《Mana World - Convergence》Prologue ch10 Trust me I'm an engineer
Advertisement
Week 4 day 2 since the explosion and Leon is still with us. Who knew that the engineer could finally find a way to solve this problem (Well he IS an engineer so actually it's his job - Georg) (But he used ROCKS Georg, fucking ROCKS - Dom) (I told you, thousands of books saying that special stones had a specific reaction towards mana - Leon) (Who knew he was right. Also they were NOVELS not science books - Dom & Georg). Well now he walks with a light-bulb in a key-chain around his neck but still impressive (Tomorrow you will be wanting another keychain if that prevents you from dying - Leon) (Ohhhh wise and kind Leon-sama remember this lowly programmer and gift him with that key-chain - Dom) (It's just a small block of quartz Dom - Georg)
Let me tell you (No you will not. This is MY impressive tale - Leon)
Ahem Ahem (It's a diary you idiot, you don't need to clear your throat - Dom & Georg) this impressive young man called Leon (Young man at 35? - Tom) (Shut up you have no permission to write here - Leon) asked his father to get several types of different stones with the specific objective to save mankind (only 197 people alive and with mana - Georg). Once the stones came he tried with every single one of them without fear for his life (Didn't you gave them to the ones that were stable from the other side of the room to check what happened - Dom) (Shut up, my discovery, my story - Leon). As I was saying, totally selfless courage to test by himself 'till the logically expected happened. He found that the quartz (a silicon-oxygen based mineral with chemical formula SiO2 - Leon) gave a subtle response (Yeah subtle. It glowed with the strenght of a thousand suns - Dom & Georg), that's when I knew I have solved it, a way to drain the mana from the body so you wouldn't use it in a stupid way and die.
Advertisement
Well psychedelic delusions aside he found a way to release most of the mana and so far the meditation group had the highest survival rates with a 75% mortality rate vs the 100% of the popsicles and the 120% of those that wanted to learn magic (yeah he managed to turn himself to electricity, so he could discharge the mana, but also made the electrical transformer, that they were using, blew up killing a friend in the process) (They deserved it - Georg).
Now Leon, the 2 surviving members of the meditation club and 42 workers more are all meditating 4 hours a die, taking anti anxiety pills and wearing round quartz crystals that glow continuously like a light bulb.
___________________________________________________
ch 10 here.
If possible please review my story so I know what you like and what you don't.
Also do you like the stupid references?
They are easy to spot although I doubt that many will found all of them.
Advertisement
- In Serial86 Chapters
Soulmonger
Tom's baby-momma died, and now her past is coming back to bite him. He's broke, The cops are out to get him, the babysitter is pure evil, and he's got a limited time to dig himself out before her world collides with his own.
8 174 - In Serial20 Chapters
Black Ash
The Black Ash is an ancient relic, an evil beyond all human imagination and means. In the fifth century, with Rome and its empire in collapse, the Church secreted the Ash to Ireland for safekeeping. In time rumor and legend faded, it was all but forgotten. Over the centuries, however, its menace never subsided, and there remained those with dark ambitions who sought it. It was all but inevitable that one day the Ash would rise again. At that time, a few unlikely strangers would step forward and fight for the very future of mankind.
8 87 - In Serial50 Chapters
Heroes of Errand
This is a D&D inspired story. So if you are looking for the tabletop feel then you've come to the right place. Every person is unique and each carries different skills and talents that others lack. These skills and talents add their flavours into the lives of others to make it something truly remarkable. Embark on a journey with a bunch of adventures, who will try their best to make sure everyone has a story worth retelling. When a body appears at a celebration held in their honour, the Jellybeans are forced into a murder investigation. As the political tension rises and a need for immediate answers looms ever closer, the odds of them getting a noose around their necks tighten by the second. This story will continue for the next writathon, I'm putting away time to write for it during the next one. Book 1: Fallen Blade Chapters 1-17 Book 2: The Cursed Blood 18-Present Cover art is done by Jack0fHearts
8 96 - In Serial21 Chapters
Pokemon: Retold
A new take on the Pokemon franchise that attempts to combine the games, anime, and other source material. Follow the adventures of Red as he explores the Kanto region! Be warned, it's probably gonna be shit
8 204 - In Serial16 Chapters
Adopted By Stampy!!!!
Christine Spencerson is an average 13 year old orphan in a horrible orphanage. She loves watching Stampy, Sqaishey, Squid, Amy, and DanTDM. But what will happen when she's actually ADOPTED by a very special cat? And could her and Lee be more than friends?
8 133 - In Serial182 Chapters
Riddick/ Against the Heavens
SUMMARY: In a world where magic and magical beasts are omnipresent, the nature's law of strong ruling over the weak is followed everywhere. Controlled by Immortals who transcended the limits of mortality this world has mages and warriors as it's elites, all with the same goal of becoming an immortal. In the vast universe this world is an unremarkable one with no treasures but countless dangers where mortals are seen as nothing but cannon fodder for the strong. Riddick was born in this world as a son of a mere mortal. Join him in his journey as he paves a path to the epitome of immortality. He starts his journey with a small dream but will soon realise his destiny as the fate shows its cruelty.IMP NOTE : My work has no relation to Vin Diesel's Riddick movie. This is not a Riddick fan fiction but some thing which will come under Xianxia genre. Edit #1 - Please understand that this is my first work and I have improved a lot till the current chapter. I have yet to rewrite the beginning chapters and I am aware that they aren't really good. Still I hope you can read past the book 1 so you can enjoy the book just like many others who wait for it.Edit 2 # - This is an initial draft and sooner or later, I will definitely rewrite it all into an authentic book.Thank you, Gsd reddy.
8 161

