《Chaos Rising Volume 1: Rise of an Unbowed Warrior》Chapter 15: False Hope
Advertisement
Kai woke up gasping in pain. His entire body felt like one big scab, and for some reason, it seemed to be throbbing in rhythm with his heart. He could feel a liquid covering him, and he opened his mouth to ask what was going on.
He sputtered and gasped as the metallic taste of blood entered his mouth, and so he tried to spit all of it out.
A few moments later, he felt the cold chill of water splash all over him. It took them a few buckets of water, but Kai was finally able to wipe enough of the blood from his eyes and mouth to open both of them, at which point he realized the silence that permeated the air around him.
He looked up and saw that it had been hours since he’d sat down in front of the Seer, and that the first rays of dawn had already started appearing over the horizon. And yet, the crowd of villagers that had surrounded the clearing when he’d gone under was still there. Every single one of them was standing there, watching him in grim silence.
There had never been an occurrence like this in the village during a Naming Ceremony. The worst reaction they had ever seen from someone was the intense shaking that had occurred with Mera’s Naming right before. Kai was full of pain and covered in blood. He could only imagine what the villagers had seen while he was being Named.
He tried to stand up, and was able to push himself to his feet, before a sudden bout of weakness hit him, and he started to tip over. Suddenly, two lights flashed and Cohen and Hunter were on either side of him, supporting his weight.
In the next second, Mera had also run up to Kai, and was standing in front of him with a concerned expression.
Advertisement
“What happened?” Kai asked in a hoarse whisper.
It was Mera who answered. “It was scary Kai. Everything was normal for the first bell, except for the fact that it was taking so long. Of course, we were all concerned about that at first, but then both you and the Seer suddenly started shaking. It ramped up to the point where it looked as if both of you were going through sitting seizures. And then, almost as quickly as it started, both of you stopped moving. A couple bells passed, and then you started shaking uncontrollably again and blood started pouring out of every single one of your pores. I was so afraid, but you’re ok right?”
“Yeah, I’m fine,” is all he could say, not able to convince even himself.
He heard a commotion on the other side of the stage and saw that some of the council members were supporting the Seer in the same way Hunter and Cohen were silently supporting Kai.
However, the old woman barked at them to get away from her, and was finally able to convince the members to let her stand by herself. Emboldened by this, Kai himself pulled his arms away from his supporters and tried to stand on his own. He teetered dangerously for a second, before rebalancing himself and standing straighter.
He saw the Seer look out over the crowd for a few seconds before turning to Kai.
“This child,” she said pointing at Kai, “has lived through more tonight than most of us will experience in our entire lives. He has persevered and come out victorious. He stands there bloody, but unbowed. His name, his new name, will be Mordekai Eritos, meaning ‘the unbowed strength of a warrior.’”
And then, in a soft voice, one that Kai somehow knew could only reach his ears, the Seer said, “A name that one day, will force you to earn the right to use it. Through the fires of eternal wars, you must rise, and become the name Eritos.”
Advertisement
***
A beautiful humming sound could be heard through the thick forest. It seemed to be a soft, almost casual hum, yet the Aura it gave off increased in strength as one traveled closer to it.
The trees rippled in the pleasant wind, almost dancing to the rhythm of the beautiful sound. The grass seemed just a little greener and the animals inhabiting the forest, just a little more energetic because of the humming.
Following the humming would take one to a clearing, where a heavens defying beauty was washing clothes in a small stream. Even though she was only wearing a simple white dress, and her dark hair was tied back into a messy ponytail, any Mortal that chose to even glance at her would have their eyes burnt, through no fault of the woman’s, however. She was just too pure, too full of power and beauty.
Without turning, she called out in a melodic voice. “C’mon love. You know it’s impossible to hide from me. At this point, I wonder why you even try.”
A chuckle emanated from a shadow at the edge of the clearing before it solidified into a man seven feet tall, and rippling with muscles. He wore only a black robe and his dark hair fell across his face, obscuring his features.
A sudden flash brought him to kneel right behind the now standing woman, where he then nuzzled his face into her neck.
“I had to try, love,” he said. “It is a game we’ve played for centuries. Why stop now?”
The woman turned, placing both hands on her husband’s chest as she suddenly changed the subject.
“You felt it too a few hours ago, didn’t you? A slight ripple in the fabric. Someone has taken the Name.”
The man’s face hardened, a quick 180 from the playful expression he had before.
“It won’t matter. The Abomination that calls itself Fate will eventually wipe them from the Mortal Plane, no matter what they try to do.”
The man realized how he’d messed up when his wife glared at him. However, her face fell after a few seconds.
“All these years later, any my sister is still under the command of that filth,” she said. “In the end, we failed her, and everyone else.”
The man reached up to her face, cupping it between his hands.
“Do not despair, my love. Maybe he’s still…”
She pushed away from him, spinning around to try hiding her oncoming tears.
“No, do not give me false hope. We saw him get blasted into Oblivion. Him along with our two allies.”
The man grabbed her and turned her back to him. She hadn’t fooled him. He wiped her tears with the sleeves of his robe. She then buried her face into his chest, craving warmth that, through all of her years of living, only he’d been able to give her.
Looking out at the trees that seemed to weep with the couple, he said, “Sometimes, hope is all we have.”
Advertisement
- In Serial45 Chapters
The Mystifying Diviner
Content warning, there is cursing in the story and there will be some pretty heavy sexual innuendos in it also. I don’t really plan to write gore, but there will be fight scenes. Fair warning to readers, it is a slow start. But hopefully it is enjoyable for you to read. Follow the story of an old chef who was lucky to be selected to become a system host. Well maybe not so lucky, because gaining the system killed him. He will be given a system that might not be the best match for him. While also having to deal with a snarky system monitor who might not be that helpful most of the time. He will also use his new found powers to enjoy life in a new younger body. What you can expect from this story is bad writing, poor grammar, and slow pacing maybe. Food, cooking, comedy, slice of life, fighting, exploring, tournaments, scamming and probably face slapping. I mean who doesn’t like a good face slapping? This is my take on a cultivation story, a lot of Eastern stuff will be crammed into with a mix of Western. This story started as a goal for myself to write 60,000 words in a month for NaNoWriMo. I was able to do it even with taking days off and not writing. I plan to keep writing the story, but at a slightly slower pace. I am aiming for 2-3 chapters a week now with about 4-7k words written. This is only posted on RoyalRoad currently, and I have no plans to change that for now. Cover art is by Jack0fheart [Participant in the 2021 Royal Road Writathon Challenge for the month of November 2021]
8 68 - In Serial32 Chapters
Blood and Soul
Our realm has always been split into two: Those from the old world.And those from the new. When a deadly and magical plague created yet another caste in our realm, those of the new world thought it a punishment from the gods for their destruction and abandonment of their roots, but those in the old world knew the truth. That was to be the beginning of a long and drawn out war between creatures that have roamed the realm for centuries and monsters that never should have came into being.
8 181 - In Serial11 Chapters
The Chameleon's Gift
“Heaven is high, and our people are far away.” War is looming in the world of man. Long have the Senlin tried to avoid it, but every day their numbers fall, and their way of life is increasingly threatened. Caw and Rock are members of the Pachon, one of the few remaining tribes of the Senlin. They are an ancient and sacred bloodline, their magical abilities enhanced by powerful heirlooms, cultivated over generations. When Caw loses both her and Rocks heirlooms to a Shen hunting party, she has no choice but to try and get them back.
8 199 - In Serial17 Chapters
the adventures of john in monster musume.
John Harrell: a visitor from America moved to japan, but when he meets kuroko Smith his life gets flipped upside down, his main goal is to start a family but when it comes to a bunch of monster girls, things might get a little wierd.
8 64 - In Serial12 Chapters
Bakugo x Villain Deku
THIS BOOK IS A JOKE DONT TAKE IT SERIOUS
8 102 - In Serial63 Chapters
Soulmage
The Silent Academy is safe. Why wouldn’t it be? The Silent Academy stands as a beacon of order, civilization, and education amidst the Redlands, a place filled with barbaric witches who prey on the sorrow of their victims. Truly, there is no better place in this world to be. …or so goes the official narrative. Cienne, as a young witch taken from his home in the Redlands for "re-education," has his doubts. When war comes to the Silent Academy, and the true cost of magic shows itself, Cienne has to clash with his former teachers and classmates in order to free himself from the Silent Academy’s web of lies. Soulmage is a YA fantasy novel about a boy named Cienne, the lies he’s been told, and the costs of a magic that runs on souls.
8 141

