《Courier》V1.6
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“Doc, why can’t I see?” Zoe asked.
“For a couple of reasons. Want to hear them?” Claire asked.
“Yes.”
“First, I’ve disabled your Kaisers until you heal. Second, you have gauze wrapped around your head, so even if your Eagle Vision was enabled, you wouldn’t see a thing,” Claire replied. “Trust your cyberdoc, ok?”
“Ok.”
“Your Allegro is online and functioning correctly. It is also helping your other new implants mesh with your body.”
“That’s good.”
“Indeed. So, how are you feeling?”
“Like I’ve been flayed alive.”
“That’s not too far from the truth,” Doc Brown laughed.
“Doc, do you want me to take over?” a deep baritone voice asked.
“Who’s that?”
“Zoe, this is Zane, my nurse. He’s going to take over for a bit and help you eat and such.”
“What about a bath?”
“Don’t blush…”
“Ouch!”
“It’ll irritate your weave and skin,” Claire continued ignoring Zoe’s outburst. “Even the tiny bit of heat a blush produces can harm healing skin.”
“I see that now.”
“Well, you understand, not see,” Zane corrected.
“Ha-ha,” Claire replied. “Don’t make her laugh. Zoe, as for a bath, it’ll be a few days before you’re ready for one of those.”
“I’ll try not to,” the nurse said.
“I’ll check on you in a little while. I have another patient to see,” Claire told Zoe. “Zane will feed you lunch. Hope you like soup.”
“Ok and I love soup.”
“You might not love this,” Zane muttered as Claire walked out of the recovery room.
“I heard that.”
“I meant for you to,” Zane replied to Doc Brown’s laughter. He turned his attention to his patient.
“I can feed myself.”
“No, you can’t. Your whole body is wrapped in gauze except your face, and you can’t see where the bowl is.”
“Good point,” Zoe conceded.
“Now, open wide. Here comes the choo-choo,” Zane said lifting the spoon towards Zoe’s mouth. She groaned in annoyance.
*
“Are you ready to boot your Allegro for the first time?” Claire asked Zoe a week later.
“I thought it was already active,” Zoe replied.
“I had it running in a low power state so it could help with your healing, but it’s been off for the last couple days as it reported your implants had been successfully installed and accepted by your body.”
“Oh. Well, in that case, I’m ready to give it a go,” Zoe said. “How do I…” she trailed off as a bootup sequence appeared in her vision where a moment before she still couldn’t see anything but darkness as if her eyes were closed.
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“That’s what I love about Allegros. They seem able to read their users even though they don’t have an onboard AI.”
“Why don’t you get one?”
“I’ve considered it and just don’t want to pay the price or take the time to upgrade,” Claire admitted. “One that could replicate my Composer’s software would be even more expensive than yours.”
“Wait. An onboard AI is an option?”
“No,” Claire laughed. “Every AI ever created by mankind has gone rogue. So, why would a corporation offer something that could end up willingly killing its user as an option?”
“Good point,” Zoe admitted as the Allegro finished starting up. A CyberBionic logo flashed across her eyes before the darkness resumed. “Uh, I got a logo and now everything is dark again. Did something go wrong?”
“No Zoe. Everything is fine. Frames are intuitive devices. You just will things to happen unless it’s an automated process. Some people use hand gestures or flick their eyes and such to use their frames. That might help though I think you’ll get the hang of it quick enough.”
“So, I think of things to happen like showing me the time…” Zoe fell silent as the time and date appeared in the center of her eyes.” Whoa!”
“Just got the date and time?” Claire asked.
“Yeah,” Zoe replied thinking of that data moving to the bottom right of her eyes. It didn’t move. She looked at the time and moved her eyes down and to the right. The data disappeared and reappeared smaller where she wanted it. “That’s cool! I had to use my eyes to move the time to the lower right side of my vision and it appeared there.”
I’m glad you’re having fun. Before you go crazy playing around, I’m going to send you a request. You’ll need to accept it,” Doc Brown said.
“What is it for?” Zoe asked as a prompt appeared asking her to allow a connection to Claire. She was hesitant about accepting a connection unless she knew what it was for.
“You’re showing wisdom. Never accept a request unless you can be reasonably sure what it’s for. This request is so I can activate your Kaisers.”
“And I can trust you.”
“Yes. I mean if I wanted anything from you, I could have cut it out when I was operating or sold you into slavery when I first put you under for the surgery.”
“Ah. Yeah, that makes sense,” Zoe replied accepting the prompt.
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“Excellent. Let’s turn on your eyes,” Claire said. A second later Zoe could see once more.
“This is amazing!” Zoe gushed shielding her eyes. Colors were sharper, she could pick out details she never would have seen before such as loose threads in Claire’s sweater, and the lights were much brighter.
“Welcome to the 64K world as the logo says,” Claire quipped. “You’ll get used to Eagle Vision in time. Until you do, you can dim the brightness.” Zoe removed her hand from her face before Claire had finished speaking. “Already figured it out?”
“Yeah. It’s like having built in sunglasses.”
“That it is. I couldn’t live without my V2s.”
“I have V1s…” Zoe trailed off seeing Claire’s grin. “I have V2s!”
Doc Brown nodded. “I used my discount and passed the savings on to you. Well, onto Nucky.”
“Why?”
“Because I sell a lot of Kaiser Optics products, so they give me a nice discount. As for why I passed that on to you, well, it’ll keep you from having to upgrade for a long time.”
“And I’ll be able to buy other implants for you to install in addition to owing you one for the upgrade?” Zoe asked smiling.
“There is that” Claire admitted. Zoe grabbed her head. “What’s wrong?”
“That 16X zoom is a killer,” Zoe said a moment later. Claire laughed. “Yeah, I know. I’ll get used to it.”
“Uh huh. While we are connected, I’m going to run a diagnostic just to double check things.”
“I can change eye color, can’t I?”
“Yeah.”
“I’ve always wanted blue eyes.”
“And now you do,” Doc Brown replied picking up a small mirror and showing Zoe her reflection. “Looks good on you too.”
“Thanks,” Zoe replied preening as she admired her reflection. Claire handed her the mirror.
“I’m not going to hold that for you all day. I have other patients to consult with and an operation this morning.”
“Ok.”
“Let’s test your scanner,” Claire said. Zoe nodded. “Alright. Scan me.”
“How…” Zoe started and stopped. Claire nodded. She thought about it for a second and thought scan at Doc Brown. A second later a small tool tip hovered in her vision beside Claire giving her name, age, occupation, and contact info. Zoe’s eyes widened. “Where does that information come from?”
“The CSA has a database of every person living within its borders. All frames can access it though few people ever do.”
“Why is that?”
“Laziness and some people consider it rude,” Claire replied shrugging her shoulders.
“Is it wireless tech?” Zoe asked. Claire nodded. “That means we’re all being tracked.” Another nod. “Which means the database has been sliced as well as the tracking disabled or spoofed.”
Claire smiled and nodded. “Exactly. I’ll let you figure that out.”
“You could just tell me.”
“There’s no fun in that,” Claire replied standing up.
“What about weather reports and the temperature?”
“Pulled directly from the weather satellites in space,” Claire replied as the current conditions appeared before Zoe’s eyes. Zoe added a weather icon, temperature reading, and the day to the date and time in the corner of her vision. She smiled.
“I’m going to leave you to play around with your Allegro,” Claire said walking to the door. “Zane will be along shortly with your breakfast.”
“Ugh.”
“It’s not as bad as hospital food.”
“You don’t eat it.”
“Of course not. I enjoy using my tastebuds,” Doc Brown laughed as she walked away. Claire’s steps suddenly got louder, and she reappeared in the doorway. “One more thing. Scan whatever you want, but don’t upload your daemons to anything please.”
“Ok,” Zoe replied. Claire nodded and disappeared down the hall. “There’s got to be a tutorial,” Zoe muttered to herself. A second later a file listing appeared. “Gotcha.”
“Knock, knock,” Zane called out a few minutes later. “For breakfast you have scrambled eggs, porridge, whole wheat toast, and even some apple jelly.”
Zoe looked up as he sat the tray on her bedside table. “Thanks Zane.”
“Wow! Those blue-eyed Kaisers are sweet.”
“Thanks. I love them.”
“Playing games?”
“Watching the tutorials. I can see why people still use big screens. This is nice, but blocks everything else,” Zoe answered. Zane nodded. “Wait. There are games? I don’t remember seeing that option when I was picking out software.”
Zane just stared at her.
“Of course, there are games. A frame is just another computer after all,” Zoe said. Zane grinned and left.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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