《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 23: Sword Finished And Forgiveness?
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"Speak" people speak
'Thought' people thought
demon/demonic speak
'Thought' demon/demonic thought
A/N: Hello world! If you see errors, please write. I will accept any constructive criticism. Please enjoy!!! I don't own Naruto.
-----The Forger Day Later-----
Naruto stood and look at his sword project on paper. Sword will have, 4 ft long and 2 inch width blade with five elemental seals on it, and 1 ft long hilt also with one seal. 'Hmm... Black Diamond is really heavy material... Maybe second light weight seal will be enough? Nah... One is good.' Naruto thought. 'Ehh I didn't sleep second day... But I must finish it fast or else someone steal my project or worse...'. All of a sudden someone opened door.
"Naruto you here?" mysterious person asked.
"What do you want... Minato?" Naruto asked with venom that cause Minato flinched.
"H-How much time you will work?" Minato asked nervously.
"Don't know. Don't tell."
"Why?"
"Why should I?" Naruto looked at Minato with cold eyes.
"I'm your father, that's why. I'm worried about you. You didn't sleep for two days!" Minato shouted.
"I will tell you something. " Naruto shouted in demonic voice. Minote takes step back. "Now get out. I have better things to do than talking with you." Naruto said and starts forging blade.
"Naruto, I-" Minato is interrupted by Naruto's growl.
"" Naruto shouted.
"R-Right. Oh one more thing." Minato said before leaving. Naruto looked at him and growled.
""
"W-Where w-was N-Naruko i-in p-past t-two d-days?" Minato said frightened.
"She helped me. Now get out. NOW!" Naruto said and backs to work.
Minato left the forge and now is on his way to Hokage's Tower 'Ehh... He will never forgive us... Maybe... Just maybe... He will forgive Naruko... I don't know if I'm doing right... I don't want to break her heart but... Naruto is a big threat to village... I only hope she will understand me why I did this...' Minato thought but he sees that Naruko is walking towards him.
"Hi Naruko!" Minato shouted.
"Hmm?" Naruko looked around and sees her father. "Oh, hi dad!"
"Where are you going sweety?" Minato asked her with smile.
"I'm going to help Naruto-nii working in the forge!" She said happily.
"So. Did he told you something about this sword?" Minato asked out of curiosity.
"No. He don't want to tell anybody about this sword." Naruko said a little sad.
"Don't be sad, I'm sure he will tell you!" Minato said.
"Maybe. Okay dad I need to go to Naruto and give him his food. Bye!" Naruko said running towards the forge and waved her hand to her dad, he waved back to her 'I'm sorry Naruko... But this must be done...' Minato thought to himself and starts walking towards Hokage's Tower again.
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-----To Naruto In The Forge-----
'I have a bad feeling about him but I don't know what it is... He is planning something... I need to be careful around now...' Naruto thought but is interrupted by opened doors.
"Who is it?!" Naruto shouted.
"It's me Naruko and I brought you food!" Naruko shouted back.
"Ahh... Thanks Naruko." He said and smiled.
"So what I need to do today , Naruto-nii?" Naruko asked with smile.
"Hmm... Honestly I don't know... There is nothing much work to do for you." He said.
"Why?" Naruko said a bit sad.
"Don't be sad. It's just hard work now-" Naruto interrupted his sentence and smiled.
"What?" She asked confused.
"You like design?" Naruto asked.
"Yeah. What about it?"
"I need crossguard." Naruto said and sees that Naruko is confused. "Ehh... Right you don't know what it is. You have a sword, Right?" she nodded "Sword is made from blade and hilt but there is something between, right?" she nodded again "So crossguard is a thing between blade and hilt and I need this." she nodded AGAIN.
"Okay, I understand now. So how this might look?" she asked.
"Hmm. I thought about some kind of swastika or cross." he said.
"Ok I will try to make something. Bye Naruto-nii!" Naruko is about to leave when Naruto tell her something.
"Naruko. Can you make it, if yes then I would like to have it tomorrow, okay?"
"Sure thing!" Naruko leaves.
"So... Time to make a blade and hilt. To think that I used all the bars." He chuckled and goes back to work. 'SHIT!!! I need some material for crossguard... Ehhh... I will wait for Naruko... Or I will look for something in the forge...' Naruto went to search some materials in the forge. Several minutes later. 'Shit... Only Black Steel... Sure it's also hard material but I need to channel chakra to blade... Only Chakra Metal... I should told this Naruko...' Naruto thought. As Naruto start smashing with hammer someone opened doors.
"Sorry, Nii-san I forgot my food." Naruko said and is about to leave.
"Naruko, wait!" he shouted and Naruko turned back "I need something else."
"What is it?"
"Chakra Metal. About two bars if it isn't a problem."
"No this isn't the problem. I will be tomorrow with crossguard pattern and Chakra Metal bars."
"Ok. Thanks, Naruko." Naruto thanked and smiled at her.
"Bye again, Nii-san!" she smiled at him and leaves.
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"Lets go back to work." Naruto said and goes back to work.
-----Day Later-----
"Shit. Where is Naruko I need that crossguard." Naruto asked himself irritated when someone opened doors.
"Nii-san it's me, Naruko!" she shouted.
"Good you have what I wanted?"
"Yes here is the pattern and your bars." Naruko give Naruto pattern and barrs he looked at pattern and sees. Simple cross with balls on the edge.
"Naruko..." Naruto said and Naruko looked worried 'I knew it... He don't like it...' she thought to herself with sadness. And sees that Naruto is smiling at her. "It's awesome." he said and Naruko have a little blush. "Now lets finish this sword." he said and smiled. Naruto take crossguarding project Chakra Metal bars and went to work 'He like it...' she thought to herself before chuckling and went to Naruto's direction to observe his work.
-----Next Day-----
"Naruko you here?"
"Yes!" she shouted and walking towards him. "What is it, Naruto-nii?"
"We finished." he said smiling.
"Really?!" she asked excisited.
"Almost. Last thing I need is to do are seals." he said. "Also I will summon my friend to me help, okay?" she nodded "Oh and don't tell anyone about this." he said seriously and she nodded. Naruto take of his shirt and jacket and reveal his fox tattoo, then bit his finger and went through several hand sign and said "Kuchiyose No Jutsu." a poof of smoke appear. When smoke disappeared in the middle stood white fox with seven tails. Naruko take step back.
Snow said.
"Yes."
Snow asked.
"This is Naruko my sister." Naruto said.
Snow said.
"H-Hello, Snow." Naruko said nervously.
"I finished my sword. And last work are seals. I need to know how to put them on blade and hilt."
"What do you mean in right order?" Naruto asked confused.
"I see. So in my case is Wind, Fire, Lightning, Water and last is Earth."
"Alright, I have last question where can I carve seals on hilt."
Snow disappeared in a poof of smoke.
"N-Naruto when did you obtained this Summoning Contract?" Naruko asked.
"It's..." Naruto started but his voice is cracked when he want to say something "It's a painful story and I don't want to tell this, now. But in the future, maybe." He said and tear flow from his left eye. Naruko saw this and now is sad.
"Sorry I-I didn't mean to bring painful memories." she said with sadness in her voice.
"It's okay, Naruko." Naruto wiped tear from his cheek . "Lets finish this sword." Naruto went to take right tools and starts working on seals.
-----Several Minutes Later-----
"Done!" Naruto shouted and wiped his sweat.
"Can I see this?!" she asked excisited.
"Sure. Take and see." he give her his new obtained sword.
"W-Wow~. It's awesome!" she shouted.
(A/N: This is what she sees.)
(A/N: Also there are seals in the first in the order is :
Wind,
Fire,
Lightning,
Water,
Earth
And LightWeight Seal)
"Thank you, Naruto-nii." Naruko said with smile and give him back his sword.
"Haha. For what?" Naruto asked and laughed.
"For everything. For time I can spend with you." She said with a little blush.
'Should I? Yeah... What can I lost?' Naruto thoughts and chuckled. Naruko is confused a little. "Naruko I have to tell you something." he said with big smile.
"What is it, Nii-san."
"I... I forgive you. But only you no one else." He said with bright smile. She looked at him with widened eyes and tears started to flow from her eyes. She rushed at him and hugged him tight.
"T-Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!" she said with tears.
"Naruko." He said softly.
"Y-Yes."
"Lets go eat something." he said and smiled.
"S-Sure, Naruto-Nii." she said with smile.
"And remember don't tell anyone about my tattoo and Fox Summoning Contract. Also if someone asked that I forgave you, tell them no." Naruto said with serious tone.
"Why not." she asked a little sad.
"I feel that something bad is going to happen. Please promise me that that you won't tell any one, okay?" Naruto asked.
"I promise. I will act like usual and you too need." Naruko said.
"I know. Now, only one more thing and we can go." Naruto said. He bit his finger and make a Storage Seal on his palm. Then he put his sword in this seal. "Now we can go." he said smiled.
"Hai!" Naruto got up from laid Naruto. Naruto stood and both of them went to eat something.
A/N: Uff. The longest chapter I ever wrote. I think I did good thing that Naruto forgave Naruko because I have one idea how to continue this story so wait for another chapters. SAYONARA AND SEE YOU SOON!
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