《Mana Odyssey》Chapter 1:Must i go to school?
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Chirp chirp chirp
"It's morning already huh."
I stretch my body for a while, I then check my clock, its 5 o’clock. I decided to go an prepare breakfast. I go to kitchen and begin to cook. My name is Forvish Edwaltz, 16 years old, I live in a forest in Japan, in a civilian house that was bought cheaply by my dad.
I have spent 9 years here. My height is around 160 cm, I am not too fat nor thin, I think I am normal though. I have black hair which is pretty rare nowadays because people's genes were mutated by the apocalypse, their hair and ear's change, there are also people who grow tail's. While I'm cooking, dad comes in from the front door.
"Hey, your up early boy."
"I am 16 years old now dad, I am not a child anymore, perverted, stupid dad."
This is my dad Leon Edwaltz, 37 years old as you can tell he is a pervert and is also forgetful. His lust for women I must say is number one in the world. Even though he is like this he is very strong I have never won against him once. He adopted me and taught me many things like how to fight, common sense, general subjects and many other things this is why I treat him as my dad.
"I have an important quest for you."
Dad uses the term quest for when he needs me to do something , it's usually slaying demon's, but also to do things like pay for debts, repair a house that dad breaks etc.
"You know today I checked our mailbox?"
"Do you mean the payment for me slaying the dragon beast yesterday? I am sorry dad because that dragons roar is so annoying I killed it yesterday night."
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"No, not that."
"Oh, then about your debt at bar yesterday? Don't worry I already paid that."
"No, not that."
"Don't tell me it is a letter from the police to turn yourself in because you raped a girl yesterday. It's okay dad if you want to run to other nations I will help you."
"Do you think I am lust beast or something?"
"Yes, I'm 100 percent sure you are"
Then dad fell onto the ground and started weaping tears on the ground. I think this will last for 25 minutes. I will continue cooking then.
25 minutes later.
"So, what is this important quest you want to tell me."
"Your mom told me she wants you to meet her."
Hearing the word "mom" my mind processes rapidly. If I have a mom, then dad is already married. Then why he is lusting for other woman? Don't tell me dad has a harem? Oh god.
"Then tell me how many mom's do I have."
"Don't worry you only have one."
"Please tell me the truth dad."
"It's the truth."
"Fu.
"Anyway I was spotted by your mother and she told me she wants to get together with you."
"So what do you want me to do?"
"I want you to go back alone to Neo country."
Neo country is the biggest country of humanity and the most advanced one, to think dad came from there.
"Why must I go back alone?"
"It is important quest for you."
"I want you to be accepted into the school that is chosen for you and ..."
"And what?"
"Please don't tell your mom, dad's whereabouts."
"... I think I will tell mom."
"Please I beg you."
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He started doing a dogeza for the first time in my life, is my mom, really that scary? Well if she isn't scary, I think dad would have a harem then.
"I don't want to do it cause it's a pain."
More likely fun.
"PLEASE."
"There is no reason to go."
"IT IS A QUEST FROM ME, you must go to school."
.........
What an annoying father
"You must graduate from school or I won't let you fight me again."
"Wait, what is with that condition, you promised me to tell me of my past if I win against you but how can I win against you if I can't fight you?"
"Then go to school."
His smile is like a smile when someone sends a chicken to a butcher house. You want to sacrifice your son so badly for your own safety, damn you dad.
"I already mastered all the school subjects cause you told me if I didn't master them you wouldn't tell me your past, so why do you want me to go to school again?"
"You must search for a wife, because I want to see my grandchild."
"Cough"
Dad spurt's blood from his mouth. I run to him to see if he's fine.
"I am fine, my life will not last that long anyways around 5 more years I think, that's why I want to see my grandchild before I die."
"Then why from a school? Answer me dad."
"Because if you a marry an uneducated woman I cannot stay in peace so please find a good girl and marry her before I die."
"cough"
Dad coughed up blood again.
"Stop dad say no more, I will go to school, so please say no more."
Then dad nod's because I understand his conditions.
A school, a hell, a god's fury if it is for my dad I will do anything.
""""""""DAD's POV""""""""
Huhuhuhu looks like my charm technique for capturing a girls heart still works, to believe I don't have long to live anymore.
Forvish is still too naive, ckckckck.
Thank god I learn a spurting blood from my mouth technique when I was still a teenager.
Huhuhu my life is safe and I can see my grandchildren in 3 or 4 years from now. This is killing two birds with one stone, no three birds or four birds well at least I gain benefits from this.
Lalalalalala~~~~~^~^
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