《A World of My Own》Important Shit! I wish I knew how to create a poll.
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It appears I have gotten a critical comment from some asshole on one of my chapters. I love it. I wanted to create a poll for this, but I have no idea how to handle that. I've only been on this site for five days, or maybe four? I'm not sure.
The comment brought up the lack of detail many of my chapters have. I can't deny that. I can occasionally rush through certain sections of the story. Should I start adding in more detail into each one of my chapters from here on out or keep my style of writing the way it is?
If I began adding more detail the chapters would become longer. This would mean I would upload less frequently.
A chapter is coming later today so just ignore this if you don't care and just want to read the story, but I genuinely want to write the best story I can and the feedback would be helpful.
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