《A World of My Own》Important Shit! I wish I knew how to create a poll.
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It appears I have gotten a critical comment from some asshole on one of my chapters. I love it. I wanted to create a poll for this, but I have no idea how to handle that. I've only been on this site for five days, or maybe four? I'm not sure.
The comment brought up the lack of detail many of my chapters have. I can't deny that. I can occasionally rush through certain sections of the story. Should I start adding in more detail into each one of my chapters from here on out or keep my style of writing the way it is?
If I began adding more detail the chapters would become longer. This would mean I would upload less frequently.
A chapter is coming later today so just ignore this if you don't care and just want to read the story, but I genuinely want to write the best story I can and the feedback would be helpful.
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Rogue Dungeon: A LitRPG Adventure
From James A. Hunter, author of Viridian Gate Online and War God's Mantle! Check out my first attempt at a Dungeon litRPG Novel! Roark von Graf—hedge mage and lesser noble of Traisbin—is one of only a handful of Freedom fighters left, and he knows the Resistance’s days are numbered. Unless they do something drastic … But when a daring plan to unseat the Tyrant King goes awry, Roark finds himself on the run through an interdimensional portal, which strands him in a very unexpected location: an ultra-immersive, fantasy video game called Hearthworld. He can’t log out, his magic is on the fritz, and worst of all, he’s not even human. Now, he’s a low-class, run-of-the-mil Dungeon monster. Some disgusting, blue-skinned creature called a Troll. At least there’s one small silver lining—Roark managed the grab a powerful magic artifact on his way through the portal, and with it he might just be able to save the world after all. Unless, of course, the Tyrant King gets to him first …Hey everyone, so as most of you know, I write books for a living, and I just put this title up on Amazon (and enrolled it in KU). Because KU requires exclusivity as part of their terms of service, I have had to pull the majority of the content from this site. I left the full novel up for as long as possible, so I hope everyone got a chance to read it. If you haven't had a chance to read it in its entirety (sorry!) you can pick it up on Amazon. Thanks again for coming on this journey with me, and I so hope you enjoyed it. The book will be out on Tuesday July 24th. Best, James Hunter
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Demons and Candy
This is a RP that me and a friend did, that we are turning into a story. It will be a series, WARNING- it gets really dark and has a lot of triggers in it, so read with caution. I write this on wattpad and fanfiction.net wattpad- https://www.wattpad.com/story/252338499?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_story_details&wp_uname=rp_together&wp_originator=A6f2Zmn9iT5ooVDopGSjo0sWtuKCIrvLRyn8K%2FKK13hzdmiWcg%2FPENqA%2FhpxwBC34hHKQV1hMTMbZ4LFpklDw6MuB%2FQLz4%2FrMaFsX0GzOeEGvGLhxZnnGczXFNJBh6sm fanfiction.net- https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13820108/1/Demons-and-Candy
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Age of Cultivation Online
Story Synopsis Juewang Guan was born with an incurable illness at a young age that permanently robbed him of his sight and hearing, but with the modern-day prosthetic technology developed in recent years, he was able to recover his sense of sight with robotic eyes. Deemed to be a hopeless child and valueless, he was thereby cast away by the friends and families he once trusts, and the world ignored him. In this grown-up (adult) world, where value is determined by achievement and wealth. So a decrepit cripple like him is worthless. And only his younger sister still cares for him. Watch as this individual reaches the apex of cultivation within 'Age of Cultivation Online', the hottest new VRMMORPG game in Asia (China). Thereby transcending reality and becoming a legendary figure in both in-game and the real worlds. Disclaimer: I am not a very experienced writer, neither do I have any professional help nor assistance from another author in writing my stories. So there is expected to be a few grammars mistakes or some misspellings on my part. Otherwise please enjoy my work. The artwork is owned by Gearous himself. I'm only using it as a cover art depicting what the main protagonist (Juewang Guan) looks like in my novel. Word count: 1500 words/chapter Release rate: 1 chapter/day Book 1 - Age of Cultivation Online Book 2
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Ascension Game
You wake up in a strange complex with no memory of how you got there. You encounter familiar faces that are trapped here as well. It seems that you will be participating in a strange game and that the only way to escape this place is to climb up its 100 floors.
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Totaris
Totaris, a world of magic, adventure and wonders. Yuri a mage makes his way through this world, searching for treasures and power only mentioned in legends or decaying texts. To complete a goal set by many, the path to immortality and ultimate power. What adventures will this young man face, terrifying monsters, large dungeons and other adventures. Find out in Yuri's journey through Totaris.
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