《The Planes of Mil'Tish》B1: Chapter 2 part 3
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*Inside of Ikt's mind*
"DO YOU WANT POWER MORTAL." Ikt who was unconsious was startled awake by a loud rumbling voice. When Ikt looked around he saw reality was cracked like a mirror, each second he stared into each shard, Ikt felt he was descending further into insanity. Looking down at his body Ikt saw that he was a transparent dissembodied spirit. Ikt was disoriented by a large shockwave, An assemble of eyes opened in each shard of what Ikt perceived to be reality.
"DO YOU WANT POWER MORTAL." Ikt was very disturbed, looking into the eyes Ikt felt as if he could see time, space, and reality itself, as he looked deeper into the eyes Ikt could see the living embodiment's of concepts such as death, life, eternity, friendship, hatred..etc one of the concepts even waved at Ikt who was baffled. Ikt felt like his soul was being sucked into this frozen limbo. Ikt was having an out of soul experience, that made no sense to him; it seems like this place did not adhere to the rules of any physical and mental laws. his mind was detoriating before his very eyes, alarmed Ikt tries to snap his soul out of the trance, but he failed each time, he started to get desperate when all of a sudden the voice came back and cracked even more shards of reality.
"DO YOU WANT POWER MORTAL."
"No I don't." Ikt was confused as to where the voice came from, but he knew one thing, and that was the bad vibes that the voice and this deranged place was giving him. Gradually Ikt started to hear whispers as his soul was still being sucked in, he did not hear them at first, but now it was booming in his mind. Ikt felt like he was losing a piece of himself every second that he stayed here.
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*Outside of Ikt's mind*
A creature that looked like a butterfly was being chased around by children in some God forsaken village, the peasants there were working the agriculture, blacksmiths forging swords and armor, The women doing housework but gradually the people slowed down until time stood to a complete standstill, everywhere around the world time was stopped nobody was spared from this phenomenon, even the Gods of this land who brew with internal strife and corruption had ceased to move.
*Inside of Ikt's mind*
"DO YOU WANT POWER MORTAL."
"Please kill me!!!" Ikt screamed out into the chaos. He felt it was hopeless, he wonder what he done in his past lives to desevere all of this misery that he was going through, maybe this was his personal hell for all the sins that he commited. he had no idea how much time had passed "LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE!!!!!!" Ikt yelled his voice getting sore even as he did not have vocal cords. "Why are you giving me a choice, why are you doing this." Ikt sobbing now knew the longer he stayed here, the more deranged this place made him, the more this place will batter at his will and humanity. Ikt knows he has to say yes at the mysterious voice offering, but what would be the price of that power. Ikt knew that power did not come from nowhere, and someone as absolute and sadistic as the voice must have a price that he must pay. Ikt started to reflect on his past life, his mom, vanessa, the elders sending him to war, Creid and Glaas abandoning him, and his week of unspeakable torture at the military camp.
"DO YOU WANT POWER MORTAL."
Finally Ikt grew tired of hearing the voice.
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"Yes, Yes i want power to get revenge, to crush my foes, TO CRUSH ANYTHING THAT WILL EVER STAND IN MY WAY!! I WANT ALL THE POWER!!!!!!" Ikt said with a venemous resolution.
"GOOD."
*Outside of Ikt's mind*
A creature that looked like a butterfly slowly started to flap it's wings, children chasing it in some God forsaken village, the peasants there working the agriculture, blacksmiths forging swords and armor, The women doing housework gradually time returned to normal for the whole world. Not even the Gods of this land who brew with internal strife and corruption noticed the phenomenon.
In the wilds a tall looking goblin bearing a dark red aura with a tome and a axe next to his body was waking up.
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