《Fighting God》Clarification
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A lot of the readers have asked about why the MC is so naive even though he had retained his memories and thus his experiences from the previous world. The MC, as vaguely stated in the prologue, trained all his life to become the strongest. A muscle for brains kind of idiot if you will. That meant no social interaction with other people except fighting. So no friends, no family, no lover. That's why even though he retained his memories, he does not have enough experience. So think mature mentality + naive/inexperienced outlook on life and other people. Besides...why must I follow the trend of "smart, cunning MC who retained his past memories so he won't suffer any setback or get tricked by people in present world"?
The stuff I'm writing is plain obvious to the readers because I make it so, but it is not obvious to the characters especially when they are children...innocent...too trusting...children. Would an innocent, naive, overly trusting child suspect why the Saintess would only go to the Slave Market to rescue children? No, they won't even acknowledge that fact because they are blinded by how kind the Saintess is treating them. I may lose some followers because my story is like this and it may continue on like this but oh well. I'm writing because I have a story in my mind that I want to get out.
If you have any other questions, post it in the comments below.
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