《The Grand eGress》The Grand eGress - Chapter 03 - Pointed Briefing
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TGGLN – (Chapter03) – Pointed Briefing
This will be the first, “official” LN chapter. I will be honestly writing this one with my tiny phone. ^_^ Computer crashes suck but I shall not be stopped.
Was also posted on my birthday on the tggln wordpress
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Jeremy felt his weight return to him. He felt like he was dropped into a swimming pool full of air he could swim in. As his weight returned so did his vision. He found himself in a small room filled to the brim with people. The room was circular and he was crammed with people in the center.
On the outer edge of the crowd Jeremy could see a couple meters of space in front of him. Taking a step forward he found himself repulsed by something. There was a force surrounding the crowd restricting their movements. There were a lot of complaints on all sides.
“Why don’t you guys move over a little bit”
“Get off my foot!”
“Where the hell are we? I want to start already!”
“Its Impossible to move from here!”
“Why does the star gazer on the ceiling move around so fast?” This last complaint came from a young purple haired man standing next to Jeremy.
Jeremy looked up at the star gazer. It covered the whole ceiling of the small room . Jeremy felt he could touch it if he could move. Usually star gazers are placed in classrooms or large exhibits. What kind of person would place one in this small room.
Star gazers were anything but cheap.
“I know what you’re thinking but that is not a replicated image.” Shocked Jeremy pulled his head down. Right in front of him in the repulsive space stood a person.
Shrouded in a bright blue cloak the deep voice person continued to speak. The voice was powered by something those gathered there could not yet understand. Impossible to ignore the voice continued leaving them with no chance to speak and little chance to think.
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“Also there is no barrier restricting you. You all are merely trapped by this vessels gravity well. If you had some training in the universal elements of Space or Force then you might be able to resist.
“Now I will keep this brief and when I am done we shall be at our destination and all of you will disembark. ” The blue cloaked person paused and stared down everyone driving home his point.
To Jeremy it seemed he was being singled out, after all the man was standing right in front of him. What he didn’t realize yet was that this person appeared to be front of everyone.
The entire crowd of people were surrounded by this man. Every person in the room was looking right into the eyes of the blue cloaked man.
“You have all reached out to the universe and acquired your soul carriers. This and only this attracted my attention and brought you here.You are now all considered Scouts on the mystical road found in eGress. Only scouts who just ascended were pulled on to this vessel. If you regret your future curse your own luck. Why I brought you here will only be important if you become strong enough to ask me for an answer. You can not move, You can not talk and you can barely think. None of you are qualified to know.” The blue cloaked man smiled to himself. This was the first batch of scouts he was delivering to eGress, he had to make a strong impression.
“There are 3 things I will tell you.” At this everyone felt their soul carriers respond. With a blink of Jeremy’s eye he found letters forming with the blue cloaked mans words.
” 1. You will all be sent to eGress, a mystical planet. All mystical planets are populated by a large amount of experts on the mystical road. These people are aggressive and if you don’t become strong you will most likely die.
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2. Scouts are the opening step on the mystical road and Reveniens are the closing step. To advance past revenence is to become a god.
3. Only upon reaching revenence will you be able to ask me for answers but only gods can demand them.”
The words projected by Jeremy’s HUD formed into Palma. She was also restricted here and could not speak to Jeremy. She was worried for Jeremy. Palma had never heard of this happening before. Unlike Jeremy she could sense all the projections of the blue cloaked person. There was an unfathomable amount of power coming from all of them. Seeing that the treant was worried Jeremy couldn’t help but wonder in awe at this game.
Palmas emotions felt so real and he was already completely attached. This situation was extremely tense for a game introduction and this cloaked guy almost made him wet his pants. After this was over he planned to log out and beat the life out of Axel. Jeremy didn’t know if he could actually give this game up.
As long as he didn’t have to go through that pain again.
” Consider yourselves informed, soul carriers you have also been told. I wish you all luck. It would not be a very pleasant thing if none of you returned.” The blue cloaked man looked up at the star gazer that was not a star gazer.
The stars that were whizzing by up until now slowed and swirled around smoothly. The blue cloak man and all his duplicates reached into the air with one hand and snapped his fingers. On the star gazer everything seemed to be magnified in an instant. It was like bringing the individual pixels into focus on picture very quickly.
Before Blue Cloak could drop his hand a huge planet covered the star gazer.
” Ah! Right on time we have arrived.” He looked directly into each individuals eyes.
” You two will be getting off over here.”
Instantly Jeremy regained control of his body. Flinching and looking away from those cold eyes he looked around to find….
This chapter was short so I will go ahead and upload chapter 4 here now too
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