When I got to the training center I asked the present Jedi through writing to there were a few people. He allowed it. They were training with their fists. I got distracted watching them for a while. They were good. One of them notices me watching them. He a player.

“you want to try?”

I nod my head as confirmation. I’m not going to brag. But am pretty amazing bare handed. Krav maga is the most effective for me.

We enter a circle and we take our stances. He moves first really fast. Probably force enhancement. Of course because of battle precog I get out of the way in time. but just barely. He was really fast. Also I think my battle precog is acting up cause that definitely wasn’t three seconds.

“wow that was a great dodge. None of these people can do that.”

He immediately goes for a punch but I see it coming and this time I’m prepared. I quickly bend back while doing a kick. It hits… his hand. He blocked it. Damn it he’s good. He’s aiming for a trip with his leg and I can’t dodge it is he is grasping my other leg. I try to kick him in the face. He grabs that one too. And then I see him throwing me using precog one second before it happens. It was a good throw too. Not too close as to have me counter attack. Not too far so he can get close and pummel in the ground. Before I hit the ground I use the force to make myself land right. Then a guy was yelling behind me.

“damn it you’re not supposed to use the force in the circle.”

He was defiantly an npc. I think in his forties. He had one arm which was weird cause in this world there were tons of mechanical prosthetics. All of this I noticed but the first thing I asked myself was when then the hell did he get behind me.

The guy who I was fighting intervenes on my behalf.

“ I don’t think he knew the rules master Zola so it’s okay.”

“is that so” he stared at me for a while. My battle precog went haywire it felt like I was going to get everywhere except my back I immediately tried to go backwards. But didn’t think I’d make it in time. I braced for the hit. But it didn’t happen.

“so he has it to.” He seemed like he was thinking.

i was getting up when he asked

“hey kid, do you want to learn from me.”

I nodded so hard I looked like a bobble head.

“ do you have any idea what you want to learn?”

Of course I had ideas. I did my research. I write down gand martial arts.

“ ooh hoo hoo what a leap. You sure you want to learn that?”

I nodded very heavily again.

“alright then though I don’t know if you’ll be suited for it.”

The guy I fought was being inquisitive and asked.

“what are gand martial arts.”

“ it’s definitely not for you. Stick to echani it’s perfect for you”

While they were talking I search for his lightsaber. He really doesn’t have one. He notices and say’s

“ looking for the lightsaber every Jedi should have. You’re not going to find it.”

I was confused doesn’t lightsaber=Jedi. He noticed my confused look and said.

“ I am part of a very small group of the Jedi guardians called a Force Warrior. Typically we don’t use lightsabers unless there is a door to open.” He said it with a sick smile.

I wrote down the question “how did you feint using the force”

He looked surprised at my question.

“surprised you asked that so quickly. Took young Barak here took 1 week to ask that question and the answer is well it’s because clinically I’m insane.”

I looked at him if he was joking.

“no I’m not kidding. To me I was thinking about killing you with all the passion in my heart. Then decided never mind. The force acts strangely around insane people with high a midi-chlorian count. A condition only unique to me.”

He paused for a second considering something

“anyway come here tomorrow at sunset for training. I’ll tell your teachers.ohh silly me I forgot to ask you for your name”

I wrote down kor and all of them left soon after.

I was thinking as to why my battle precog was acting up then I saw looked at the skill again

Battle Precognition

Rank SSS

All the greatest Jedi and sith have had this skill

-You see and feel the apparition of your enemies movement up to 3 seconds ahead of the corporeal

-you can sense when a battle is near

-for people stronger than you it is harder to see farther ahead

-unknown

I wonder what the last unknown is.

I completely forgot what I was here to do. I go into my private room. And ignite my lightsaber’s and try to use the unique force technique. The problem is that I don’t feel the difference. I go outside and reignite them. No one was sweating or freezing. Good job me. i was thinking that i should i was done for the day I go to my room as that’s the only place I can log out. i lie on the bed and open the menu.

Before I log out everything goes black. And one man and one woman were showing. I think it was a force vision. The guy speaks first. He had a sickly voice

“Darth wretches are all of the plans ready.”

‘”yes darth anguish. We will commence our attack on Coruscant in three weeks.”

“any failure on your part will be met with unpleasant consequences.”

“In this I will be successful or die.”

“Your implying there was any other option my young apprentice.”

She looked afraid then.

“good. Be afraid. Fear gives you power.”

He coughs blood for a while for a while and then resumes.

“Do not fail. this will be my legacy.”

After that the vision ended and I was back in my room.

I go to the council room as quickly as I can. And bang on the door with both my hands very fast. And they open the door to see me.

“We are a bit busy now.”

A familiar voice calls out

“Kor is that you”

It was Zola.

I nod.

“Let him in wolam.”

He did so if a bit sour about it. He looked like a very bitter man

“What do you need kor.”

I equiped my note pad and started writing down “I had a dream about… ”

Wolam then intervened

“Ohm come on! Are you serious? Go tell your supervisor.” Then Zola coolly said

“Shut-up. Go ahead and continue kor.”

“a talk on the subject of an attack on Coruscant led by darth anguish and his apprentice darth wretches in three weeks. This dream felt incredibly real so I felt I had to tell you.”

Both of them were silent for a while.

“You see what happens when you listen wolam.”

He pressed a button on his seat that called up all the masters of the council available in the forms of holograms. Wolam told me to leave now. As I was leaving I head Zola saying.

“Ladies and gentleman we have a problem...

understanding of the Jedi code has increased to 55%

I went to my room and logged out to sleep.

The next day I logged in and immediately after there was a knock on my room. I opened the door and found a Jedi in front of it.

“I have to take you to the council. Come with me.”

I equip my Padawan robes and follow him. When we were at the door he opened it for me and stayed outside.

12 of the thirteen council members were present either in person or hologram. I was walking closer when Zola talked to me.

“Hi kor. Sorry for the inconvenience but my friends here don’t believe you. Do you think you can identify him if you saw him?”

I nodded

“Good.”

A few holograms of sith lords were present. I saw the man I was looking for but he looked different. More healthy.

I point at him. And everyone faces turned sour.

Wolam even openly swore. He then told me

“You can leave now.”

I equipped my notepad and started writing again.

Wolam got annoyed watching me write.

“I said you can leave now”

Zola gave him a huge glare saying

“Continue on kor.”

I wrote down “he looked very sick. He was coughing blood.”

“Damn wolam you are on fire lately”

Wolam looked impassive.

Zola continued speaking

“Sorry for wasting your time kor. Continue with your studies. And I expect to see you later tonight.”

I continue on most of the day fine until lightsaber practice. I was hitting my partner very quickly when

Shii Cho form

- Understanding 50%

- Application 50%

When that happened another alert came

Lightsaber combat affinity

- Allows you to move your lightsaber more efficiently through the practiced forms of

· Shii Cho form

- Allows you to use other forms together with practiced forms for a more complete martial prowess

- Does not affect lightsaber damage as it is already ridiculously high

After that practicing it became a lot easier for me.

I waited at the training center for what was to be my first martial arts lesson. And surprisingly nobody came but Zola and Barak.

“Sorry we’re so few. I asked everybody to stay as this knowledge is not for the people who aren’t interested in the path.”

I write down “they weren’t your disciples?”

“goodness no. those are the people the council has dropped me with to explain the effects of using lightsabers irresponsibly. Barak here is my only disciple. And you might be. Anyway let’s get started. Barak go through your forms.”

Barak does so curious as to what he would show me.

“Alright kor I want you to know I only know two moves. But they are incredible. I want you to try to emulate this.”

He showed me he his hand. And then he tried to hit me but it passed through me. no wonder my battle precog didn’t act.

I try to get the feeling right and then.

you have acquired the force power “Phase”

- A Hidden Force Power

- The only way to gain this skill is luck of the draw in the beginning of your life or through teaching. With teaching there is a 30% chance you would get the skill.

- As you have the title “Monster” you had a 90% chance to get the skill

- Allows you to go through solid objects

- You can now touch the incorporeal(this can be good and bad)

- Takes an incredible amount of force power.

Holy fucking crap. I put my arm through the wall in front of us. then i wiggle it around happily.

“Great work. this is needed in the move in piercing touch.”

He demonstrated by punching the wall with virtually no resistance then pulling it out.

“it’s not the way the findsmen do it but effective nonetheless. What you have to do is phase through the body and then exert a force shield out of your limb immediately. ”

I write down “how do you make a force shield?”

“Well you have to imagine armor around the body but for thus move it needs to push out from your body. The reason why is unclear but using phase and force shield together creates a very destructive blow.”

I imagine something pushing out of my body and then I fly up and land on my butt.

“Don’t try everything at once.try only your arm for know.”

I first phase through the wall than punch outwards from my arm using the force and

BOOOMM!

It was a massive crater in the wall.

you have just learned “Piercing Touch”

- A powerful punch originally made by findsman remade by Jedi grandmaster Zola using the force

- Can destroy most metals and materials.

“You really should work on your control. Try some of faalo cadences. Any way moving on to the second technique Striking Mist this is a technique to employ when you don’t want to be seen before attacking. And again I don’t know if you’ll have the skill to do it or not.”

Barak was getting itchy

“Why can’t I try these moves.”

“You can’t know because you’re too weak in force power. The punch alone would drain you completely”

He stayed silent after that though he looked angry.

“Watch me closely and try to emulate what I am doing.”

He started to disappear slowly until he was completely gone. The force around him was moving very smoothly like a force shield of many blankets.

I try to emulate the feeling onto myself and

you have learned the force power “force cloak”

- A Hidden Force Power

- The only way to gain this skill is luck of the draw in the beginning of your life or through teaching. With teaching there is a 20% chance you would get the skill.

- As you have the title “Monster” you had an 80% chance to get the skill.

- Allows you to hide yourself from sight and sense.

- Beginning stages offer low protection from other Jedi

I'm going nuts when I see this message. I do all sorts of weird motivational movements. If even Zola was giving me weird looks. I stop after a minute of foolishness.

“I got to admit I thought that you couldn’t get this one. You’re a real monster."

"alright the secret to Striking Mist is that you need to use force cloak while using force enhancement to move very fast.

the best place for force enhancement for speed is the the thigh and the ankle."

first i try his version of force enhancement. it's super fast. and i have alot of control. then i do force concealment before i do force enhancement and

you have just learned "Striking Mist"

- a move to strike unseen and quick

- level of concealment depends entirely on level of "Force Cloak"

after i practice both moves for a while zola called us.

"Come closer you to Barak.”

We come close to him

“the next few weeks will probably be dangerous so.

He then handed us bracers that go to our elbow.

“these are supposed to be a graduation present but I can give it a little early considering what’s probably coming”

you have acquired “Songsteel Bracers”

- One of the most strongest materials in the galaxy

- Can deflect lightsaber and blaster attacks

- Is very lightweight

- Has the mark of Zola you will be respected everywhere.

“Barak you have cortisis bracers while young kor here has the songsteel. Who gets what is decided by seniority.”

The fact that I’m still happy should say something about the gifts I have just received. Usually I would kill him and steal those bracers but I’m in a great mood. Besides he might be useful in the future better not to make enemies now when I’m younger.

Before I head back to my room and log off for the day I check the title of the monster.

“The Monster”

Through incredibly quick progression in learning fundamental skills

-you gain the skill battle precognition

-you gain the skill force bellow

-you unsettle your peers

-your chances of gaining new skills rises significantly

-unknown

Excellent.

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i think i'm gonna slow down the power gaining now. he's becoming to op. I'm gonna focus more on story now.

as always if you find any fault in my grammer or lore please tell me. i will try to fix it. :blush: