《Unknown Dimension》Chapter 23 Mictland 7 Monster Ball
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Maria turned around and saw that her husband genuinely looked sore, she bent and giving him kisses and hugs apologized. She helped Peter get up. Staying on the side of it as if she were his support...
"My landlady, to keep me in this plane of existence, I must consume 1 point of mana per minute, however, if I return to my water well, we can save this cost and when you need me to invoke it will only cost you 5 points of each of the attributes, in which you have more points." Goldfish said looking at his well with a lot of desires to own it.
"What points would those be?" Pedro said, still grabbing the place where Maria had hit him. Goldfish looked at Peter, as if trying not to laugh and said:
"They can be random or whatever Maria chooses!"
"Sounds good! In that case you can withdraw!" Maria said, Smiling at Goldfish.
Then he made bow to Maria as she were royalty, then he is jumping in the air as if he were a Olympic diver, entering to his well and disappear.
"That was amazing!" Maria said, she tiptoed around her man, then kissed her husband, and said:
"Thank you!" He looked at her in a surprised way and said:
"Why!"
"For supporting me!" She said.
"It's my duty to support you!" He said he returned the kiss, while his hands began to explore some corners of Mary. She let go and said:
"Don't start with that, use your spell: Capture animal spirit, let's see what happens!" Peter sighed by scratching his between his leg with one hand and with the other he scratched behind his head. Then he said:
"It's okay, it's okay. Activate captures animal spirit!" Peter said.
"Ding! It be used 1 mana point and 1 spiritual energy!" He said the mechanical voice of the Unknown dimension. With this Peter saw that he had 3 points of mana left, 9 of energy and 4 of spirit.
Maria at this moment saw that Peter's eyes began to glow with a neon pink color.
However, the world that could see Peter changed the walls went from orange to purple color.
"Aaaaaah, aaaaah, aaaaah...!" Pedro hear. he was surprised, as there were hundreds of screams over his head.
When looking at the sky this was no longer dark bluish, but it was green and where the cyclone was and the clouds of this were red as blood.
From those clouds he could see lumps falling into flames, which he suspected were people, because he could hear them screaming in pain from here, however, these lumps did not impact inside the crack, they landed outside the city.
Looking at his wife he could see that he had a golden aura covering her, while above her was Goldfish watching him as he blinked from time to time. Then he notices that his wife looked like a statue, as her chest was not moving and was not blinking.
He reached up and waved his hand in front of his wife and said:
"Goldfish, what has happened to my wife?" He touched Maria's wrist, as if touching her hand, to find out her pulse, while looking at a watch, nonexistent in her other tentacle.
"Nothing happens to her just she's on another plane of existence and can't interact this one yet.... Wait can you see me?" Goldfish said
"Yes! Another plane? What are you talking about?"
"This is Hell! This is the true look of Mictland!" Goldfish said, as he pointed out thousands of souls walking, from the outskirts of the city, down the sidewalks, which were lit up by a bat like creature at blaze, fluttering back and forth, while those souls headed inside towards a structure that looked like a temple, which was 200 feet away. Pedro was frightened to see the bodies of these people as they were the same color as the walls and at the same time had no significant features to help distinguish one from the other, however, what you could see is that they were under a lot of pain.
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"One moment... Why I can see them now. What's different than before?" Pedro asked.
"Since you got here, you've been seeing this world with human eyes, so it's logical that you can't interact with this, world properly." Goldfish said
"How do I properly interact with this, world?" Peter said.
"Look at the apartments!" Goldfish said.
When Peter looked at the apartments, he noticed a sign that he could not see before that said:
"Stop, these are the Apartments of the Beasts of Death, come at your own risk!" It was when, Peter noticed that the door frames were made of thousands of skulls and bones. But the worst thing was that each one had a sign that said:
"Choose your death!" And below this was a picture of an animal.
On the first door they checked was the photo of a red creature with a round face, cat ears, which had fisheyes the iris was green, and the pupil was black, the mouth and nose resembled those of a Bulldog.
"The woman's friend, luckily my wife didn't have that inclination." Pedro said.
In the second door was the figure of a blue Chiguagua dog, with its ears standing, with the same types of eyes as those of the cat, but its mouth and nose was like that of a tiger.
It is assumed that he was the Dog lover of his family, but this dog gave him bad spine.
In the next door there was a golden figure like a sun, the center of it was circular, on the sides it was like a starfish, with many peaks around it, its centering shape was a semi-open mouth with many golden teeth in the center.
The next door was that of the octopus and in the next door there was the photo of a purple volcano from where you could see a green cloud coming out.
At the next door he seemed to see a figure like a person with a white blanket on top, however instead of having 2 eye holes there were 6. Seeing this creature, what creature was the ghost of.
Looking at Goldfish again, he was thoughtful for a moment, then he said:
"What you want to tell me is, that we were lucky enough to get out of there alive?"
"You're right!" Goldfish said.
"Another thing, why you're not surprised that I can see you and you're so calm?" Peter said.
"You are my landlady is husband!" Goldfish said.
"It makes sense! Therefore, it is not necessary to see me as an enemy." Peter thought.
"Do you know what I're supposed to use this Animal Spirit Capture spell for, as well as allowing me to see the world as it really is?" Peter said. Goldfish put one of his tentacles on his chin, as if imitating the figure of a thinking sculpture, after reflecting for a while he said:
"How did you get this spell?" Peter explained how he got it, leaving it out that he killed an octopus like him. And he obtained this spell by obtaining the shaman profession. Hearing this the Goldfish ask:
"What is a Shaman?"
"He is a physician of the ancient indigenous tribes, based on ancestral knowledge and communication with spirits." Peter said.
"Ding ding, you hit the target. And how are shamans made?" Goldfish said. So, it was now Peter's turn to assume the position of Auguste Rodin's Thinker.
"It can be born with vocation; it can be part of a family tradition or by a spiritual possession!" Peter said. Being surprised by what he had just said.
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"But allowing a spiritual possession in hell would be very dangerous, considering that possibly all spirits here are evil." Peter said with a worried face.
"It's not a possession, it's a capture as the spell says, and of a being less than an animal. With what you will get or will be able to use the magic of the creature!" Goldfish said.
"But then I would have to go into the Apartments of the Beasts of Death, again, to get some animal. And from what I have observed each door is a stronger animal than the previous one." Peter said.
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"Of course not! You are inferior to them and would be looking for death, if you tried to capture any of them right now.
So, it is best to look for an animal inferior to ourselves. Although the mortal world, we can say that humans are also in a way animal.
However, it is better that you look for a non-human animal, or a animal that is able to do any of these things: to be reasonable, moral, self-conscious, direct, or sincere; with its feelings. “Goldfish said.
"Why?" Peter said
"For once you capture this creature, in addition to obtaining its attributes you will also be influenced by its personality. Which means you'll get some of its flaws." Goldfish said.
"But then capturing a creature is worse than good?" Peter said.
"You are wrong, because this place changes people and eventually wears them down, and having an animal spirit protects your body, from the onslaught, from the hellish Mana!" Goldfish said.
"What do you mean by that?" Peter said
"Hadn't you noticed that just your wife invoked me to be happier? Or do you think I'm on it just because I like to be charged? No! I'm sharing with her my animal spirit, which prevents her attributes from weakening over time.
By absorbing the Mana Infernal and then giving it purified. It's possible that her attributes don't suffer as much when doing the conversion, when it comes to using it,” Goldfish said.
"I can't believe that I don't feel any different!" Peter said.
"Your profession is protecting you or to be exact this spell is protecting you, but if you deactivate it without having caught an animal spirit you will also begin to consume yourself like a candle, hurry up and capture an animal spirit soon!" Goldfish said.
"The only thing I see here, which qualifies, and because they are less than me, are these human animal spirits. But according to what you have told me or been able to interpret, these spirits are evil and can contaminate my essence. But then what options do I have!" Peter said.
"Look over the heads of human animals!" Goldfish said. So Peter looked and saw the lanterns that were carried back and forth by the bats. Seeing this animal, he banged his fist against his hand and said:
"So, should I capture this creature? But how do I capture it?!"
"You can capture it with any method, that you've seen before, whether it's fantasy or not, but keep in mind that it will use your mana to do it. However, these creatures are tiny so surely their first reaction will be to flee." Goldfish said.
"How can I use my mana to capture it!" Peter said.
"In the same way you would create the magic bullet spell, from the anime your wife likes, the spiritual detective, where the protagonist comes out was a troubled student where he used to wear a green kimono with fox features, and where his hair was platinum. First you imagine the object its hardness or its strength, its edge, imagined the effect of hitting the object with your imagination and then the speed with which it will travel when you throw it. By executing the spell as long as you have enough mana, it will work as it should or you can sacrifice appearance and only add effect,” Goldfish said.
"How do you create spells with mana? ...
Hang on a minute, how do you know about InuYusuke? “ Said Peter, looked suspiciously at Goldfish.
"I saw it in your wife's memories!" Goldfish said.
How dare you read my wife's thoughts?" He said Peter, hitting Goldfish in the head.
"Hey why you hit me!" Goldfish said upset.
"For seeing my wife's memories without permission!" Pedro said, while throwing another punch.
"Whoever told you he didn't have permission to see his memories!" Goldfish said at the same time that he was hitting Peter in the stomach, while imprisoning him with another tentacle that covered him with a very wet and cold slime, which covered Peter's body, imprisoning him in a kind of cocoon like that of aspider. So that Peter would not try to hit him again.
"But that's worse because you can see when we have intimate moments!" Cry Peter, releasing his mouth somehow. Goldfish shook his head briefly and said:
"I can only dig into memories that aren't marked as private or that are entertainment!"
"Try to be smarter to talk, so as not to cause misunderstandings. Now please loosely" said Peter, wrapped in Goldfish's tentacles as if it were a mummy.
"You are already beginning to be influenced by the Hellish Mana. According to your wife's memories you are not a violent person. Calm down, take a deep breath. I'm going to let you go.
Are you already imagined the shape of the magic bulletspell. To get the bat down from there to put it at your reach. And know how you're going to capture the creature?" Goldfish said.
"I was meant to capture it like in Satoshi Tajiri's Pokémon from 1996, but I don't have any creatures to fight for me. So, the only solution is to defeat him somewhat like Capcom's Monster Hunter style of 2018, using either the Stillson key or the Magic staff to hit him, in order to beat him.
But when Thinking about my Mana, I can see that I only have 3 points left and the next point that is generated is made when the Capture effect is finished, more or less in 5 minutes.
However, I feel like I can only either create either the magic shot or the Monster Ball." Peter said worried.
"I have an idea I'm throwing a projectile at him, and then you catch him!" Goldfish said with a creepy smile on his face. He began to lift Pedro above him.
"No wait! What are you planning to do? ...
Nooooo...!" Peter shouted, while screaming in terror, as he was thrown towards the bat.
"Boom!" It rang, Peter's body as it struck the creature. The fire surrounding that creature was powerful enough to burn the tissues peter had been fastened with, Peter was still packed with Goldfish's slime which when released suddenly acted as the contents of an extinctor, extinguishing the creature's flames. So, Pedro fell on the creature taking it to the ground, and it took all the damage preventing Peter from getting hit hard from Goldfish’s actions.
When Peter got up, he felt himself to see how he was, I look at the corner is his sight and he saw that he had lost 5 points out of 19, of life. I look at Goldfish who was smiling at him and annoyed he said:
"Damn that was dangerous! I could have died!"
"Throw the Pokeball already before the bat recovers!" Said Goldfish, who was about 5 meters from where Peter was now, this annoyed by what Goldfish did.
He looks at the Bat, it was red and had a dog face, he was on the ground facedown, with his gaze lost, what Peter could only describe as the animal at this time was seeing stars, in other words, the creature was knocked out.
While over the head of the creature he could see a countdown, it was at 7 points and going down.
Seeing this Peter, throw him or something round white.
"Monster Ball go!" Peter said. he threw the ball hitting the head of the bat, appearing a bar of hit points that was in half. The countdown increased in to 2 points.
The ball floated over the creature. This immediately opened in half and from them came several chains of white light, which tied the bat. They immediately began to reduce it from size while they pulled it inside.
By entering the whole creature inside. The Monsterball closed, fell to the ground and began to shake. It blinked like a traffic light. This one stayed green for a moment and then stayed still. On its surface a white button is drawn and then dyed red.
"Ding congratulations! You captured a Level 1 hellish bat. Ding has successfully created the Monsterball spell, available spell capacity 3 out of 4, cost to cast this spell: three Mana points, two defense points, one energy point, one spirit point and 2 strength point. To master the creatures, you have to use animal spirit capture, every 4 levels of Shaman trade you can increase the amount of spirits and spells by 1 more you can possess." He said the voice of the Unknown Dimension.
Peter approached the Monster Ball, picked it up from the ground and said:
"I accomplished it and captured my First Animal Spirit by myself!" While making signs of victory with his Hands
"Um um!" Tocio Goldfish, as he crossed some of his arms in front of him. Peter smiled and embarrassed him for what he just spoke and said:
"Thanks for your help!"
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