《Doctor in Immortal World》THE DOCTOR
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CHAPTER 3 THE DOCTOR
Scene 1:
I made my way downstairs. That was when the four men in black found me and gave me a “hey-watch out” look, as if I were falling down on my stairs.
Honestly, I did not understand why they were just staring at me like I was totally alien. I thought I would not have to remind them of this liquor shop, alcohol only.
I came up to my front desk, facing these men, and said:
“Hey sir, how can I help you?”
But no response, in silence for a few seconds, long enough to make me feel awkward, then someone among the four finally spoke:
“Who are you?”
Who am I? What a f**king idiot would ask like that? They came all the way to my shop, stepping in like the agents in Matrix, full guard on, making it such a high profile, just to ask me who I am? Not even the sheriff would come up with such a stupid question.
“Well, I’m a liquor retailer as you can see, or not see, if you just keep that goggles on forever. Is it really memory loss resistant?” I said, without mocking. I swore.
“What are you doing upstairs?” Then he questioned, with a f**king poker-faced look that made me want to punch it.
“I was eating. Definitely not in front of my customer, because of my personal preference of spicy food like garlic, Chinese onion, jalapeño and curry, my breath was like, errrr... so I eat upstairs, always.” I totally made it up, just to see how he will respond.
“She’s here.” But one of the other guys seemed to figure it out. He was looking at his cell like it was a GPS tracking for signal.
Then they had a cross look at each other for a second, after which the guy spoke with me suddenly moved, making his way toward me like a furious bull. Before I was able to move, he caught me and locked my neck, forcing me to choke.
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Face to face, he said: “Listen, you motherfucker. I’m gonna kick your f**king ass right after I finish this job. You have no idea who the hell you’re dealing with.”
Meanwhile, the guy with GPS headed to stairway, followed by the other two.
That was when I decided not to hold back anymore.
“Well…okay, okay…I…I change my mind…you know previously when you asked me who I am, I lied…I’m not a liquor retailer, actually…”
By seeing through the dark shade on his sunglasses, I found his eyes getting wide open as my eyes turned scarlet, like a blood-moon reflected on the dark shade.
“I’m a Doctor, you son of a bitch.”
Scene 2:
Finally I was pissed off. My anger growing fast as my eyes turned scarlet. That happened every time when I was gonna use my power. So before this bastard could even figure out what he was facing, I suddenly struck him with a punch right on the stomach. By unleashing the power of thunder, my fist was sparkling while I hit him with a pulse like lightning bolt. Only the bolt was in red.
Then he was totally f**ked up, high jump in the air by force, and bounced to the ceiling with a sound of crash. I wondered whether it was his back or head hitting the ceiling first that made such a noise. But who cared? So much worse for him was even better for me.
The other three were just about to reach the stairs when the crash to be heard.
They stopped, all in a shock when they turned around, only to find their fellow being dropped on ground, passed out.
“Now you guys look so much better than Agent Smith. So tell me who wanna go first?” I joked, for being funny.
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They all stood still like forever. Maybe it just took them a few more seconds to come up with a plan. But I was not gonna waste another second of my life. So I quickly reached out my hand right when they started to move. Energy filled out between my fingers, unleashing a thread of electricity-like laser, and then hit the guy with GPS, throwing him at the wall.
BANG!
Now half done, only two left, they were scared off by my little trick, making it feel like men in black against alien boss. Yeah, I was gonna be the badass in this fight, and the pain in my neck only added to my anger.
So I pointed at the body on ground, the guy who choked me, though he was totally out of the picture now. But just to ease my anger, I hit him again, causing his body to jump up one more time. What a show!
Now the two were really f**ked up like shit. One of them changed his mind, saying:
“Wait…wait! I…I’m sorry! I’m truly sorry! That was a mistake…our fault...we…we made a mistake…”
“Save your words.” I interrupted, with a grin on my face.
Then I dashed forward like a flash, faster than a blink of eyes. These two idiots just could not see me coming, while I already dashed through and stood between them.
“The end.” I made a statement.
Just when they heard me and turned around with a f**ked up look on their stupid faces, I punched them with both my fists, fast and furiously. I was pretty sure I heard more than a crack of ribs. Then both of them bounced backward, hitting the wall with their body, and melted down on the ground.
Quadra kill! Well, not a real kill though.
Finally, all done. I looked up, and happened to find the girl who asked for transmigration was watching, like all the time.
She seemed totally being freak out, eyes filled with fear, voice shattered when she started to talk:
“What…what…arrr…you…”
I simply shrugged, and said, like always:
“I’m a Doctor. I told you.”
(To be continued…)
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