《Bleeding Out》not a chapter, just some F U N S T U F F
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hello there
i dont have to use proper grammar HAHAHAHA
so this is just a thing for descriptions (i hate these but i am horrible at describing things).
lets start with flags/counrtypeople
first we got mr Dixie here. Now this was never an official flag of the Confederacy- it was only a battle flag. Dixie sorta represents discipline and loyalty, because he was never really in charge. he's a military man. This flag is known by many names, them being the Southern Cross, the Dixie flag, Rebel flag, and the Confederate battle flag.
now we got mini lil shrunkin down Stars and the Bars here. he was the first official confederate flag. he's actually kinda a nice guy, just firm in his beliefs. he was eventually rejected for looking like America, and got replaced by Stainless, aka Bloodstained.
this be Bloodstained. he's not very nice. he originally had just a white flag with the little emblem in the corner, but it was usually mistaken for a flag of surrender. His original name was Stainless, but then they added the red and he became Bloodstained. (it wont let me upload the Stainless Banner and im lazy so)
i think thats about all for characters. there designs are pretty basic, but they're sort like this:
(i drew this. it's on Instagram, blueskyzarizona. dont steal.)
OK ON TO STATE ABILITIESSSSS
now i only have a few of them figured out. i know that territories don't have abilities, but the states do. i'm pretty sure other country's states will also have "powers" but it's too much to think about so hehehe
: kind of a pyrokinesis. pyrokinesic? anyway, it's a person who control fire. You may be wondering "why does Arizona have fire powers when he isn't the hottest state?" well my good friend, Arizona gets the most sunshine out of all the other states (Florida is misnicknamed). He can't really control it though, and happens to burst into flames when he feels a strong emotion (anger, fear, stuff like that).
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: he's a dream walker. Pretty rad right? Anyhow, he can slip into people's dreams- he can even alter them if the person is aware of him. doing this is exhausting, especially the dream altering part.
: SUPERSTRENGTH BOIIIIII and he can mimic bird calls and sing really well because of all the birds in his state
: he can't feel pain. i don't think i need to explain why. He can feel someone stepping on his foot, but he can't feel the sharp deathly sting of a Lego.
: he can communicate- talk, hear, and even touch- with ghosts. This one doesn't make much sense- i mean, there are only seven total ghost towns in Alaska. I just though this one was pretty cool and it fits with his coldish personality.
: she's an empath- she can feel emotions. I think this fits her vibe- it also gives her an excuse for being a jerk sometimes. feeling EVERYONE'S emotions can't be fun.
: walking truth detector. he just knows. you lied about eating the last cookie? boom. he knows. he just knows.
: he doesn't need sleep. college kids would kill for this one.
mind reading ehehhehe-
I don't have all of these figured out, so please drop suggestions in the comments. I like stealing- i mean, uh, using them.
house layout time. i'm doing this mostly for me. i have a basic layout in my brain, but i also have a lot of math and life stuff up there so i need to lay it out.
America's room looks like this:
ignore sunset shimmer on the bed pls
his room is a bit bigger, but i feel like i didn't really communicate the whole "his bed is on a diffrent level" very well.
there aren't any windows, and the walls are colored a off white color. His walls have a bunch of old relicts and "historical objects". he's got a desk under his bed (messy with work papers) and got some nice hardware floor under that desk. the rest of the floor is nice fluffy carpet. don't forget the leather couch and coffee table- he don't have a tv in his room tho.
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Kitchen looks a bit like this.
LOTS of natural light. LOTS. It's really big, and it has a door that connects to the dining hall. It's its own room.
Dining hall:
like this but minus the fanciness. and it's WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY longer.
i might do more rooms later as we explore the house.
welp hope yall liked this hopefully helpful explanation.
peace out ✌
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