《Invincible in other world》Chapter - 9 : The naked meeting
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It had already been an hour since i fell in this place. I am standing nude near the lake. My hand is already regenerated. I don’t even know where i am right now. I found this lady here but she passed out earlier. It was really awkward. When i was talking to her. She suddenly screamed and lost her footing. She fell down in lake. Although, i brought her out of the lake, i am still wondering on what to do now.
It is a really amazing scene. One guy and one girl completely naked near a dead dragon. I considered putting her clothes on her myself. It seems she was here to take a bath. She left her clothes on a horse. It was probably her horse. The horse was tied to tree with a rope. I was afraid she might catch a cold. So i took the clothes and was wondering on how to put them on her.
By the way, she is extreme beauty, her blond hair, white skin and perfectly shaped body gave her a princess aura. She also has big breasts, it’s hard to keep my eyes away from them.
“Alright..let’s do this..” I resolved myself.
I lift her head a little and try to put her bra on her. My breathing became harder as my hand touched her breast.
“Th-this is just because i am af-afraid ..that sh-she might catch a cold..That’s right..that is all to it.” I was trying to fool myself really hard.
At that moment she woke and looked at me.
“ummm.. good morning..”
“eh…”
She reacted in the way any women would react if they find random strange naked man grabbing their breast when they wake up. First there was silence and then i covered my ears.
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“KYAAAAAA..wh-what...eh why am i naked?..Kyaaa...a dragon….ah he is dead...I remembered..yo-you..came out of the dragon...Wh-what are you?...What were you doing to me?”
“calm down..let me explain this.”
“noooo….. don’t come near me..”
It looks like she is not going to listen to me. So i just let her scream for while. After some 10 to 15 minutes. She looked towards me and said.
“umm..excuse me.. i am sorry for screaming at you..”
“It’s fine. Are you alright now?”
“Yes, also ca-can i get my clothes back.”
“oh yes..there you go…”
I give her clothes back. She takes them and goes behind a tree to wear them. She comes out after while. From there on i explained to her the current situation. I told her that i took dragon elimination quest and how i killed the dragon and also why was i grabbing her breast? I didn't tell her about my ability, i only said that i have a special ability.
First she did not believe me but she realized that there was no other answer to explain this situation. She thought to go with it for now. I realized that she is still suspicious about how can a single person can kill a dragon. But it was fine as long as she didn't delve further in it.
By the way, all this time we talked while i was behind a tree. I am naked and i don’t have any spare clothes. First she kept looking over my thing and it made my thing hard, even i really didn't wanted to show her my erect penis. So i decided to talk while i am covering myself by a tree.
“masterrrrr………”
“eh..Aria..”
Aria came and as soon as she saw me, she jumped right into my arms. She kissed me on my lips. Lisa who came around to see what is going on, found me and Aria locking their lips with each other. She blushed as she covered her eyes with her hands. Well she was still peaking from between the gaps of her fingers.
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“Aria..how did you get here? How did you find me?”
“ah...that is because of my ability.”
What she has a ability too. I was surprised by the sudden revelation. Aria who noticed my look, replied happily. She still didn't let me go though.
“I will tell you later..When we get back to the inn.”
“ok..then”
Then Aria noticed Lisa.
“ah..you are..”
“Aria, this is Lisa, i met her here when the dragon fell down.”
“and Lisa… this is Aria..my.” Aria interrupted me.
“Hello..there i am Aria..Master Den’s slave.”
“eh slave..like master and slave..wh-what is this relationship?..so immoral…even at night..such animalistic behavior..ah..” Lisa went to her dream world.
“Master, what happened to her?”
“Don’t worry. She’ll get back in a minute.”
“ah..ok.”
After that, we waited until Lisa came back from her fantasies.
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Author’s Note : I apologize for cutting this chapter short. I want some advice from my readers.
Alright, first let me tell you a little side story of my own. When i was thinking of this fiction i wasn't sure on how to make the MC disappear from the world.I had to make up something for the prologue. Since, i didn't care much about it, i ended up writing a cliche story of truck hitting the guy.But now i think about, i feel i should change the prologue to a better one because i think it is turning away the readers from the rest of the series.
1. Should i change the prologue? ( Don’t worry. There will be no effect on any other chapters or the rest of the story)
Second, I always liked stories to be a little fast paced. I didn't like it when authors put too much work on detailing every aspect of the story and telling about every bit of it. I wrote my story at a little fast pace. But this is ending up leaving plot holes. Some of my readers told me about it would also lead to limitation of the character’s growth. As you can see this chapter should have been ended in scenario where Den, Aria and Lisa chat casually at a restaurant. Them coming out of the forest shouldn't have taken more than half the lines of the current chapter. But i slowed down the pace with this one to explain things in more detail.
2. Should i keep my normal pace? or slow down and put more details in the chapters?
Anyway, please leave your answer and as always, Thanks for reading up till now. I am really grateful for all the support.
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