《My Fantastic World Of Magic》It Comes Down To You
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I have no idea what possessed you guys to read this far. I mean, seriously. I went over it, and the mistakes I made were so glaringly obvious that I wanted to go and crawl in a little hidey hole. I want to fix every mistake I made, but I'd end changing everything.
So, well, I'm leaving the choice up to you guys. Do you want me to go back, and fix the story, and perhaps... say, add a few new tidbits, like I dunno, a cultivator from the multiverse ending up here, acting all arrogant, then end up killing himself by announcing random beast A unworthy of his attention? I think it's funny (If in a somewhat dark way, since the guy does die), but that's up to you to decide.
Or, I could I continue stumbling along, and turn the mistakes somehow into things that complement the story.
Or hell, merge Step, and this together? That is an alluring idea to me, but, I'm not sure if you guys like it. Honestly, I like writing stuff for the fun of it. But, yeah, I should probably put more thought into what I write, cuz: This. I like to be as fluid as possible, just like how I introduced LitRPG to this, because, it seemed like a nice idea back then, to see Jave try and wrap his head around it, or making it screw up somebody's nefarious plot...
Okay, Humor should be one of the main genres of this, considering how most of the decisions I make are to make funny situations. Anyway, leaving that aside, what path do you think I should go down?
I'm fine with anything. The only reason I haven't been posting much lately is because I've lost my confidence with this story. Usually how I deal with that is to add new things, but that is also why Jave almost, or hell, actually did become a Gary Stue (One of my commenters' male version of a Mary Sue). I'm tempted to do the same again, but I'm only barely restraining myself.
No matter what, I guess, this is going to be a hell of a story. My one opponent, laziness.
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