《Elemental Online》Chapter 1
Advertisement
"Alright, just a little to the left…."
I'm watching two moving men carry in the pod I ordered off the internet. If you asked me, it kind of looks like a pill that you swallow, I heard some people had their custom built for them so they look cool I just got a standard one.
They place it against one of my small bedroom walls.
"Alright, all there, sir. Do you need help setting up?"
"No, thank you."
I take what’s left of my paper money out of my wallet and hand it to the older man of the pair, he smiles at me then leaves.
I spend the next twenty minutes setting everything up with the pod.
Once it's all done I hope in.
"Activate."
The next thing I see is a lot of rainbow colors then I'm inside what looks like to be a white room with no details.
Soul Being assessed
Mind Being assessed
Body Being assessed
Sync Time 2:00
So, this is how the game starts by assessing me. I heard it's to decide which one of the 62 gods will be my overseer. The gods as they're known in the game are actually the incredibly advanced A.I's that decide everything that happens in the game.
Sync complete
There is a flash of light in front of me once it's gone in its place is a huge crow the size of a fully grown person. I know this god ,its name is Fernell it's the god of shadow so that means he controls or the shadow effects in the game.
"Welcome, Player to Elemental Online. I and the other gods have assessed you in every detail we now can accept you into Zion but first, we need you to make some decisions."
Advertisement
Name:
Race:
I enter my chosen name then I click on the race button and start scrolling my options.
Race options
Goblin: Short green creatures that have pointy ears and green skin that are slightly related to elves. They all live in caves for their fear of sunlight. Perks: 0.5 minus strength 0.5 plus growth. Evolution: Hobgoblin
Elves:One of the oldest races ever, this means they are incredibly intelligent. They all live inside of forest meaning they are close to nature. Perks: 2.0 plus all wind skills 1.5 minus growth. Evolution: Grand Elf
Demon: Similar to elves they are very ancient and have pointy ears they also have horns that extend from their foreheads. They mostly live in dark ash lands that suit their needs. Perks: 1.0 resistance to fire 0.5 minus to holy weapons. Evolution: Skull Demon
Dwarfs: Small creatures are around the same height as goblins. Their main way of trade is in weapon and armor smithery since the live underground close to the ores they need for forging. Perks: 1.5 plus strength 1.0 minus water skills. Evolution: Dwarf Commander
Dragonoid: Beings that only have inherited the dragon's blood but have not taken the full form of a dragon. They are the only race to have tails and scales in Zion. Perks: 2.5 plus in speed 3.0 minus in growth. Evolution: Dragon Overlord
Nightingale: A race of winged humanoids, said to be related to Angels. With their beauty, exquisite voices and nomadic nature, they are well known as bards and dancers. They are pretty rare and they are able to live on any location as long as they have companions. Perks: 3.5 plus in speed 5.0 minus in independence. Evolution: Kinara.
Lesser Homunculus: A race created by other races. They are close to humanoid except they have completely white skin and red eyes .When they were first created, they were used to test drugs and other poisons. There were also attempt to use them as clones for real people but it was never successful. They now just roam the world. Perks: 1.0 plus all stats, 5.0 minus poison resistance. Evolution: Greater Homunculus.
Advertisement
I chose: Homunculus
“Alright, are you happy with your decisions?”
Name: Neon
Race:Lesser Homunculus
Yes/No
I click the yes button.
The entire room swirls with rainbow colors then a mirror rises from the floor I see my real body the 28-year-old university dropout who can only find part-time work.
“Now, you can make you character look however you want.”
I change my black hair to white. Next, I get rid of my half beard make my face look about 7 years younger and get rid of the bags under my eyes. I look like my old self when I was in uni besides the white hair.
“Are you happy with your decisions?”
Yes/No
Again, I click the yes button.
“This appearance will be changed to suit your race perfectly if it needed to be. Alright, Before anything else, would you like for your bank account to be transferred over to the game?”
Yes/No
I don’t like it but for my purpose I have too. I click yes.
“Now for the most important part to decide your element.”
Element is the most important thing in the game unlike most games there are no different classes instead every person has an element that decides what skills you can use and what they are resistant to it decides nearly everything in the game.
“Now, let’s get to your element.”
A big white sphere as big as my head appears in front of me it begins to turn around fast as rainbow colors shine off of it.
Element countdown:3:42
I watch as the sphere continues to spin around and rainbow colors shine off it after awhile the sphere starts to slow down and I can see each color moving slowly the sphere is just about to stop.
Sirens start going off all around the room and red lights start blazing all around me.
ALERT: Your Mind and Soul are being encroached
ALERT: Log off permission has been temporarily revoked.
ALERT: Character data is being overwritten.
A large door made of fire appears in the side of room a figure made out of blue flames walks out.
“Begone, you evil spawn!”
Fernell starts to fly then shoots of beams of dark energy. A wall of fire protects the figure then chains shoot out from the wall of fire the wrap around Fernell and bring him crashing to the ground.
The figure walks over to me, I can’t move. I don’t know why, maybe out of fear that this figure could ruin everything for me right here, right now or maybe the figure has done something so I can’t move I don’t know. All I do know is that I’m at his mercy.
The figure stands in front of me, his hand touches my chest. I feel a warm sensation enter through my entire body.
Realistic setting: Max.
Element received.
Log off permission received
Welcome to Zion.
Everything blurs around me then my vision goes black.
Advertisement
- In Serial63 Chapters
Where Titans Fall
I was taken from my home and brought to a distant land, Alone. I arrived a Boy, treated as a Slave, Conscripted as a Soldier, survived as a Huntsman, and claimed my vengeance as a Titan. After decades of fighting a war I had no part in, and having lost all those I hold dear. I returned home, a broken and tired man. Only to find that maybe my war has only just begun. Aleks’Andros Titanos returns home after five decades at war, hoping to find a place to belong and a chance at peace. But fate has a cruel sense of humor and old habits die hard, as he’s faced with the realization that his homeworld may not have been as mundane as he’d once thought. Vampires stalk the night and werewolves roam the countryside, all the while witches barter their craft and covert government organizations scheme. Will he find the life he’s looking for, or will he be forced to regain the powers he left behind and face the demons of his past? Only time will tell.
8 89 - In Serial6 Chapters
... And My Skillet
A long time ago, a child was born under the great blue sky. Many a Dwarf grumbled at the auspicious event, tugging furtively at their beards at this ill omen. A year later as the expedition had begun digging into the virgin hills of their new home, the grumbling of the doughty mountain people rose to a disbelieving furor when the yearling passed over the ritual offerings that would determine his lot in life. Instead, the as of yet unnamed child crawled over to a skillet fresh out of the fire and begun picking at the rock bread, unconcerned with the heat. Shouts turned into laughter, frowns lifted into craggy smiles. Upon placing a handful of the bread into his mouth, the infant’s face grew so grim and stony not even the eldest of the present Dwarves could match him. There was a durable ore within this babe, of that the Lore Keeper was sure. Yumly Ironhand was thus named, the beginning of his great tale immortalized on the rune walls of his clan’s history. “It’s pronounced Yoom Lee and no, rock bread isn’t a misnomer.”
8 264 - In Serial27 Chapters
Shifted
After the world is almost entirely overrun by a mysterious force known only as the Spread, individual cities struggle to survive behind Barriers with limited resources under the direct supervision of the richest among them. Accidentally overhearing a plot by his city's leader to doom a large swathe of the population, Lysander Badeaux concocts a last ditch slapdash plan to save them. Enlisting the help of the city's most feared assassin, the Red Morn, he sets out to fix what's broken, only to stumble upon more than he bargained for in the process. With Red keeping a host of secrets from him--and not to mention following him around for some inexplicable reason--Lysander may just bumble his way into a conspiracy or a magic world or, if he's excessively unlucky (and he is), both. Note: First time posting here or any original fiction, in general. Please feel free to give any feedback you like! Much love and thanks for reading. Posts every week (gods willing).
8 175 - In Serial13 Chapters
Field Trip
To Meilin it was just a normal day, the day of her school trip. It should be something to be excited about and indeed she was, unfortunately it turned into a nightmare. Will she, her family and friends survive the horrors that await? This is my first novel so take it with a grain of salt, criticism welcome.
8 170 - In Serial18 Chapters
StarSword Online
In a near cyberpunk future, VRMMOs aren’t all just fun and games. Max is a poor teenage boy, born into the lowest societal rung of Gray City known as the Bottoms. To earn money to pay for his dying mother’s medical treatment, Max04428 works as a gem miner in Alethia—the fantasy world within a death game called Starsword Online. No reality is kind to those of the Bottoms, however, and soon Max’s ever-mounting expenses begin nipping at his heels, threatening to bring his fragile life crumbling down. Overworked and under-appreciated, he takes drastic measures to improve his situation. Namely, thievery... but new thieves are rarely good thieves. When the scheme backfires, Max is thrown into a dangerous world with no friends, very little knowledge, and nothing in his inventory but an unidentifiable black stone he found in the mines. As Max struggles to level up and gain power in the vast world of Alethia, he’ll need to fight his way through mountain citadels ruled by Yetis and a sky city with an empty throne. Steadfast allies are sure to come to his aid, but murderous enemies also follow his trail, seeking answers to the mysterious item in his possession… Answers which lead to the very heart of Starsword Online itself.
8 173 - In Serial6 Chapters
Relentless
Pennywise x ReaderIt all started on a Friday night..
8 202

