《Bottomless earth》Author Notes =P
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I re read over chapters 7,8,9 and i changed a few things that I think didn't make sense. And broke up some of the paragraphs so there smaller so it makes it easier to read so you don't get bored. Lol
If you guys see stuff that doesn't work or you think I should change feel free to let me know.
Things I changed story's wise.
-He didn't use dark wood to make his new staff he used shadow wood that he acquired from a salesmen that I did not show in the story I couldn't think of a way he would already get it. All try not to make it appear outta thin air next time. =P
-I put a small hint into the story.
I wanna know if you guys can figure it out lol
-I mostly broke up paragraphs to make them sound better
On a side note. I wanted to know if I create a discord would people join? I don't wanna make one and have no one there =P just let me know
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