《Order in Chaos》Vanessa Grey
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In the darkness of space, Vanessa Grey tracked down the Crustaceans who attacked her son's spaceship. Crustaceans are 2 to 3 feet tall life forms with eyes on the sides of their head and 4 to six arms by their side, who pride themselves in destruction, Robbery, Smuggling of weapons, destruction of planets and carnage, They love blowing things up, sometimes their selves and sometimes planets, but after blowing up their home planet, they ruled out blowing planets as enjoyable and continued blowing other things up.
After receiving the message from H that her son almost lost his life, Vanessa left planet SEREN to track down the Crustaceans, She destroyed two Crustacean space ship's before thinking about asked for help from an old friend.
Vanessa spoke to her ship's A.I while flying her spaceship to planet MURDIN ,"Call Maynilia", planet MURDIN is a developed dwarf planet, it is home to the Murd's, Aliens that can track any life form, no matter where they are in the NYCTOS galaxy, The Murd's are parasites with a penchant for infecting and controlling other life forms they seem worthy to receive them, The Murd's hid their planet from prying eyes that may want to exploit their powers, Only those that have earned their favor can locate and even enter the planet.
Vanessa saved their planet from destruction some years back, So the Murd's pledged their services to the Grey family. After destroying the second ship, Vanessa called a Murd called Maynilia.
Maynilia used to be a bounty hunter, But only Vanessa knows that she is really the Galaxy's most feared bounty hunter Reaper.
"Hey Vanessa, You actually remembered to call, I'm wondering if you missed me, Wanted to talk to me or you want something" Maynilia said after her face appeared on the the screen, Maynilia had a playful smile on her face, She had white hair with Gold skin and colored tattoos on her arms all the way to her neck, She was one of the high Murd's, only high Murd's can track anyone across galaxies, the lower Murd's can at least track within cities.
"Hi May, It's the third one, I need your help". Vanessa said with a serious look on her face.
When Maynilia saw the look on Vanessa face, She knew something must have happened, she turned serious " I'll be waiting".
Planet MURDIN is a beautiful planet that the Murd's developed, it mostly made up of large swaths of forestry and rivers, So the Murd's built their homes in the forest without destroying any of the trees and it's mostly cause of the irregularity on their planet, The only thing you can do is to build with wood, Nothing else can be used to build on their planet.
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When Vanessa arrived at Maynilia's home, Maynilia was already waiting for her outside, Maynilia's home is situated on a large tree with glass and wooden fixtures. When Vanessa came down from her spaceship, Maynilia came towards her and hugged her.
"Good to see you Van."
"Good to see you to May."
May put her hand on Vanessa's face and look at her eyes deeply.
"Come let's go inside and then you can tell me what happened."
"Sure."
Vanessa stepped into May's house and told her what happened.
"Hmmm.." May furrowed her brows after hearing what Vanessa said.
"So you want me to help you track them down."
"Yes, that's why I came here."
"It hurts to hear you say you came just for that, You sure that's all you came here for."
May shifted closer to Vanessa and put her arms around her, Then looked into her eyes and asked again"
"Are you sure that's all you came here for"
Vanessa held her gaze and said expressionlessly.
"Yes May, I need your help."
May smiled playfully then laughed and said.
"Why so serious nessa, You used to be fun."
Vanessa smiled back at May.
"Okay.. Okay, I'll help you, lemme suit up, so we can go."
Vanessa furrowed her brows.
"You're coming to ?"
"Of course nessa, I haven't had fun in a while, and I don't really get out much, After what happened at sector D34."
Vanessa shrugged her shoulders and said.
"Sure come along, it would make destroying them easier".
May took off her clothes in front of Vanessa and changed into a red body fit exosuit, Paired with her half face mask, She looked like the essence of beauty and destruction, with her white hair ponytailed behind her.
"Let's go nessa".
Vanessa and May left planet MURDIN on May's spaceship, A sleek black three seater phantom Z1, with HELIOS(healable low-field illuminating optoelectronic silicon) combined with nanotech and metamaterial to make the outer body, 4 wings, 4 turbo booster, 4 lazer gun, separate quantom core for each of the QAE(Quantum Accelerator Engines), onboard quantum AGI(Artificial General intelligence), The ship was built for speed, stealth and destruction.
The engineers on planet SEREN made this spaceship for May.
Before leaving planet MURDIN, May had already located the Crustaceans that attacked Eto, She closed her eyes and connected herself to the energies in the universe from the particle of light to the particle of time the chronon, Which gives her the ability of supersymmetry. she found them on a planet called FROUN.
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After leaving planet MURDIN, Vanessa and May entered the coordinates of the planet FROUN into the computer and the computer opened a wormhole and travelled right outside the orbit of the planet FROUN, Then May cloaked her spaceship then they descended into the planet below. FROUN was one of those newly spawned planets with rough terrain and mountainous regions, chasms, and deep gorges without breathable air or a stable atmosphere, the weather can range from a single second to hours.
"Where are they May."
"They should be in front, just over those mountains in front of us."
They saw a small contingent of Crustaceans after they got over the mountains, there was a black life form in the middle of all the spaceships the Crustaceans parked on the terrain of FROUN.
"What is that."
"I don't know ness, I just scanned it results came back as unidentified."
Vanessa furrowed her brows after hearing what May said, "For it to be unidentified, it should be a randomness that hasn't been documented."
They watched for a a while, then.
Vanessa looked at May and said"We'll go on foot, land at that ridge on the far left, move in from the right we'll attack from both sides"
"All right, don't start before I get there."
"Then you better hurry."
Vanessa jump out of the spaceship and landed on the ground with her grey colored NVNS(Nanite virtualized nanospherical suit), she made the suit herself, Each component of the suit is made up of tiny spherical nanometer metamaterial that uses laser light and tiny vibrations in the air to scan and adapt to it surroundings, Vanessa made the suit herself.
After moving into position. she received a message from May.
"In position."
"Okay, let's do this."
Vanessa jump into the air and the Nanite in her suit assembled a shoulder blaster and she shot at the ship's of the Crustaceans, At the time she jumped at the ship's, May ran forward into the sights of the Crustaceans and they started firing at her, the Crustaceans were wearing body armor that protected their head and chest, but in front of May's sword, they were like paper, she cut off three arms of the Crustaceans she was closest to, and dodged a shot that was aimed at her head by tilting her head backwards and shooting at him with the light gun in her right hand.
The Crustaceans started shooting and screaming "Kill them Kill them all."
While May was fighting, after Vanessa destroyed the first ship, the black life form melted into the ground and disappeared, only Vanessa and May noticed that it was gone and increased their guard.
"That thing is gone." May called out after cutting the head of another Crustacean.
Vanessa dodged another bullet that wheezed past her head and said"Be on guard, it might come back again."
Vanessa and May killed the two dozen Crustaceans there but kept the leader alive.
"That's the last one." May and Vanessa were looking at the last Crustacean. He was beaten, arms broken by his side, his head bloody. He looked at them and said. May stood behind Vanessa as they moved closer to him.
"Who are you, I don't remember attacking you, or did I dest..."
Vanessa didn't let him finish and kicked his head, She looked at him coldly and said.
"You attacked my son's spaceship, You should be grateful I don't hunt down your entire race."
He looked at the woman standing in front of him wearing a grey suit with the symbol of a planet in a black hole and said "You're from the Grey family."
May smiled and said "Another fan nessa."
The Crustacean looked at her fearfully and said "You're lady Grey."
"Yes Yes I am."
Vanessa looked at him condescendingly and coldly, she brought out her katana sword and cut off his head before he could say anything again. May looked at Vanessa and said "What was that, No torture, You shoulda let me play with him for a little while longer, I would've carved my name on his soul."
Vanessa turned around and said" Let's go May, it's likely that we've taken too long"
May looked at Vanessa and said"Okay, let's go..."
May called her spaceship and they got on and left the planet.
After they left the planet, the black life form appeared and looked up at the departing spaceship then looked at the destruction around then disappeared again.
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