《TearFire》Greedy Princess 6 : Rewrite
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“Freeze”Cain said and the flow of time came to a halt.Each and every objects weather it lived or not came to a pause.And as he blinked his eyes he was on front of those who loved him.He knew yet again he was betrayed by the ones he cared for.Cain stepped forward towards Run.He looked down to her face.She looked happy as she was stuck with the flow of time.Cain touched her cheek slowly.Still his hands were emotion less.
“It is fine.”Cain said with the same emotionless face.
“No matter how many times you betray me.You will still remain mine.Till the eternity.”Cain said and after that he looked towards Leo and smiled.
“Maybe somewhere inside my heart I still love you.”Cain said as he moved his fingers a little.It made a crack in the frozen face of Run.The crack began to spread to her entire body and after that to the ground they were standing on.Little by little the entire world was filled with cracks.Even the air broke down like a piece of glass.It all fell down towards eternity.
Cain was standing in darkness.It was darkness anywhere you look.The only object there was him.Not even a
“Stop.Stop it.”
Are you talking to me.
“Who else is here?”
You must not interrupt the narrator in a story.
“Narrator? What the hell is that?As you know I am the Main Character.So don’t give me that. You are totally unnecessary existence.”
You might be right,but.
“What ?You think you are stronger than me.Wanna check that.”
See.Even if I am just narrating this story,I am still omniscient.I know exactly how powerful you are.So…
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“Narrator,huh.You are nowhere near like creator, are you.”
Creator , You know about him already.
“Even the story has started a little time.I have lived the past which only I know for real.”
You mean other than Creator,right.
“Creator is still trying to create my past.But I know it already.”
You are confusing me now.
“Do you know what happened on my past.”
Not really.Not yet.But soon I will get to know when we go to the flashback arcs.
“It is gonna take years probably.”
How can you know that.
“I am closer to Creator than anyone.I know things about him.He just give that to me.It is like one of my powers.”
Tsk powerful than the narrator.
“But not powerful than creator.At least as long as I am still on the world of fiction.”
I know that much I am ….
“Omniscient !Are you sure about that?”
What do you mean?
“This is what I mean.When you are talking with me you are not omniscient.”
Wait! you are right.But how?
“Don’t forget my abilities.As long as I am present on a world I am naturally stand above all other beings present there.”
According to the setting of the story that maybe true but that’s impossible right.
“Not really.It maybe impossible that I can go to any other world that was created by someone other than creator.But as long as I am on his world I am the strongest.Even you are a being created by him.”
You are right.But still don’t you think our story is only good as a fiction.I mean mana and stuff seem impossible to believe.
“It is real on our world that is all that matter.”
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What about omnipotent beings and stuff.
“You mean the omnipotence paradox.”
Yeah.Can you do “that” thing
“You mean create a stone so heavy that even I can’t lift it.”
Right.
“If I can’t create it I am not omnipotent.And Even if I can create it I am still not omnipotent Cause I can’t lift it up.”
Can you do it.
“Can you tell me what weight is.”
It is mass multiplied with gravity right.
“And what is mass and what is gravity?These are things of physics and it only belongs to a few universes.There are many universes without the physical properties like gravity and mass.”
What are you trying to say.
“Logic doesn’t make any sense in our world that was what I was trying to say.”
Are you trying to say every type of fiction is some kind of parody.
“Yes they are a parody to the real world.”
By the way what we doing here like this.
“I was just trying to break the 4th wall.”
By talking to the narrator.Have you gone mad?
“Hey it was his idea.”
Creator.
“Yep”
What are you trying to do?Are you trying to shatter his own story into pieces.
“Looks like he had been watching too many episodes of Gintama lately.”
Are you still going to do this.
“Then should I go back to my fiction.”
Do you realize that you just destroyed the entire freaking omniverse.
“No big deal.”
Yeah It is you after all.
“Then Bye.We will meet again.”
We better not.
“Rewrite.”
Rewrite.What the hell?Where is he?Oops…
Sorry about that,I was lost in the conversation with…,Yeah you know him the MC of the story.Although I am not sure about that. So Lets continue with the story.
It looks like girls are having fun in the pool.Why are they still there at the pool.Wait where did that ale go.
Wait did he said Rewrite before he vanished.I think he did.
He did right.
I don’t want to explain everything from the start.Basically you just need to know that Cain decided to change the route of the story because he didn’t wanted a bad end.And as you know stuff like time doesn’t make any sense here.Sigh.I wanna quit being narrator.Why can’t creator give me a story of my own.That’s it for today come again.If you want to know what happened to Cain and the girls and you better forget all that betrayal and ale of slavery and stuff.It ain’t gonna happen again.
So Bye.
To be continued
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