《An Immortals' Interaction with Modern Technology.》[POLL]Not a chapter: Just a small opinion gathering.
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Hi, This is your author, CodexofImmortals! Now I've reached a somewhat small milestone in this fiction, Modern Immortal.
We are nearing Chapter ten and so, I would like to ask. What do you think of the story so far? Was it enjoyable enough? Was it logical enough? Or there are other things that seemed amiss?
Was the chapter long enough or too long that it became boring? Was I dumping too much info? Please inform meee!!!
Please express your opinions and further explain on how can I further improve in writing!!
And also, thanks to the loyal readers out there!
Profound thanks to all of you!
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