《Astral: Into the New World》The Captor continued...
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Somewhere in the forest
Vines trail down from the crest of the waterfall, expanding on every side. Its green leaves and collective little flowers create colorful posies that decorate the punchbowl falls. The crystal clear water reflects the blue sky and the spread of feathery clouds, as trees stood tall with their whispering leaves surrounding this hidden bathe. It's a vibrant scene to behold somewhere within Mountain Ard which at a later time, the captured young woman, unconscious...circled by the flying and the creeping bugs attracted to the dried blood from her clothes will witness it all upon waking up.
*SPLASH
He jumps into the tranquil pool. Fully naked and bold. A perfect body... oh~ it's not, he has a missing part? Did I see that right? *fake cough... Anyways, the man has a missing hand, but from his feet to head is all yours to see... naked as any female wants it to be.
His back muscles- toned and pumping as he stroked his arms forwards under the water, but a line of grey-white scales on the middle of his back is clearer to spot. A hybrid they call them, for someone with little scales in this world dominated by pureblooded Saris or the scaled-people.
...
He flips and floats on his back welcoming the open space as the sun rays pass in the west giving his nakedness a flawless touch, bewitching the young woman already awake. Narya sat on the wet slates, her eyes fixed on his adonis belt and glimpse down to the private part. But the stinging bite of a big black bug distracted her from staring at the naked physique. She caught the bug sucking on her neck and…. something was crawling beneath her clothes.
"AAAAHH!!!", her scream echoed in the secluded falls, and immediately stood, rubbing and shaking off whatever creeper inside her clothes.
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"...", her eyes widened, her robe filled with feasting maggots and leech, both parasites are plumpy and red. Narya gawks at the sight as she disgustingly removes her clothes leaving her own tailored garment supporting her breasts. While she busily attends to her trouble, stamping and pounding the parasites and bugs. The young man watches her blank-faced... but under the water, he starts to transform his forearm scales to grow a hand on his left. Unlike a normal hand like the other, the reattached hand is more of a weapon - sharp claws with a side blade.
He swims towards the bank, annoyed by the awoken prey but as he goes closer, the young woman immediately sees him and throws a rock at his face. The man was angered, and as he reached the shallow water, he immediately attacked the petite young woman only leveled below his shoulder. However, Narya was swift and flexible to dodge as if she magically healed herself from the stabbing he received from the same man who just sprung to stab her again.
"You!" Narya exclaimed, more enraged to get revenge on her captor as she avoided the sudden attack. She keeps evading until she glimpses something more unsettling. She’s distracted by his attacker's beautiful face, the overall nakedness, especially the penis, flailing as he leaps. The growing heat is rising to her cheeks- embarrassed from the coincidental glance. Her attention is now divided between the deadly claws and the unbothered dangling cock.
The man kept charging until Narya was already cornered on the nearby cliff. And he was about to stab her by the shoulder but Narya stooped down immediately, her forehead accidentally brushed into Erduas pubes and more below it.
"..."
Both of them stopped, and the silence grew from the awkward incident. A few seconds pass by before they give each other a painful blow. Narya punches his manhood, while Erduas kneed her on the jaw. They almost fall from the inland cliff - Narya's head is hanging on the edge after being knocked over, and Erduas kneeling on the ground grabbing his crotch, groaning in pain. Narya raises her head, woozy…face dislocated- chin locks sideways with the red mark from Erdua’s knees.
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Both are moaning from pain, but Narya got up first massaging her almost dislocated jaw. Her astral ability made it easier to have her broken face in place, as well as to heal her earlier wound from the back.
Narya attempts to kick him off the cliff, but Erduas grabs her feet, forcibly pulls her and she plummets to the ground- buttocks first, then her elbow.
Erduas firmly held both her feet as he stood, scratching Narya’s back on the granite rock.
"I'm gonna kill you!”
Narya, “Let me go!...ohh….ugh”, in significant pain from the abrasions against the rough surface as Erduas dragged her back to the falls. Narya keeps on struggling, and god knows how many times she views Erduas’ balls and his muscular bottom while she’s being dragged on her back.
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