《Re: Globus Online (Completed)》Notification, Questions.
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Hello everyone reading my story.
I have to inform you that I won't be posting chapters for a little bit of time (Don't know until when).
It is partially my laziness but I also have to do a few things in real life and I just don't have enough time for creating chapters each day anymore.
I wish to keep writing them but I just cannot for a little bit of time. I will resume making chapters until my problems are taken care of and when i've finally gotten rid of my pessimstic outlook on life... And I also need to limit my laziness.
You might see me online reading light novels but it takes me an usual of two to three hours to make a chapter and I also want to read Light Novels to improve mine.
If you understand, thank you.
That was the notification and now to the questions.
1. What do you think of the story and plot?
2. What do you think of the characters? Who is your favourite?
3. Are things forced in my story?
4. What things should I try to improve?
Those are the four main questions in my mind right now due to two written reviews that have quite low stars... 1 star to 1.5 stars.
I shall keep writing this story even if the reviews get as horrible as to make the overall stars to 0.25 because I know that there are way better stories than mine on royalroadl and I cannot compete with them and people usually use the good stories to look at the new and worse ones and rate them a lot lower.
If you would answer those four questions truthfully I would be grateful.
Also, if you have some free time and nothing to do... Could you please make a review so I can read it and try to improve the things you are talking about and maybe write how to improve them? It is kind of hard to improve when you know of the thing you must improve on but not how to improve it.
Thank you for reading this,
Katsune the Author.
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