《No Longer ALDC {Sequel to The Last Night} (Completed)》Chapter 5
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Gianna's POV:
Since there are a lot more dances than there were before. I thought of the easiest way to be able to get through all the dances in 1 day.
I made a schedule that starts at 8:30am and finishes at 9:30pm but it might finish later than that.
I woke up the girls and Christi and Kelly at 7:30 so that we had time for breakfast before getting to the studio for 8:15 so I could tell them the schedule which starts at 8:30!
*timeskip*
Its now 8:10 and we are on our way to the studio. While we are in the car, I said to the girls "When we get to the studio. You need to go straight into Studio A because I made a schedule so I'm going to tell you what will be happening when and then I will pin the schedule on the Dancers Den notice board so you can look at it. Okay?"
I got a response from all of them, so I kept driving and we made it to the studio at 8:14am.
So the girls went straight into Studio A. Christi and Kelly went into my office to get ready for working and I went into Studio A aswell.
I said "Right so girls. As there are a lot more dances now. I came up with a schedule so we can get through all of them. If you are not practicing at a certain time then you go to the Dancers Den or you help out with another class that is being taught. Do not mess around. I don't want you hurting yourselves! Okay?"
They nodded. So I continued "So, here is the schedule:
Mackenzie solo.
Jojo solo.
Paige solo.
Kalani solo.
Mackenzie & Brooke duet.
Brynn & Jojo duet.
Maddie & Chloe duet.
Kendall & Paige duet.
Kalani & Nia duet.
Mackenzie, Brynn & Jojo trio.
Maddie, Chloe & Paige trio.
Nia, Brooke & Kalani trio.
Group.
Get everything from Lockers.
Go home.
So, if you are not in the group. Go and make sure you are where you need to be at the correct time! Paige, can you pin this on the notice board in the Dancers Den please?"
"Okay Gianna." Paige replied.
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So I handed her the piece of paper band she went to put it on the notice board. Mackenzie and Jojo followed her out and Christi and Kelly went to start working. So I said to the remaining girls "Come on then. Let's get started!"
*timeskip*
It's now 10:45am, and I am in Studio A with Brynn and Jojo. They know their duet now, we are just making it look better.
Maddie and Chloe know their duet as do Kendall and Paige. It's going to be hard to pick a winner between them because both their dances look great!
Now, it's time to work on the other 2 duets; Mackenzie and Brooke's out-of-age duet and Nia and Kalani's Teen duet.
Mackenzie and Brooke's duet is an acro dance and it's so good. It's almost certain to win!
Nia and Kalani's duet is Contemporary and they are so in time. It's amazing!
*Timeskip*
It's now 6pm, and I am having all of the girls in Studio A so that we can do 1 last run-through of each of their dances before going home.
"Right girls, we are going to go through every dance and after they have finished you are going to each say 1 thing that they could work on or 1 thing that was really good. Got it?"
They nodded. So I said "Right, so Mackenzie. You are going to come and do your solo first."
Maddie- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Kendall- "It was great!"
Chloe- "Straighten your legs more on your aerials."
Brooke- Your skills have gotten much better!"
Paige- "It was good."
Nia- "Straighten your legs more on your turns."
Kalani- "It was good."
Jojo- "It was great!"
Brynn- "Best I've seen you dance in ages!"
"Right, Jojo solo.
Maddie- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Mackenzie- "it was good."
Chloe- "Straighten your legs on your aerials."
Paige- "it was good."
Brooke- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Nia- "Best I've seen you dance in ages."
Kendall- "Same as Nia!"
Kalani- "You've gotten much better!"
Brynn- "It was great!"
"Paige, come do your solo."
Maddie- "It was good."
Mackenzie- "it was good."
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Chloe- "Best I've seen you dance in ages!"
Brooke- "It was great!"
Nia- "Best I've seen you dance in ages."
Kendall- "Same as Nia!"
Kalani- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Jojo- "You need to spot in your turns."
Brynn- "It was great!"
"Right, Kalani solo.
Maddie- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Mackenzie- "it was good."
Chloe- "Straighten your legs on your aerials."
Paige- "it was good."
Brooke- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Nia- "Best I've seen you dance in ages."
Kendall- "Same as Nia."
Jojo- "Straighten your legs in your turns."
Brynn- "It was great!"
"Right, moving onto Duets. Mackenzie & Brooke."
Maddie- "You need to connect with each other more."
Chloe- "Your skills are great!"
Paige- "That was great!"
Nia- Kenz, you need to straighten your legs on your aerial."
Kendall- Brooke, you need to have stronger arms when you lift Kenz above your head."
Kalani- "Wow! That was great!"
Jojo- I feel sorry for the duet who follows you at the competition!"
Brynn- "That was amazing, even though your ages are so different!"
"Brynn, Jojo."
Maddie- "That was good seeing as it's your first duet together!"
Mackenzie- "That was amazing!"
Chloe- "Jojo, you had bent legs in your aerial."
Paige- "Do it like that at the competition and you have a good shot at winning!"
Brooke- "That was great!"
Nia- "You had good connection with each other."
Kendall- "It's easy to tell that you are good friends!"
Kalani- "Brynn, you need to spot in your turns."
"Maddie, Chloe."
Mackenzie- "You need to connect with each other."
Paige- "You used to dance as 1 person, now you aren't!"
Brooke- "If you get the timing sorted then it will be good."
Nia- "It was good."
Kendall- "Best I've seen you both dance in ages!"
Kalani- "It was good."
Jojo- "Wow! That was great!"
Brynn- "You both need to spot your turns."
"Kendall, Paige."
Maddie- "You need to connect with each other."
Mackenzie- "You need to look at the judges more."
Chloe- "That was good."
Brooke- "That was great!"
Nia- "You work together so well!"
Kalani- "That was good."
Jojo- "You were so in time!"
Brynn- "Same as Jojo!"
"Nia,Kalani."
Maddie- "That was great!"
Mackenzie- "You were so in time!"
Chloe- "Wow!"
Paige- "That was really good!"
Brooke- "You both need to spot in your turns."
Kendall- "You need to connect with the judges more."
Jojo- "That was good."
Brynn- "You need to work together."
"Right, onto Trios. Mackenzie, Brynn, Jojo. The 3 Muskateers."
Maddie- "Mackenzie, you need to connect with Jojo aswell as Brynn."
Chloe- "It was good."
Paige- "Jojo, don't fall out of your turns!"
Brooke- "Kenz, you need to hold that scorpion a little bit longer because you came out of it before the others had ir moves."
Nia- "You can easily tell that you we all great friends!"
Kendall- "You all need to straighten your legs in your aerials."
Kalani- "It was good."
"Maddie, Chloe, Paige."
Mackenzie- "Maddie, you need to connect with Paige as well as Chloe."
Brooke- "It was good."
Nia- "You need to look at the judges more."
Kendall- "You all need to straighten your legs in your turns."
Kalani- "You need to be more in time."
Jojo- "It was good."
Brynn- "I love it!"
"Nia, Brooke, Kalani."
Maddie- "You need to look at each other more."
Mackenzie- "You need to connect with the judges."
Chloe- "It was good."
Paige- "You need to straighten your legs in your aerials."
Kendall- "It was good."
Jojo- "Do it like that at the competition, you could win!"
Brynn- "That was great!"
"Group."
Mackenzie- "You all need to be in time."
Paige- "It was good."
Jojo- "Kendall, I saw you look at Kalani to see what to do next!"
"Okay girls, it's now 9:15pm, so go and get all your stuff and we can go home." I said.
They all left the studio and I followed them and we all got our stuff and Christi and Kelly were waiting for us and we went home.
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