29/05/2015 03:59:32Xagnam Wrote: [ -> ][quote='Creator48' pid='219951' dateline='1432869461']

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This is also the reason people have been making "poem" comments, because poems tend to look like this due to intentional breaks in their sentence structure. Really, it's as if you've hit the enter key/return key every 10 words.

Not only does this look odd when going from a properly formatted story to this one, but it also makes the page 10x longer than it needs to be.

Note taken, I 'll make the next one into a full page format and see the results, if it's any better,

I'll change it. If not I'll stick to the long stuff.

To be truthful, It's easier for me to write that way, well future will tell, which is better. for me both are the same, you see on my PC it's centered so it's easier for me to read, don't know how it's on other devices. Sorry for inconveniencing you for so long.

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DKing POV

He was Inside the game and really mad.

"That stupid Darknym hasn't appeared for two days now, after ridiculing me twice what is he doing anyway"

He asked the Lady director who was sitting across the table, she was a high elf with beautiful features that

highly outdid her real world appearance.

"Don't be so grumpy, we have Zeiseg's help on this one, if he can overcome Zeiseg's wrath then we will have to

leave him be, although I highly doubt he can win against an Immortal ork"

DKing didn't like it but she was right attacking this city was like challenging the Colossal ork to duel, since there

was a special someone of his in this city at the moment.

It didn't take long for a panicked crowd to begin running right and left.

DKing took out his weapon and begun changing to the direction of the fleeing crowd.

He saw A small masked man who asked some beautiful elf woman.

"Are you a player?"

She nodded yes and he turned her into dust with one spell.

DKing was left speachless of Darknym's boldness, he even asked himself a single question

'Where are the city guards?'

DKing none the less shone his eyes in full berserk mode and charged at him.

His first slash was heavy as hell, he saw Darknym's knees bend from the blow, the

second made a glass shattering sound signaling the destruction of Darknym's Elemental shield.

Third however did a pang! sound as it bounced off his skin, as if it hit something hard.

He saw Darknym's eyes shine a red light and next a breath of flames consumed his face blinding him for a few moments.

He felt a soft touch on his shoulder and next a pain so intense he felt unconscious

in his capsule, it was a really rare occasion, falling unconscious only occurred when the pain exceeded the

bearable limit of the person's mind.

The lady director saw what had happened in real time as she rushed after him.

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Lady Directo's POV

I was sitting at a nice cafe when so much noise was heard from afar,

I disregarded it at first but then DKing my dear charged towards the noises,

after the fleeing crowd had already ruined our date, I did say to him to leave it to Zeiseg or more like to his daughter,

who is currently in town.

The lady director was running at first but she could not run well with a dress on and high heel shoes.

She cast a flight spell on herself and was almost in time for DKing's first blow.

It was a bit strange as Darknym did nothing, cast no spells to avert the second hit that shattered his shield.

But seeing DKing's Axe bounce off Darknym's skin was something unheard of or wait.

She had completely forgotten that he was a dragon now.

The fire breath, blinded DKing and next she saw Darknym casting two spells one after the other that did

nothing at all and then went next to DKing and touching him.

A pool of acid begun eroding the ork's skin, it didn't kill him but the ork fell on the floor as if dead.

Darknym stepped on the ork kicked with his foot while Dking was lying on the floor doing enormous damage.

Everyone at the scene were left dumbstruck seeing the 10.000 damage kicks, that could only be the attack of

a minor villain from an anime, that hits his opponents while they are down.

Of course there was no comeback, after a few more kicks Dking was dead.

She rabidly opened the chat and called the chief developer's office.

"Do you know what time it is?"

Said a mad employee, it was nearly 2hours past midnight.

"You dare talk like that to me and I'll have you fired"

She shouted angrily.

"Yes mum"

"Now tell me what happened to DKing right now!"

"Let me see for a while"

A few moments afterwards the employee returned

"He lost consciousness due to not being able to deal with the pain, he will regain consciousness in about half an hour,

when he gains an adequate pain resistance or sooner if he wakes up and logs out"

"You are telling me that a player whose level hasn't even reached one hundred just KOed a level 900 player?"

"Technically yes but he didn't kill him did he, it will take him at least an hour to PK him unless his strength is better

trained or if he is a monster like and ork or a troll"

"Or a dragon"

She said closing the chat there after seeing,Darknym leaving DKing's corpse alone and going away to hunt chicks again.

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Darknym's POV

After killing DKing the roads had become deserted, Darknym didn't want to invade in other people's

houses in order not to be reported so he just shouted.

"Is anyone brave enough to come and challenge me or is this town full of pussies?"

He was surprised to see something moving around behind a building and then crushing a house in front of his face.

He would have whistled if he knew how but what had come was a five meters tall beauty with four swords in her

giant hands.

"Are you the brave man who will accept any challenge"

She said with a cruel broad voice. Well beauty and voice don't always come together, but still Darknym was captivated.

The chick laughed and said

"Don't tell me you are frozen in fear from my might"

She was baiting him but to him it felt as if she was asking him for a dance.

"There sure are only pussies in this town, but I haven't yet tried a giant pussy before"

He said still a bit absentminded.

He ate a two meter long kick for the comment but he didn't care since he felt the long awaited pain for once more.

He teleported next to her head and said.

"I love the way you hit me there, are your hips as strong as your feet"

He ate a sword at his shoulder, but it bounced off him as he was propelled at her head, kneeling her to the ground.

"You know something, I like you, what is your name?"

Asked Darknym after teleporting in front of the kneeling green giant.

"You are strong, in respect to you might I will fight you with my full strength, Now know the might of Gloom!"

She said as she begun throwing swords into the air one after another. Darknym didn't know what

sort of attack that was but when the first falling sword cut through his skin he understood that

things were becoming a bit serious, he had probably encountered some boss Npc.

He cast heal but the bleeding wouldn't stop, he teleported on top of the first blade and

waited for the sword rain to pass but two or three swords fell towards his location making

it crystal clear that it was a homing attack.

Darknym was a little panicked at first but now he simply cast the elemental barrier skill.

The swords could do nothing but bounce off the barrier chipping off a bit of it's durability.

Darknym just stood and begun chanting a spells, in just a minute 100 swords, a high elf and a

green giant were pined to the ground.

It was an area Gravity spell, it only worked for a few seconds normally but his augmented spell worked for a minute, costing him tons of magic power in the process.

Gloom the gigantic half-ork looked at him helplessly pined to the ground walking towards her.

He passed her head and went behind her, she didn't know what he was going about but she would have preferred

if he had just stabbed her in the back instead of going for her ass.

Darknym walked slowly due to the spell affecting him as well, he took of her panties or some sort of leather thing

that covered her private parts. Her asshole was large enough for his hand to enter, he was a bit confused

as to how to fuck a giant until he remembered he could morph into a one.

Gloom felt strange, the spell was lifted but she was a bit reluctant to stand up,

as they were having sex in the middle of an orkish city, anyone who tried to peep on them was burned into a crisp

by the one raping her. In reality it was hard for her to find a man her own size.

A message popped up in front of Darknym

-Do you want to have a child with Gloom-

In his rush he just pressed "Yes"

-Your request has been denied by your partner Gloom-

Darknym didn't care about the windows, he felt great raping the virgin Gloom who cried in a sexy voice,

one of her tits had a ring pieced through her now hardened nipple.

He bit it gently, his tongue playing with the ring, as he pushed her up and down.

An hour must have passed until he was exhausted, he could have just revitalized himself but he

was also getting bored, he had fulfilled his wild instincts and whispered to her ear softly.

"I might visit you again, my name is Darknym"

He teleported both her and himself, Himself back to his Tower while her somewhere with a river

nearby, to have a nice bath before putting on her armor once more.

In the now empty square DKing appeared, as he had just regained consciousness.

He saw the lady director's corpse, or more like a squashed splat of meat on the ground.

He recognized the pattern of the dress that was now full of blood.

He roared into the sky in fury and ate a shoe on his head.

"How dare you losing to a level 100player, I will have you train till your fat belly disappears"

The two of them from then on begun a new event in the Orkish mountains called the

Dungeon frenzy of DK guild.

The players were happy that the crazy wizard had left, some said they took a glimpse of him fucking Gloom before

dying from a fireball.

They couldn't hear her moans because Darknym had set a sound barrier, only he heard her delicious sexual tweets.

Truth was Darknym wanted to take her with him but he knew that bosses were a troublesome existence in Allastar

and boss Npcs even more.

Thus he ended his raid at the Orkish city with a bodycount of 610 female players, 148 male players, 100 ork guards,

one DKing and one Administators' director.

One day later there were rumors of seeing Darknym raiding a human village in Anchora but there was

no massacre and he only took one person from the village, the most beautiful girl of the village Adelaida.

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Anchora

A man with the build of an ork came forth to the throne where Mervin the Emperor of the humans of Anchora stood.

"It seems that dark times have come once more, an evil mage has been wrecking havoc in the

orkish mountains and now has reached our lands will you just sit on the throne and do nothing as your people suffer

or will you lift your glorious sword once more in defense of the weak and defenseless"

He said with disdain in his voice.

"Leave it to the Adventurers you nurture, It's not even a threat, making the abduction of one person into a matter

of life and death, that's so Unlike you Vincent"

The giant of a man formed a fist and left the castle full of anger.

The few players who were present were surprised, cause a new event was unfolding before their

eyes, there hasn't been an event for a year after TOBO's disappearance and now the gears were moving

once more and all deep inside knew who that mage was.

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Magic Isle

At the Council of mages another event took place, all mages of the council, 500level and up,

were called upon to join the council.

An old man appeared in the chair of the Archmage, He was the legendary Archmage whose

name was forgotten with time, one of the three godlike Npc mages of Allastar, the other two being Elzix the

Wise and "The Warlock".

Elzix was the leader of the order of the Dragon knights and the Warlock had long abandoned the matters of

the common mortals.

They were supposed to be friends or even something like classmates in magic even before the Archmage

created the Council of Mages.

"Silence!"

The Archmage said and his voice blew winds threw the entire gathering room where the 1200 members of

the council of mages sat, amongst the farthest seats from the Archmage, sat the only two player members of the

council, who had two of the lowest places in the council.

Loki and Archonarch, were really surprised taking a call from the council, the last time they had one was when

TOBO had destroyed a mage guild building killing 320 mages who lived inside or the other time when TOBO

attacked the Mage's council itself only to be defeated by the first Npc Council mage who reached the door,

after having killed at least 2000 mages earlier calling them easy XP and farming mobs.

"Today I have summoned you here on a special quest, one specific mage after terrorizing

the accursed Orkish mounts set his sight on Anchora, we don't know what his plans are

but he has begun abducting people from villages well one village for now but our

farseers say that he will not stop at one, I want you to recruit Adventurer mages to

stop him, Loki and Archonarch you have can now share your quest, called stop the mad Mage"

"Can we change it to Pervert mage, please?"

Asked Loki with a smile on his face, thinking it would be a piece of cake.

"Alright the mission 'stop the Pervert mage' will begin when all of you are out of this

room, your target is to bring the upstart mage to the council's prison dead or alive,

but dead only if four hours haven't passed yet"

Four hours was the the time until a PKer's corpse disappears.

The mages begun talking amongst themselves as the Archmage left the room.

"Easy XP"

Said loki with a smile.

"Well I don't know last time I saw the Archmage worried I died by TOBO twenty times after being

revived and killed with only one strike"

"Are you afraid of a noob mage, that can only teleport, a pity I cannot go to Anchora since

They hate the undead there but you have a wonderful opportunity"

"I don't know, I will probably wait until he leaves Anchora and goes raid your undead

kingdom, it shouldn't take long since he seems to travel all around the world"

"I hope so, if I can complete the quest I might rise another seat in the council"

Archonarch's eyes glittered with life as he heard his words, In truth there were

two ways to rise in the council, one was to become more powerful than the monster

geezers who sat at the front seats, the other was Influence, by completing

dangerous quests on could gain recognition by the council which was as Important as

being powerful, the third was Influence but it had 100% to do with Money and

bribery so it was 100% Impossible for a normal player to do since one mishap and

you might be kicked out of the council for bribery, having to pass the lengthy

arena of magic, not that it was hard but it was time consuming, Loki had

already done it three times, while Archonach twenty two, he had even

reached tenth seat from the Archmage. Which is around the middle of the

council.

Loki had a wicked smile on his face after seeing Archonarch leave, he wanted to use him to see what

spells the noob knows so that he can counter him when he reaches the Undead kingdom since he

knew full well that long range teleportation and mass teleportation were two of the most

Mp consuming spells.

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Anchora

There was a third place that had a special event on, It was the Temple of Light in

Anchora where The Angel of light in person came out of her room shocked by an event

that took place that day.

She was a winged woman, they were a nomadic tribe of humans that had wings on their

backs, they could fly and had Innate healing powers but her powers were also those of light.

"The god of light has spoken to me, You must all steed yourselves, the order of light must send it's knights once more,

an evil sorcerer is abducting virgins to satisfy his vile desires"

A wave of Npc and player knights were now flowing out from the temple gearing up

to leave for any village or town nearby.

Truth was she saw something she didn't like through future sight, although she was Immortal,

she foresaw her own raping, by the hands of the vile mage.

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Darknym POV

Darknym was still dormant to the developments that had occurred throughout the world that day as he was

currently sleeping, he had been asked to work for half a month. Which was perfect by his regards,

although he had disregarded his characters in Destros and Altgaia the past few days but Allastar had a deadline,

of five and a half months so he didn't mind it so much.

At the station he saw reports on a crazy goose hunt in Anchora, thousands of players have been

gathering in villages to prevent further abductions from the perverted mage.

He laughed so hard that day that the TV workers were a little interested,

did he by some coincidence know something they didn't but they all stopped after they saw that

the words on the screen were upside down.

As nothing happened before he returned home it was a rather boring show, although the hunt the

pervert mage mission from the mage council did disturb him, a little.

He logged in and was sitting on his throne when Lightnym arrived.

"I will be going to the Mage council to broaden my horizons in magic, I hope you could keep

Prometheus and Ivianne safe for me, it will only take a month or two in real world time"

"Whatever just tell them to stay in the guest rooms like they did before"

"I hoped you would say that, you see Ivianne hates your palace and wants a place of her own,

which Prometheus can't offer because he spent most of his money on stupid staff for his collection"

"Is that all here take a billion and tell him he owes you a billion"

"Well a billion might not be enough"

"Does she wants to buy a mountain?"

"Exactly"

Darknym laughed and gave him the money.

"I think I will have to visit the casino sometime soon, do you think making a gambling addict clone would be a good Idea?"

"Bad"

Lightnym answered

"I thought so"

He said and they both laughed.

Darknym teleported himself to Anchora and waited for a half an hour for his Mp to refill,

he didn't wish to be weak when fighting with the "Hunters of the pervert mage".

There were three villages nearby and a town, he just walked through the villages as if nothing

happened and saw a the beautiful Inn keeper in his last stop the town of Nirsteed,

his face was that of some guy he saw in Drogan due to the powers of the mask.

The tavern was full of people and in front of all their surprised faces he teleported the Innkeeper

away from the tavern and into his own tower.

A wave of angry adventurers charged at him only to freeze in action, he passed a beautiful swordswoman

who had no name floating on over her head and asked

"Are you a player?"

she could only gulp as he teleported her to his tower,

The players had already send hundreds of chats to their groups and other hunters, in the neerby villages,

but first appeared three groups of mages.

After clearing the tavern of everyone, he went outside and saw them, three groups of ten mages.

For his good luck, Archonarch was not among them. He teleported near the most beautiful female of the

group a witch,

"Are you a player?"

he asked but before getting a clear answer he was bombarded with at least a hundred spells.

"So are you a player or not?"

He asked her again unfazed and unscratched by the magical onslaught.

"Dispel!"

Someone shouted and they all cast dispel on him.

"Silence"

Thirsha, as her name tag was now visible, said and they all cast the silence spell

at him with great coordination.

They were all now laughing at the seemingly powerless mage, but to Darknym it was a bit

of a dissapointment since Thirsha's name appeared above her head.

Darknym waved his hands and all thirty of the now gathered mages burst in hellfire.

Some survived a few seconds before their elemental shield melted, another had cast

fire shield on himself but hellfire still got him after the a short duration of thirty seconds.

Only Thirsha was left in front of him with her eyes wide open and her mouth in a sexy :0.

"By the way do you know where I can find beautiful Npcs, the countryside is so much lacking in this game"

Thrisha recollected herself and begun chanting some spell.

With a bziu! sound a pop up appeared in front of her and in horror she saw the message.

-Your spell casting has been disrupted by Darknym-

"Don't be afraid I don't make clones anymore I have even dispelled the four I had in my Dungeon"

Thrisha begun chanting once more, but in horror the same message appeared again and

again, till her Mp was all drained.

"Well thanks for helping me grind that skill a bit, although it will take ages to master"

She was about to ask him what level he was but sounds of mounts rushing and the white

knights of the order of light were approaching and approaching and approaching.

She could see Darknym laugh as he had somehow somewhere in between an eye blink cast a

slowing spell upon the knights' horses.

"Dispel"

The knights shouted but the dispels didn't work at all, the enchantments were too strong

for them to crush.

"Guys, why don't you dismount?"

Darknym said with a smile on his face.

The knights dismounted, Thrisha wanted to shout for them to retreat and regroup but

Darknym touched her lips in a shooing notion.

"Guys if you tell me where the most beautiful Npc girls are I will leave you alive and even

give one hundred gold to each of you"

The knights laughed and charged at him with their blades that just crushed on his passive

elemental shield.

"Guys I'm a master mage, you have to at least use mastered skills to do some damage to my

shield like DKing had done"

Darknym just by tapping lightly the closest knight send him flying into a nearby building.

He hadn't died but he had lost half of his Hp.

"Now can we talk?"

Darknym said with a smile on his face.

Four of the Npc knights charged without fear and brave beyond comparison and died instantly by a chain

lightning spell. The three remaining player knights were not affected by

the lightning as if it was planed to stop before hitting them.

"Now the five of us will play a game, each one of you will have to tell one beautiful Npc they know about,

if you don't I will kill you if you do I will give you ten gold"

"Wasn't it 100 a moment ago?"

"Had you spoken a moment ago it would have been 100, because of the risks involved due to the Npc knight,

or let's make another deal speak two names and I will raise it by 10gold or resurrect one of the dead Npcs

for you, with each name spoken, deal?"

"Can he do that?"

"How should I know I'm only a trainee in magic"

"Oi you the girl in the robe can mages bring back the dead?"

"There is a spell like that but it's an ultimate spell that costs ton of Mp, but seeing how he can do other

impossible stuff I would say, he can"

"Okay deal, first is the Angel of light in the temple of light, she is the most beautiful girl

and our Idol, but don't get too many Ideas she is an Immortal Npc with boss like magic"

"What do you want gold or a resurrection?"

"I want the five knights back, I know they are just Npcs but two of them were my companions,

you know how hard it is to train them"

"just say another three names and locations and I will resurrect them all together"

"The resurrection first"

"Whatever"

Darknym with one multicast resurrected all four of the knights, leaving the players shocked.

"Can you do that more than one times?"

Asked a knight

"Where did you find the spell?"

Asked Thirsha

"I can have them die again and again resurrect them but what is that to you, as for where I found it,

I won it in a gambling den"

"Now the names please, I have little time before logging out since I have work tomorrow"

"The princess is pretty but she is a witch that can hypnotize you to do her bidding"

"Verial the dancing merchant is also a beauty,I saw her once when I traveled to Ashrad"

"Two names to go, Verial already works for me, haven't you watched TV"

They had their mouths open but still one managed to talk, it was Thirsha.

"At the mage guild my teacher Aria is the most beloved Idol of the magical Academy of the council"

"One to go"

"I have heard that some noble named Owen Ragecliff has the most beautiful Npc as his wife"

Said a knight.

"Nah, Effir Lioneye's wife is more beautiful"

"What are you saying Wolf Macquise's daughter is the most beautiful"

"And where I can find any of these, ladies"

"Well they all live in the capital Megapolis of Anchora"

"Here's 400 gold, for you make sure to divide it equally, I hope we don't meet in another stupid errand by

the hot angel of light, although if you stay in your temple I'm sure we will meet again,

I will ask an acquaintance, if that Aria is as beautiful as you say I might give a visit to the mage council"

Darknym logged out knowing that he will probably appear in his tower tomorrow.

He also entered Destos for the last one hour before falling to sleep.

"That idiot thinks he can enter and leave the temple of light what an Idiot"

said the knight

"Wait till he sees Aria of the magic academy, she's an old lady without teeth"

Said Thirsha

"Didn't he say he had an Acquaintance in the mage guild, so he won't even visit your council of mages"

Thirsha pouted a little but then laughed seeing a group of mages and soldiers arriving.

As well as Archonarch on some sort of magical motorcycle.

"How come you are all so late?"

"Late, it's only been half an hour after we were informed of his location"

"How come you mages don't all teleport like him"

A knight asked somewhat puzzled.

"Other than it being a difficult spell to cast, it also drain Mp per distance so if we travel like that,

do you think we will have enough Mp to capture him"

Said Archonarch

"It doesn't matter, we know where he will appear next, he will come to our temple in an attempt

to abduct our angel, so all knights of the order full speed to the temple"

The knight said with a smile on his face as they returned to their mounts that still awaited them.

"But there are three more targets he's after"

Shouted Thirsha in dismay

All had already left and only Archonarch with his bike waited for her.

"Do you maybe need a lift?"

"Sure, a lift to the capital city"

She said as she mounted his strange artifact motorcycle.