Hello there, as you all aware( or probably not even aware xD), the first arc of The Rise of an Armament Emperor (TRAE), Building Foundation!, is reaching it's end. If possible, before I'm continuing towards the second arc, The First Rise, I would love to hear some feedback from you guys. This will help me to improve my writing and I'll be able to present you guys with a higher quality story. And my goal for the first arc is pretty much achieved. To create an arc with an average of 1900+ word for each chapter.

Present Goal:

- An average of 1900+ word.

- A short first arc. (I probably end the arc at chapter 10 or 9).

- Building the main character.

Next Goal:

- Build an extensive bigger world.

- An average of 2000+ word.

- Building an intense plot and interesting character.

- Increase the humor.

If possible I would love to hear any feedback from you guys ::)

Thank you,

Cheers,

crazyequalgenius

Some questions that I would probably had predicted is:

1 - Aren't the MC too overpowered?

Yes, yes he is. I deliberately created this kind of MC. The reason? You'll know in the second arc.

2 - Too few of world information.

This is probably one of my mistake when creating TRAE, I should actually start with information drop so the readers can has a much better understanding about the world. To fix this, I'll create a glossary in my website soon enough.

3 - MC background or origin is too vague?

Yes, I also deliberately created this kind of background.

EDIT: I forgot to mention this, but I am looking for an editor/proofreader to improve my story quality :)