《StarSword Online》1.07 - Gray City
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Outside the tall Pod Hive building, Max stood on the street curb and waited for the hovercab to arrive. A filtration mask covered his face. The many industrial plants of the city, most owned or controlled by Gawa Industries, continuously pumped out pollution. Traces of the heavy gasses floated down and covered the lower parts of the city in a layer of noxious air. To simply breathe without a mask was to risk illness and disease.
Despite the thick smog, the streets were still filled with people. They sauntered down the sidewalks, grouped together in alcoves and narrow alleyways. Their clothes were often ragged and stained, and some didn’t even bother to wear a mask. Their hacking coughs only added to the overwhelming cacophony of the city. The loudspeakers blaring music or advertisements, the yelling, the whiz of hovercars overhead and squeal of tires over the street, and—behind it all—the deep, ever-present hum of factories and nameless machinery.
Welcome to the Bottoms of Gray City.
The grimy, sunken faces of all these people betrayed their relatively young ages. The reality was, for most who lived down here, an early death was a fact of life. Those of the Middles always lived past 100. Those in the Heavens, well… they were so long-lived they could almost be considered a different species. 200 years or more was completely ordinary.
Advanced healthcare extended the lifespans of those in the upper strata of society, but those of the Bottoms rarely had access to it. Between the hazardous air, the acid rain, the overcrowding and poor health services, it was a miracle for anyone of the Bottoms to live past 50. Such was the way of the world. You just tried to survived as well as you could.
Soon, a shiny Hovercab descended from the sky and touched down on the sidewalk. Max got in and sat down, while the door hissed shut behind him.
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“Where to?” asked the cab’s AI. It’s voice was crisp and polite.
“Polar-Tech.”
“I estimate ten minutes. Please sit back and enjoy the ride!”
With that, the craft powered up and lifted into the air. Max took off his mask. Hovercabs were always outfitted with decent filtration systems, and they purified the air much better than his mask could. Max took a deep breath of the cool, sterile air.
Max allowed himself this moment of respite, when there was nothing for him to do. No work, nothing he could do to go faster. This ten-minute ride belonged to him completely. A safe zone. Sometimes he felt like these short cab rides provided the only time he could truly relax. If only he could shut off his mind...
The interior of the Hovercab was quite roomy, with two rows of seats facing each other, leaving the middle open. The entire dome of the craft was made of glass, as well as most of the doors to either side. What little natural light filtered through the fog and clouds filled the cab, adding to the sense of spaciousness. As the cab rose in height, this light only got brighter.
Max leaned back in the padded seat, and, feeling his stomach rumble once more, found himself wishing that he'd taken the extra minute or two to pickup a snack from the cafeteria. Too bad. Hovercabs always carried snacks and refreshments in the front, but they were expensive. Even so, Max considered it... but in the end, his frugality won out. He'd rather not have to go hungry later just for a small container of overpriced candied nuts.
Truthfully, Max wouldn’t have minded walking to Polar-Tech and saving money on the cab fare, but aside from his weariness, it was far too dangerous. His relatively clean jeans and jacket would have stood out like a neon sign on the streets, and standing out in the Bottoms was an invitation for trouble. Various gangs ruled the streets below, and when they weren’t fighting over territory, doing deals, or extorting shop owners for protection money, they had little more to do than harass anyone passing by.
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With the boot of the upper classes upon their backs—preventing them from better jobs, better housing, and better lives—those who joined gangs took to feeling powerful by exerting control over those even worse off than themselves. Drugs and crime formed the beating heart of the Bottoms, and it spread its veins along nearly every street of Gray City.
The hovercab eventually slowed down, descending and coming to rest in front a giant, pearl-white building. Somehow, even the grime that layered most other constructions this low didn’t seem to affect it. In and of itself, that wasn't surprising. All corporations put quite a lot of effort and money into keeping up appearances for appearances sake. Several guards with heavy rifles mulled about in front of the entryway, stationed there to discourage loiterers and other... undesirables.
“We’ve reached your destination!” said the AI. “Before exiting the vehicle, please remember to put on a filtration mask. Air at this altitude can be hazardous to your health. Thank you for choosing Hovercab!”
“Thanks,” Max mumbled through his mask.
He stepped out of the cab onto the curb. In front of him rose a set of concrete steps, leading to a row of spotless sliding glass doors. Max and everything nearby was bathed in an icy-blue light, radiating from a large neon sign that read:
P O L A R - T E C H
As Max mounted the steps, he was fully aware of the guards and unseen cameras analyzing his face, watching his every move with cold calculation. The closer he got, the more he noticed the guards angling towards him, their fingers likely twitching near the safeties on their fully-loaded automatic rifles. Max slowed to a deliberate pace, keeping his arms down, his palms relaxed and open. No sudden moves, he reminded himself. Corporate militias were infamous for their itchy triggers. A Bottoms citizen getting riddled with bullets just for reaching for their tablet was an all-too-common story. If moving a little slower helped Max avoid a few holes blasted in his chest and gut, well...
Max was more than happy to forget about the inconvenience.
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2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. 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