well it is my first ff so please point out errors and ways to better my ff any suggestions and critism will be appreciated

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I was once a hero in the world of Erun. I was born in Griffon Kingdom and as the name suggests it was famous for its griffon military at the time we were at the war with elves, they were not evil nor were we, it was basically war for resources anyway we were winning with our air borne attacks and use of tactics so the elves were put in a bad situation so they teamed up with devils yep devils. The devils were evil it was in their genes you will not be able find a single good devil in their midst they were known for their brutal and inhuman way of fighting and for their hatred of humans so it was a reversal upon us when they joined in the war it was five years before i was born.

I was born in the house of Silver Griffith. My dad was a commander in the military and not any commander he was The Commander of the entire military and my mother was a magician, now when i say a magician she was not just any magician she was worlds best magician how my dad got her i have not able comprehend till now,so born to these two people i had very high aptitude for magic and physical training and i also had best teachers in my parents so when i was of age i joined the war against the devils and became known as Silver Hero my first nickname.

After i defeated the DevilKing in his private vault i got the a strange magic scroll which absorbs the soul of the person u kill their powers and skills become yours and your soul also becomes more powerful but it requires a God Ranked mana well which strangly i had, i had always known i had a big mana well bigger than my mother who is known as the worlds best magician but not until i tried to perform that magic did i truly know how lucky i was, even than my mana was wholly sucked up and even my life force was taken and i was left at death door barely surviving the activation of the magic.

From that point i became a bit too overpowered i could kill Dragons,Archangels,Gods it was easy because 2 dragons added to my power was more than enough to kill my first god Wolf God Fenrir. it was a death match after i defeated him and absorbed his soul my next god opponent Odin was relatively easy i kept defeating legendary beings 666 beast,Lucifer,Micheal,Zeus and kept absorbing their life essence well u get the picture i got very very overpowered. and it became a very boring billion of years i kept staring at the world as a whole not knowing what to do it had been sooo long since i have been living that i do not even remember my name.

I decided to end my boredom and used my power to create a ripple in dimensions so i reincarnated without my memories in a universe where magic is barely present if any any i was born on the planet Earth in the milky way and this is my story.