《Savior University》Explanations for Chapter 2 and Stuff like that
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So, recently, a few people have been telling me how 'it's stupid how Akira didn't fight back against Akio during chapter 2'.
Here's a simple flashback to remind everyone something.
[Akio pulled his right hand and clenched it as if he was holding something.
Suddenly, a strong gust of wind gathered through his hand.
"Wait, holy shit. What the fuck is that?"
Once he gathered enough wind, it turned into a spinning ball.
Akio, who had a serious look on his face suddenly glared at Akira and charged at him.
"Akio, wait. What are you-"
Akio lunged at Akira with the ball of strong wind in his hands.
Noticing that he won't stop, Akira jumped out of the area he was standing on and ran near the stairway.
The windball in Akio's hand was thrown by him while lunging, but was dodged by Akira.
The ball of wind hit the wooden floor.
*PHWOOOSSHHHH!*
Akio's strike made a large deep hole in the floor, destroying even the soil below it.]
Akio made a large hole on the floor.
Akira could fight with his fists, but if he did, it'd be like, fighting a tank with a peashooter.
He'd be really stupid if he fought a tank head on.
["What? Want to punch me back for doing all that?", said Akio provoking Akira.
*BAM!*
Suddenly, Akira's fist hit Akio.]
Akira isn't a saint. He was still pissed at Akio and punched him back for doing all that.
He couldn't keep being angry at him though, since he's his brother and he did it because he believed in Akira.
(Note: Akira isn't known to be the chosen one. He was tested by Akio and Kana because he had a bad reputation. People knew him as a delinquent who started fights with punks. Akio volunteered to test him because he believed in Akira and wanted to test him to his very limits.)
I have a few plot holes in my story I noticed and these are the kind of stuff that I might want people to complain on, but now, this is it. This is the explanation for the chapter. I hope this clears it all up.
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