《Broken System》Unlucky yet Lucky?!
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A fat and ugly teenage man is walking down a street in the afternoon, Seemingly on his way home from school. This man is Jack Bolard, An 18 year old highschool senior. People are shying away from him on the street, But he is already used to this. The sky is clear and sunny, Yet overhead a crack of lightning strikes down and happens to hit Jack straight on and he blacks out. When Jack comes to, He is in a Hospital, Yet that is not all. Infront of him is a screen.
Congratulations To The Host For Obtaining A System.
Jack is confusedly staring at the screen infront of his eyes thinking he is losing his mind yet he thinks it is similar to the games and manga he reads so he decides to think:Status
-Status
Name:Jack Bolard
Gender: Male
Level;1(100 xp to level up)
Health: 50/50(0.5 Regen/Minute)
Mana: 15/15(0.5 Regen/Minute)
Strength: 5
Speed: 3
Dexterity: 3
Wisdom: 5
Intelligence: 4
Charm: -10
Weight: 292.6
Height: 5" 7'
Skill List: N/A
Stat Points: 0
Credits: 0
Jack looks at the screen shocked, thinking 'What is this? Does this have something to do with the lightning that hit me?'Then another screen pops up infront of him:
Congratulations Host For Figuring Out How To Open The Status Screen, Host Is Now Able To Use The SHOP Tab
Jack then sees another section on his status labelled Shop and opens it bringing up multiple types of shops.
-Item Shop
-Skill Shop
-Misc Shop
'All of this is just so weird, Why did this happen to me..' Is what jack was thinking at that moment, Then he decides to look at the different types of shops to see what is in them.
-Item Shop - Shirt: 5 Credits, Pants:5 Credits,jacket:10 Credits,Socks:3 Credits,Underwear:5 Credits,Knife:7 Credits,Fingerless Gloves:7 Credits, Military Knife:20 Credits,Military Gloves:15 Credits, Five Seven Pistol:55 Credits, 5x7.28mm Ammo: 10 Credits per Clip,Sword:45 Credits,Spear:45 Credits,Health Potion:15 Credits,Mana Potion:15 Credits, Antidote:30 Credits...
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Jack found that the item system has a lot of random stuff in it, From clothing to weapons to ammo and so on.'So the Item shop has a wide variety of items to purchase for these credits i guess' then Jack decides to check out the Skill list to see what kinds of skills he can buy.
-Skill Shop - Martial Arts(Beginner): 25 Credits, Martial Arts(Intermediate): 50 Credits, Martial Arts(Advanced): 75 Credits, Sword Mastery:30 Credits, Knife Mastery:25 Credits,Spear Mastery:30 Credits, Gun Mastery:40 Credits,Hand to Hand Mastery:35 Credits, Mana Control:50 Credits, Mana Manipulation:55 Credits, Mana Arrow:20 Credits, Fire Magic:60 Credits,Water Magic:60 Credits,Earth Magic: 60 Credits,Wind Magic:60 Credits, Lightning Magic:65 Credits,Ice Magic:50 Credits,Healing Magic:70 Credits,Teleportation Magic:150 Credits,Inventory:250 Credits, Fireball:20 Credits, Fire Spear:25 Credits, Fire Wall:25 Credits,Waterball:20 Credits, Water Arrow:25 Credits,Water Wall:30 Credits,Wind Cutter:25 Credits, Wind Wall;25 Credits,Wind Arrow:20 Credits,Earth wall:20 Credits,Earth Spikes:35 Credits,Earth Arrow:25 Credits,Lightning Arrow:20 Credits, Lightning Spear:35 Credits,Lightning Maelstorm:90 Credits,Ice Arrow:20 Credits,Ice wall:30 Credits,Ice Path:20 credits,Ice Blizzard:80 Credits,Heal:35 Credits,High Heal:50 Credits, Area Heal:120 Credits,Cure Disease:75 Credits,Mana Regeneration:80 Credits,Health Regenation:80 Credits, Increased Smell:10 Credits, Increased Hearing:10 Credits, Increased Taste:10 Credits, Increased Touch:10 Credits,Increased Sight:10 Credits.
Jack nearly jumps from how many skills he sees.'Magic? I get MAGIC?! Just what is this system??'jack is confused yet happy that he is the one who got this system, He can get so many things from it even Magic is usable with it! He then remembers that there is one last Shop and looks at it.
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- Misc Shop - $100 - 10 Credits, $1000:100 Credits,$10000:1000 Credits,Travel To World Of Host Choice:25000 Credits.
'OKAY WHAT?! Putting off the fact i can get money, I can GO TO WHATEVER WORLD I WANT?!?!?' Jack is freaking out to the fact he can go to whatever world he chooses aslong as he has the Credits for it. Jack notices it is now night and just lays back down and passes out.
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