《SATURN.》𝟶𝟷𝟺.
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𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧 𝐃𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐧𝐢 𝐆𝐫𝐞𝐞𝐜𝐞
𝗔𝘁𝗹𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗮 𝗚𝗮 — 𝟺:𝟺𝟺 𝙿.𝙼
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-Oh, no, no, no
"I stole off on that ni-dude"
I sat at the table telling the group of kids my story.
"Ight so take it from the top"
"Mmchct , man okay-" I waited for the boys to pass , they didn't notice me instead they just kept talking together making me sigh in relief. "So one day i'm thinking about hitting this lick and I decide imma—"
"Hell you talking bout?" Mookie came over and sat down making everyone groan.
"No Saturn finish the story"
I yawned. "Ion e-i'm tired y'all. "
They groaned again and went their seperate ways.
"What you doing here?"
"My grandma wanted me to come with her" He shrugged biting into his honeybun and I nodded.
"Your suit looks nice"
"Preciate it , I like yo dress"
"Thanks" I smiled.
"Yo ass in the basement telling folks about your criminal experiences"
"I wasn't even talking about that" I mumbled looking away.
"I can tell when you're lying"
"Damn" I covered my eyes and he laughed.
They turn yellow when I lie.
"Ight bruh, you ready to go?".
He nodded standing up and we both walked upstairs seeing everybody now clearing the church. But of course my mama was trying to talk to every damn body.
..ody ody.
I walked up to my mama slowly and waited till they wasn't talking about shit to interrupt.
"Uh.. excuse me" They stopped talking and both looked at me "Can—"
"Now girl you know you see us grown folks talking" The lady said to me and my mama made a face at her.
"I did , and that's why I said excuse me , now mama can I see your keys?"
She nodded going in her purse before giving them to me and I kissed her cheek.
If she was on some shit heavy she sure was doing better for herself.
I don't know what happened but shes been doing way better at being a mom than before. It's like after the day I woke up in the woods , I came back home and she was just happy. For what? I don't know.
I want to talk to her about it though.
Anyway , I walked outside and met back up with Mookie as he was saying goodbye to his grandmother and I gave her a hug before doing the same.
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"You got some heads to do today?" Mook asked me as we got inside the truck. I started the car and went to my playlist shaking my head.
"Not any , why?"
"I was thinking like..."
"Oh hell yeah" I dapped him up. "Who all coming?"
"Everybody we fuck wit , shiddd this should be fun" He said and we laughed.
I turned up the radio as our song played.
Nah for real
Nah for real nah for real the realest nigga
Free the fucking menace
(Nile, I hear you)
Yea yea free the rest of the guys though
(This sound like Quel)
"Don't worry 'bout the car I drove. Don't worry 'bout the car I drive!"
"Don't worry 'bout the bitch I fucked. Don't worry 'bout the bitch she mine. Don't worry 'bout the block I bent when a nigga got hit and he almost died."
When a nigga got hit and he almost died
Don't worry 'bout the shit I do
I stay in my lane lil bitch I'm vile
Creator mode lil bitch I'ma vibe
"Im—" We got cut off by knocks on the window and seen it was the pastor. Mookie was smoking a blunt , he put his window down without even caring to out it our and I shook my head.
"Wussup?"
"I got people complaining , get y'all asses out my damn parking lot"
"Ight man" Mookie said as we laughed. We got out the car after we got done smoking and I gave my mama ha keys kissing her bye.
"Where you going?"
"Me and Mookie gone go to the house , we gone stay at a Bnb for a.. week . Is that cool?" I asked her , she nodded and the lady standing infront of her looked at me up and down.
I did that shit right back to her tf.
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"Say he wanna be famous put em on fox fiveee!" Nyne yelled entering the house.
"Nigga you sing that everyday let it go" Hagani told him.
I put the helmet on my head and got inside the basket.
" You ready?" He asked me.
I nodded and held onto the sides while Keeno kicked the basket and I fell down the stairs.
"Y'all is so childish" Carter said laughing as i came to a stop.
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"Shut up , you a loser" Keeno came down the stairs helping me out the basket.
He actually cool , ion think you would say we're friends yet though.
I felt him staring at me for a while until I looked at him and he looked away.
"W- Saturn why you always doing sum?" Mookie questioned coming in the house.
I took of my helmet and put it the basket taking the bag away from him.
"I don't like how y'all treat me"
"Like shet" Keeno added and I started laughing.
"I'm tryna go out to eat" Jakia yawned coming in the house with her things.
"Put yo shit up we gone leave" Nyne told her.
"Where y'all wanna go?" I asked.
"It's late so... Waffle house?"
"Y'all don't know shit but a damn Waffle House" Keeno groaned.
"Shit go hard at night time"
"Aye i'm tryna get high fo' i go though" Mookie leaving out and ran right after him.
One of the rules here was that we couldn't smoke in the house.
"Hea" He passed it to me making me smile.
We continued to smoke the blunt while talking about anything until it was time to go.
"Y'all ready?"
"Yeah" We got up , he stepped on the bud and we hopped off the porch.
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"Aye ion like this shit" Nyne said mugging his steak.
"Why?" Jakia asked him and we all looked at her. "Whattt?"
"Why do you drag everything you say?"
"Why are all of you staring at me? Am I missing something?"
"Come on" Tooka pulled her out her seat and took her away.
"She been acting weird this whole time , is she good?" I asked then.
"Yeah she just trippin. "
"So this is love" I tingled my fingers looking at my phone.
"Mm mm" Hagani hummed.
"So this is loveeee" I finished.
"UGHHH"
"Nyne shut the fuck up!" We all yelled at him and he sucked his teeth.
I slid out the booth and grabbed his arm and we left out the back door.
"Why we back here?"
"We about to do some bald head hoe shit" I whispered and he straight faced me.
"I look like a female da you?"
"Now that's just sexest, hold me up"
I jumped on his hamd and opened the window before sliding through and hitting the ground.
"You a dumbass foreal. " I heard him laughing and he came in too.
We walked out the office into the main kitchen which was empty. He opened the freezer and smiled pulling out a full rawed out steak.
"You happy now?"
"Fasho" He smiled and started eating it. "You want some?"
"...is it good?" I asked him and he nodded offering me it. I bit a little bit and scrunched my face up. "It taste like trash"
"How would you know how that tastes?" He squinted at me and I pursed my lips to the side.
BOOM BOOM.
My dumbass ducked down but stood up automatically to avoid being embarrassed.
Nyne shook his head at me and tearing it apart with his teeth and chewd it.
"I know you finna be chewing for days"
I took a napkin and spit the rest out before we left out seeing our friends getting ready to run out.
Sleezy was on the counter clutching my purse and had a gun in the air. Dust was coming from the ceiling so I guess he was shooting?
"The hell is you doing?!" Me and Nyne yelled at him and he looked at me before frowning looking like he was about to cry .
"That big nigga tried to take ya shit ? Drug my ass around this whole restaurant. " He frowned.
And you know he skinny.
Aww he's traumatized.
"Let me get a ... barnacle platter" Mookie squinted his eyes leaning over the counter. The girl looked at him weird took down the order anyways.
"I'm finna call the police" This white employee waved her hand , throwing down the towel and walked to the back. Me and Sleezy looked at each-other confused.
Down here , somebody shooting the celing was equivalent to someone tripping and falling in a store. It was look over and nobody cared.
So it was
And you can't expext Keeno to do anything else but to act crazy where ever he went.
"Come on" I felt someone grab my hand. And we walked off.
he walk so sexy 😍😩💋💕.
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lol this is so trash , but i haven't updated in a month sooo.¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Nyne Or Keeno?
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