《Strongest Shinobi》Chakra Control - Water Surface Walking Practice
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A few days after I finished mastering the tree climbing and overcoming my fear of heights I took a small break before father Yami said were going to start practicing walking on water, when I imagine walking on water the first thing that comes to my mind for some reason is Jesus but I guess it’s ok to think of him but getting off of that controversial topic that would bring a bunch of arguments back on earth, I remember watching this episode and reading it and Naruto also fell a few times in the water because his control of his chakra wasn't as good as it is in the future, this time I can't make fun of Naruto for failing at something so simple like last time, failing to climb up a tree because I also failed a few times to, so this time i’m going to take this serious and try harder than before, in the morning me and father Yami walked out of our house and made our way to the river to practice my ability to walk on water like climbing up the tree I had to focus chakra to the sole of my feet to allow me to float on water, so like last time father Yami showed me an example of what to do and for him it just looked natural like he wasn't walking on water but just walking on grass and dirt but I guess over time i’ll become like that to and all these general ninja skills will be like muscle memory and without even thinking i’ll just be able to do them without failure, after seeing the example and me paying attention this time instead of dazing off like when I was trying to learn how to climb up a tree with chakra I tried my best to follow everything he did because he didn't like giving verbal instructions he just liked showing me them and then following what he does, because it seems like he’s more antisocial than me but that's not the point. Taking my steps towards the water I have my chakra directed towards the sole of my feet and I took one step on the water after seeing that my foot wasn't falling in the water and actually staying on it I took more steps and I was directly floating on the water but after a few seconds a minor wave came and that caused me to lose my control over the chakra on my sole and I ended up falling in the water, not knowing how to swim I was drowning slowly until like last time father Yami saved me and instead of this time looking at me like a disappointment he just told [Take a swim and get a feel for the waves and currents then try again later] When I heard that I was happy that he was finally giving me pointers, so in my underpants I jumped into the water in the shallow end a practiced swimming for about four hours getting used to the waves and currents I would say the first two hours of me trying to swim I almost drowned a few times but in this world i’m an extremely fast learner and after 2 hours I wasn't almost drowning but I wouldn't say i’m experienced and then the last two hours I was getting a feel for the waves after the four hours I got out of the water and tried again directing my chakra down to the sole of my feet and took slow steps onto the water my first few steps like last time were good but I was just waiting for the wave to come and test me, after seeing the wave come I braced myself for it but still failed but this time instead of falling straight away I lasted a little longer which proved how the swimming braced me for it, and unlike last time I didn't need help getting out of the water because I can swim now, So for the next few waves I practiced standing on the water and bracing myself for the wave, after a while I thought to myself that I was focusing to much on the wave a not my chakra control so for the next few hours I would say about 6 I was finally able to last even with waves hitting me but I didn’t master it that would take longer, after I finished practicing standing on the water I practiced running on the water at full speed which I fell in a few times but just like standing I was also able to get the hang of it just not master it which I wasn't mad about it just means that I have to work harder on training on water surfaces. After working all day on my chakra control on water father Yami decided to take me to get some food, we got some barbecue which I enjoyed this is my first time having such good food in this world but I won't become a glutton for food like how the Akimitchi clan is, and I also understand now why Choji in the anime liked barbecue so much because the people that make it add the right amount of everything in it and it does not lack any flavor to, so I think after training i’m going to tell father that I want to come here after but realistically it all depends if he wants to take me here or not it’s not like I have a choice in the matter but i’ll make him notice that I like this place by eating a lot because even though he doesn't talk a lot he does notice everything around him and is constantly keeping watch of everything which I applaud him for he cares for me like I never thought he did but after these days of training i’m starting to see that i’m getting to him which also makes me happy, after returning home after eating I think about how my day of training went and after I fully digested the food I practiced hanging upside down on my ceiling but after awhile I feel sick and come down, after laying in bed for a while I think about my real body on earth and how my family is but since I have no way of contacting them or seeing them I soon fall asleep thinking [I can't live in the past now , it's all about the future]
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