《Rise of Agze'sCanvas》Chapter 4:Greater blessing
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Hey.TofunMiso here xD this will be the last chapter for the day, i would appreciate if i could get some feedback or at less some comments. Enjoy :P
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Looking at the shocked expession on the face of the old man infront of him, kalm thought to himself '' Yesss, i can see.. my eyes are finally opened hahahaha. Hmm so this is the stranger that gave me that amazing drink and why is he making that kind of face? Well nonetheless he is the one taking care of me, so i have to give him my gratitude'' kalm made a small Gupu sound meaning Thanks. Looking around curiously,kalm spotted that on the man's head something appeared, kalm narrowed his eyes almost as if he was rubbing it in disbelief as he saw words on it.
[Title:Grandpa Agze,Name:Agze Blunt] was floating on top of his head.''Whats this?why are there annotation on his head?'' asked kalm himself, focusing his sight even more on its strange appearance , an extra screen popped out and on it were the words in big bold Letter STATUS PROFILE.
[Title: Grandpa Agze,??????????????????, Name:Agze Blunt][Job Class: Overking(Might)]
STATUS PROFILE
Strength: ?????
Vitality: ?????
Agility: ?????
Intelligence: ?????
Martial grade: ???????
Mana grade: ???????
Elemental affinity:Earth(intermediate)
Blessing:?????
Kalm small round eyes opened widely''Huh? this..this is a game status screen !,was i thrown into a virtual game or something?'' Moving his sight around the room, other object started showing up with explanation shown above them.'' Wooo this is amazing, its much more realistic then any VMMO that i'd ever seen,its so freaking cool'' as kalm tries to find fault with the notion of him being transported/reborn into another world.
As kalm was busily exploring his own brand new environment, he was then abruptly interrupted and looked quickly back upon the target face when the old man in front of him utter out'' This can't be.... is it really a .....Greater blessing..the dragonic....red moons?''.The Confused kalm who could suddenly understand what this Grandpa Agze holding him was saying was utterly shock by such a turn of events that he made arbitrary movement and noises.
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The Dragonic eyes/red moons, one of the so called blessing that you can find on Raytearth. A blessing is a special gift received from the being of the higher planes known as gods/Divine being and they can be separated into two kinds,lesser blessing;greater blessing. They are rarely found on people's throughout history and when recorded they all belong to people who accomplished great things in their era regardless of being either bad or good. Thus they were widely sought after by nations or superpowers as they will influence changes in the power structure of the world. And as luck has it kalm received one such gift, the scarlet/red moons;blood; red eyes as clear as a ruby with the ability to see through all that is true.
Kalm having realized that he could now understand the old man became confused, shortly after it took him a while before he could calm himself down, thinking back to when he could not understand this world's speeches and now where he could, he discovered the different between them'' is it because of my eyes?'' testing out his theory by closing his eyes for a few minute he then discovered that the language started getting blurred in his head, he concluded that it was because of his eyes that he could suddenly understand the language of this world.Ignoring the muttering of the old man he then turn his newly discovered eye power onto his own body wanting to check on his own status...
[Title:not from this world,Name Agze Kalm][Job Class:none]
STATUS PROFILE
Strength:2
Vitality:5
Agility:1
Intelligence:204
Martial grade:none
Mana Grade:none
Elemental Affinity:Fire(High),Dark(High),steel(Divine)
Blessing:Crimson cat-eye , (Nite,sun$%[email protected]), Hymns
Looking at the status, there were many strange variables on them but the one that made kalm emotionally stirred with tears even thought he was a baby that could only know how to depend on other and cry was the one shown at the end.....''Nite....Sun''It seems like his companion from the previous world had cross over to this one together with him, and it gave a sense of comfort knowing that. But it also gave kalm a sense of mystery as if his comrade has traveled through worlds with him where are they now?
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