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RIP to Sildrean, I lost my password for this account and could now only post with my laptop, which convienetly has a large amount of malware that I can't get rid of, I can't get a new password either since I forgot my password for my email.
Well, I'll figure it out. In the meantime, all this stuff for all of you.
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Firstly, the guy, yes the one that tortured my poor MC. Hes dead, its obvious. More information will come about him in the future chapters after the introduction of a new character. Let's sit tight and wait.
Secondly, there's quite a LOT of foreshadowing, anyone noticed any? Its about......ya know......people......COUGH COUGH.
Thirdly, character development about those around the MC. One thing I must highlight is that our main character(s?) does not care. They don't bother to analyze the surrounding people with their currently personalities, though there's always the exception of Noctus.
Fourthly, I have some situations thought out regarding the addition of more personalities, would you all prefer personalities split off from the original personalities in the body, (NOT INCLUDING IRIS SHES PERFECTLY SANE.......well to a certain extend?), or would an entirely different character? I'm having this question here so as to limit myself to a certain number, in case it gets too confusing.
Lastly, the title. This story was written on a whim so.......... The title was something I made within seconds. Any suggestions? I would love to think of a title myself but I'm bad at naming.
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