《Alchemist’s Raft》Raised
Advertisement
The cave was dark when Andrew woke, but lightning illuminated the stone and sand he was lying on. He got up, groaning as pain pounded through his skull. he didn’t remember what had happened, and it was only when he felt his head and found his fingers coming back red that memory came back.
Victoria had hit him. No, she had backstabbed him, done him in when his guard was dropped. Granted, she did it with a rock, but he saw no reason why it wouldn’t still be called a backstab.
Grunting, Andrew pulled himself up from the wet sand. Rain was showering into the opened mouth of the cave, drenching everything, including him.
Where was the wooden door?
That was the only thought left inside Andrew’s mind as the headache continued to pulse through him. He clutched his temples and squeezed, as if he could push the pain out of his ears.
It didn’t work, of course. But Andrew didn’t have the luxury of sitting down and waiting for it to pass. He had to work out where Victoria was, and why there wasn’t anything blocking the cavern entrance.
As lightning strikes across the sky, Andrew’s senses returned.
Of course the door wasn’t there. Victoria had taken it. On her way out of the cave.
She wasn’t here anymore.
Pain took a backseat from fear. Andrew lurched out of the cave, facing the rain head-on as it lashed from the sky.
When Andrew got to the entrance, a deep roll of thunder shook across the sky. He felt the force of the storm through the soles of his feet, shaking into his bones. He felt scared. But not for himself.
Andrew scanned the waves. It was like watching the realm itself rippling from the anger of the gods. Huge waves curled high into the sky, crashing down in explosions of foam and salt. The roar deafened Andrew’s shouts for Victoria.
Advertisement
He had no idea where she would’ve gone. The beach was lost in the curtains of rain, and the stone outcrops hiding the cave were treacherously slick from the tossing waves. It took Andrew all his strength just to cling onto the side of the cavern to keep from being taken into the air. He couldn’t imagine Victoria surviving in this part of the beach.
And then he saw something. Far out in the water, thrown about by the raging storm, was a slab of wood.
Andrew threw himself down the outcrops. Howling winds tore at him from all sides, threatening to steal his footing. Andrew didn’t care. He jumped, leaped, fell down the cliff towards the beach. The rocks dug into his flesh, clobbered bruises all across his body. He kept going. He didn’t stop to think why, only that Victoria’s death would be on his hands alone, if the storm took her.
Andrew’s steps finally faltered. He slipped, and fell into the water.
Beneath the waves, there was no storm. Andrew fought against the current and pushed his head above the foamy surface. He breathed hard, his ears popping from the roar of nature’s wrath. A few yards away, a fork of lightning crashed down from the sky, illuminating the twenty-foot wave as it descended from its precipice. The enormous force swept over his head, and Andrew was deep down again, tumbling through the murky chaos.
Fight it!
Inside his chest, Andrew felt the surge of desperation, of calmness in the panic. His eyes opened, his hands wheeled around the water. He found the surface - that blue, angry thing - and clawed his way towards it.
Breaking free, he sucked in all the air he could. His lungs screamed from cold but he kept taking in breathes bigger than his body could manage. He was alive. He was alive and afloat.
Advertisement
He heard Victoria’s scream.
“Hey!”
Turning towards the sound, Andrew yelled as loudly as he could,
“Heeeey!”
But there was no answer. He wasn’t even sure he had the right direction. The waves were too tall, every one of them towering over his head. Andrew had to duck under to avoid being beaten down, and each time he surfaced it was like emerging into a foreign world. He had no idea which way was shore, and where Victoria might be.
She screamed again. This time, sounding far away.
“Victoria!”
Andrew swam in where he hoped was the right way. The current pulled him crossways, back around, spinning him round and round. Another wave rose, swept him sideways into the water. Andrew struggled to stay afloat. He had to do something. Now. Or risk losing both his and Victoria’s lives here.
Andrew surfaced, sucked in as much air as his lungs would allow, then before the next wave can come he dove. Down and down he went, kicking with his legs in the direction of the ocean floor.
He was lucky. The ocean wasn’t deep here. He could see sand. Reaching out, Andrew grabbed onto a nearby sunken rock to stabilize himself. Then with his finger, he drew a circle in the sand, surrounding it with the characters for Earth, Sand, Rock, and Change.
Then, his lungs now burning, Andrew opens his mouth and screams out the phrases he’d learned from Doctor Davis, phrases he wasn’t meant to know but picked up and practiced in secret.
Above the waves, the storm continued to rage. Andrew could feel it even where he is, the awesome power of this world, this place where mountains were raised, rivers formed and men lived. And as Andrew thought about this, he shoved his hand into the sand, over the circle he drew, and summoned his will to change the world.
Advertisement
- In Serial38 Chapters
Incrementum
Samantha logs into Incrementum out of pure frustration. Frustration with her job, her boyfriend, her mom and every other aspect of her unraveling life. As her first heroic act, she can’t figure out how to log out. The Brighthollow forest feels real, too real, and it has bugs. Luckily for Francine, a wealthy widower with dreams of creating the largest empire in the history of mankind, Samantha gives the game a chance. But Samantha won’t play the game Francine’s way, or the way Incrementum’s Gods wish. Samantha plays the game as she pleases and damn the consequences.
8 144 - In Serial10 Chapters
The Skeleton King : Retold
Boy and his whole class got into a serious accident and got killed,but their soul's are summoned into a whole new world by the humans with the help of their Light God to become their champion/heroes in time of dark times. Except for the main protagonist. P.S I'm not that good in story first time so please help me out Not my own pic ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hi guys i'm a fan of The Skeleton King by BRabbit (all credits go to him) i just want to retell the story in my own way so please don't be mad am not trying to claim his, I'm just retelling his story because his story is in hiatus I think he stop so idk i'm just retelling his story so please don't be mad thank you.his chapter is only at 10 so after that I'm gonna make 11 it's gonna Be the continuation of chapter 10 it's gonna be good :) maybe while I'm writing this story there will be my own story too idk. Original Novel:By BRabbit {http://royalroadl.com/fiction/4865/the-skeleton-king}
8 108 - In Serial29 Chapters
Goblin Kingdom
A normal Goblin is born in a normal goblin village. But right after he gets kidnaped and transformed into a slave by some strange rabbits. And that's how he starts to grow and later creates a goblin Kingdom.From a slave to a king, from weak to strong, from scared to feared.That's a goblin's journey WARNING: This story's VERY VERY fast, things develop in a rushed way. I'm not that experienced in writing and I'm just 16 years old, I'm sorry
8 246 - In Serial7 Chapters
Deathgod Chronicles
This is my first attempt at writing something other than poetry so it may be crude at the edges, please bear with it. I will try to improve with time. Tags may change as the story progresses but I will try not to get side tracked. I welcome any thoughts or comments you have about my work and will greatly appreciate it.************************************************Born with the power to save the world from the clutches of its impeding threats, Rafil was torn away from his parents a few months after birth from one of those impeding threats. What will now become of Rafil as he embarks on a journey to his destiny of bloodbath and slaughter.
8 144 - In Serial9 Chapters
The immortal snail problem
“You get 10 million coins, but a magic immortal snail will spawn within 10 kilometers of you. It is as fast as a regular snail, but it will always be chasing you. If it touches you - you die. Do you take the deal?” This obscure message is the first thing you see along with a gun near your head. What will you do if you don't even know where or who you are? Problem...Yeah... I would even call it 'The immortal snail problem'. Improvisational writing. I will try to make small irregular updates. There may be polls. Enjoy.
8 113 - In Serial11 Chapters
Unwanted
Al is well known delinquent but before he became a well-known street brawler he was known as a genius. It was a hot and scorching summer day when he decided to go to a convenient store to purchase refreshments after defeating some students that were bullying his old friend. Little did he know that inside the store were a group of armed men. After Al's unfortunate death he was reincarnated as an unwanted baby who retained all of his memories and knowledge from his past. Now Al must survive in the unforgiving world he has been reborn in. Will Al survive or will he windup inside someone's belly?
8 208

