured it out, this will be the page where you guys can post what ever comment you want. though it might be easier to just comment on the chapter. I don't know, just do what ever sounds right. Woot!!
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So far everything is progressing smoothly. Chapter 8 is going to take a little bit just to let everyone know. I should have it out by Thursday the latest though. I can't wait to give you guys this story! I must share this excitement, it is unfair to keep it to myself. Little at a time though :)
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Right so I'm contemplating on doing a background. I know some people don't really care much for them so I think if I do make one than I'll just make it to where it doesn't effect the story much if not than any at all. Anyone have thoughts on such? Oh and another thing, I'm going back to fix grammar so if I miss anything please point it out. The last thing is how are the images? Are my words to bland and lifeless or can you actually imagine the situations and feel the character's well character? Thanks for reading so far!
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So 19 will be coming out later than expected. Why? Well you'll find that out, but I'll have it out by Sunday the latest. I want to release it tomorrow though. Well we'll just have to wait and see.
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so quick question, if I threw in extra factions aside from Sky's and the human's, would that be to much? or do you think it would fit quite well with how the world is built so far? should I wait longer before this question is taken int effect or? tell me your thoughts. Though this isn't really a reader guided book, sometimes suggestions go a long way. I think that's what I mean to say...
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does anyone even read any of these? I hope so, anyway, sorry the chapters aren't out still. I have a test wednesday that I've been studying for andI haven't really given much thought to the book. I know I'm making excuses over and over again just to delay my chapters because I'm slightly lazy but I really am trying. the chapters that is
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