《Samarian》File - temp : Corrections, feedbacks
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Hello Dear reader(s),
This is what I could call the end of the first arc, and the beginning of another (sounds arrogant to me. ah ah).
I am not confident in being able to make the action interesting, but I'll do my best.
Of course, action can't come without a context. They are few characters that I want to introduce, or finish introducing before getting into the more juicy (and I'm sure hard to write. ah ah) action
I do feel more at ease in describing the characters interactions, but for the action scene, I have to say,
I don't know how it will turn out. (I'll check some novels to get inspiration)
Since the beginning I know what is the Marble and what is in store for Sam.
I know how his power will evolve, and it will not be something I've seen in Xanxia based stories.
Only problem is, how will you reader react to his powers? I must say I'm at the same time afraid and
eager to see. ah ah!
Everything come with time, I won't make regular releases, but I will continue releasing.
For the people who have read the entirety of this work so far without skipping a line, first I say thank you for your patience.
Be it irritation for an improper expression, word or punctuation, please do tell me where I'm wrong in my use of words
I'll greatly appreciate it.
Finally, the reason why I renamed the story was because after exchanging with few people, it turn out
that a missing title and missing chapter name irritate potential readers. I spent time yesterday renaming everything,
do tell what you think of it.
Again, thank you for reading the story so far.
.
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