《AROWNE'S REBIRTH》meeting the messanger
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"WOW!! it really happened" the mc said in wonder as he showed a joyous face, see, the hero of this story is special, in fact he is not of this world
'i never thought rebirth could possible' see i told you the guy is reborn *clap* clap *clap*, as for how did i know?, that will require me to introduce myself, ladies and gentlemen in front of you iiis, THEEEE NARRATOOOOOR, so it is obvious i know a lot of stuff about the story, don't question it, just accept it
and as to introduce the mc a little and how he came to be a legendary reincarnator, we will mentally influence the guy into a flashback, now concentrate, i call upon the power invested upon me let there be a flashback
'if i remember right i met...'
#FLASHBACK begin#
#FLASHBACK end#
just to be clear i am no god just a humble narrator so let us continue
#FLASHBACK begin#
in a place where souls of a certain special plane of existence are sent to, a place between life and after-life, a soul was waiting for a long time, here in this place the concept of time and any other concept is complicated, a year could elapse in a second, a day could last an eternity
so when i say a long time, don't try to put a number on it, take it as it is, the logic behind the work of such things is beyond the comprehension of weak mortals such as you, so don't hurt yourself thinking about it
the soul was just there in a state of hibernation, unaware of anything
and suddenly a beam of light approached it, and the area around them stabilized, then the beam morphed and took the form of a human, strong and healthy wearing an unadorned single cloth, that covers it quite well, and then the stabilized area turned into a square room with a single chair on top of which the now light turned human sat waiting for the soul to awaken
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after not so long the soul started to stir and awoke
"...."the soul just stayed silent so the beam, lets call it that, began the conversation
"i know that you are a little confused, but you are dead"
the the soul replied"oook, so i died.... that seems to be the truth but i can't remember how,
well its not important, so are we going on about it,am i going to be judged for my sins or religion, i was pretty religious in my life time"
the beam nodded wisely and said"indeed, in normal occasions your judgement would have started now till the ultimate judgment, after all this is the trend of this world
but you my friend got the chance of rebirth" the soul just kept quite listening to what the beam had said "good! you seem to be an intelligent fellow, i am a messenger from the creator i was tasked to supervise this rebirth of yours, like the novels you loved to read, and get a gift"
he posed and took out a sphere filled with a milky liquid and continued saying
"you can chose a gift and this sphere here will empty in the proportion of that gift, and once your choice is made you can allude to the world you can be reborn to"
the soul took time to digest the info and then made it's decision based on the prior knowledge of novels and stuff, and then said
"i am pretty sure that you know that even though i was good, and did good deeds in my previous life, i am an evil person, so i am kind of confused as to why the creator would give me such an opportunity"
the messenger answered "indeed,the creator know of the unseen, he has all knowledge,for knowledge comes from the creator, who are we to question his decisions, as the creation hears, we obey"
then the soul asked"so where do i chose from?"
the messenger answered "formulate a wish and it shall be granted"
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then the soul said again"ok, an RPG system"as he said that a third of the liquid was consumed" i expected that the liquid would be spent already as the system is quite OP, next i would like to have my intellect, wisdom and comprehension improved to genius levels, and to have a skill that can scan the properties of anything, and have good talent in everything"the liquid reached 40%, it was written on it by the way, this is no wild guess
then the soul asked"from what you said, there is judgment for me in this world, will there be in other worlds as well?"
the messenger answered"yes, all will be held accountable for their transgressions, no matter which world they belong to and to whatever rules they adhere to, for they had been warned"
the soul thought about it and made one last wish"i would like to not be held accountable for any bad and evil deed and transgression i do"
the messenger answered"the last wish you had made is over the cota"
the soul was dejected as it was a good way to avoid punishment and subconsciously said"so there is no way around that?"
the messenger answered" if there are limitations on the gifts, it may be possible to have a weak variation on the last one"
the soul was overjoyed and said"OK!! let's do it,you can put limitations, the wishes were very powerful to begin with, don't want to get OP too fast"
the messenger nodded and said"which type of world do you want to be reborn to"
the soul said"i have already decided on that, the world that i want had to be similar to the magic/cultivation world's, and the energy that is used on that world should be versatile and in abundance, depending on the way you use it, it would give different effects, in this world the strength that i gain should be my own and not dependent, there should also be multiple realms and worlds that one can go and conquer and get more resources from, the world should also offer a power system that is compatible with other power systems, or able to assimilate them"
the messenger"you will loose your memories, and regain them at the age of 5, farewell"
and so we get back to our mc
#FLASHBACK end#
'aaah! that's what happened. wait i forgot to ask him what changed has been made to the wishes, F-uck!! now i have to explore the changes' the mc thought
and here it comes, there it is, it is coming, the legendary mc introduction monologue
'anyway, i better forget about that now and start going over the memories of the past 5 years,
i live in Falkirk town in the Vutia Empire,
my name is Arowne no last name cause i am a commoner,
more specifically i was a servant in the Falkrik household it is a pretty powerful family and possesses a big piece of land,
it could be considered a medium sized family in terms of power in this empire,
so as i said i was a servant, my mother apparently sold me just after i was born for a few copper,
as i grew up i showed to be very smart, strong and talented, so i was raised to be the personal guard of the young master Alastair, the heir of this family who is 1 year younger than me,
i was required to follow him from the day he was born and being lectured on general knowledge and how i should devote myself to protect him and sacrifice my life for him when needed
of course i call bullsh-it, do they really think that i will adhere to their demands, i will only go along the flow till i am strong enough to go on my way,
i am a free spirit and don't enjoy obeying orders, giving them is more fun anyway,
i was tall for my age, hazel eyes, thick black wavy hair, well defined facial features, you could already see the outline of a handsome man
so that's about it to summarize my situation"
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