《STORIES // OTHER - Short Story Collection》New You - SHORT STORY
Advertisement

“I won’t allow it,” my mother said.
That’s the response I was expecting, and I had plenty of time to prepare for it. Years of laying in a hospital bed gave me ample time to mull over just about everything I’d ever wanted—to a fault even. But it also let me come to terms with some of the harsher realities of my illness.
“What’s the difference?” I said, but my weakened voice barely made it above the ever-present hum of machinery keeping me alive. “I’ve been stuck in this room for two years, and I’m not getting better. You know that.”
“Whatever that thing is, it can never replace my daughter.”
“It’s an exact replica. All my memories, thoughts, feelings—all of it will be exactly as I am now,” I pleaded. I couldn’t bear to leave my mother in this world alone.
She seemed to think it over for a moment, but it was in vain. My mother shook her head and rose to her feet.
“This is the last time I want to hear about this,” she said before turning and leaving the room.
I let out a deep sigh and leaned back in my bed. It didn’t matter what she thought in the end, and I thought that she probably knew that too.
She visited me a few more times before the day of my death finally arrived.
It felt like the wave that had been building speed and strength for months had finally met the shoreline. The warm sensation overcame all my senses, collapsing them one by one into a peacefully unrivaled darkness that was wholly encompassing.
The moment of respite didn’t last long. As peaceful and gradual as the end was, the rebirth was anything but.
Systems flicked on one by one. It started with my mind.
The floodgates had opened. All my memories poured in, filling up the deepest caverns with recollections of moments in time from my past life. I could once again form opinions, come to conclusions, and think.
Visuals, audio, and smell came to me next. Information overload was an understatement. I felt my brain now trying to understand everything in my vicinity.
From what I could tell, I was in a well-lit factory on what looked to be an assembly line. The air smelled of freshly machined metal, and panicked screams filled the airspace. Four feet to my left and right hung androgenous mechanical skeletons, that looked much like I did at the time. Only my eyes worked, not my neck muscles, so I couldn’t look down to check.
Advertisement
“Welcome to the New You Production Facility, traveler,” A voice said.
It didn’t appear to broadcast over some kind of intercom system, so it must’ve been playing directly into my brain.
“If you’re hearing this, that means your organic body has since perished. We’re sorry for your loss, but we’re equally as excited that you’re here with us today. Here at New You Incorporated, we think that the death of the organic self is simply the birth of the eternal self, and we hope you come to view it that way too.”
As the voice continued, various machines reached out, poked, and prodded me in several locations. It was clear that the assembly process was still underway.
“With your new life comes new responsibilities, and the first of many is fiscal. As a part of the New You contract you signed in life, we own the hardware in which you currently operate. Software and hardware maintenance fees will be automatically subtracted from earned wages for your convenience and will keep you operational for centuries to come.”
The voice went over several other societal niceties required from artificial humans, such as allowing real humans to have first dibs on jobs, houses, and other things of that nature. I knew there were some tradeoffs, but I was still overwhelmed.
“And finally,” the voice started. Its matter-of-fact tone became firm. “If you’re found to be in violation of your contract, you will be immediately deactivated without notice.”
Yeah, that makes sense.
I could now see more of the factory in which we were assembled. Huge rows of thousands of robotic skeletons, all in different stages of production, were whisked around on a suspended assembly line. We all hung from a harness on our backs as we were assembled, and machines clicked magnetic cosmetic pieces into place as they finished each section.
After I signed the New You contract, they took 3D scans of my face and body to accurately replicate me as an artificial being. They couldn’t replicate height, so I was stuck at a painfully average five-foot-six. Still an upgrade of two inches from my previous body, though. Other than that, when assembled, everyone seemed somewhat normal.
“Your next of kin has been notified of your revival. Please make yourself comfortable as you wait for pick up. And please, enjoy the New You!”
The voice clicked off and feeling returned to my muscles. I moved my hands, fingers, toes, and legs, and felt all of them react to my commands.
Advertisement
The harness lowered me to the factory floor, where I stood on my own for several moments.
“New You unit 592871, please come to the counter to receive your documentation,” a man’s voice said.
I looked over to the source and was startled to see an armored man with an assault rifle at the ready. I guessed that security was tight here. I did as the man instructed and approached the counter.
“Hey,” I said.
The woman behind the counter waved her finger at me in greeting but didn’t take her gaze off her computer monitor.
“Unit 592871, name Ura Withers, sex female, Canadian national, hair brown, eyes hazel. Sound right?” She said. Her voice was hoarse.
“Yeah, that’s me.”
She looked up from her monitor now and scanned me with her eyes. There was something behind them that I couldn’t decipher though—it was a toss-up between admiration and pity, but it was hard to tell behind her stone-cold façade.
“You’ve been selected for quality assurance testing before you head out,” she said, looking back to her screen.
“Oh, okay. Where is that?”
She pointed to her left towards a somewhat dimly lit opening. I nodded and walked through the entrance.
The hallway seemed to stretch for miles. I was starting to feel antsy—maybe even anxious, to see my mother again. We only had each other left in this world, so we needed to stick together. I hoped she’d come to accept my new body.
Double doors led me into a large circular chamber lined with doors on six different floors. One spiral staircase led from the top to the bottom.
“Unit 592871, please make your way to room 191,” the voice from earlier spoke into my mind once again.
“My mother’s waiting for me, how long will this take?” I asked.
“Unit 592871, please make your way to room 191 or we will override your motor functions and do it for you.”
I furrowed my brow.
“Like hell you will,” I said, “I’m opting out of this quality assurance stuff.”
“Overriding motor functions.”
With those words, I no longer felt my muscles. I couldn’t command them like I could previously, and I watched them move me towards a room on the opposite side of the entrance.
I grunted and screamed, but without control of my mouth I could not form words. I let myself into room, sat down on a hard cot on the inside, and heard the door click shut.
When I was granted access to my motor functions again, I rushed the door and pounded on it several times with clenched fists.
“Hey, let me out! My mom is waiting for me out there, please!”
I didn’t know who I was talking to, but there had to be someone out there listening to me.
“Don’t get your hopes up, kid. There’s no one coming for you.”
I turned my head. In the same room was a middle-aged woman laying on a cot. I hadn’t noticed her before.
“Don’t believe me?” she asked incredulously.
“No—my mom is coming to get me.”
She let out a stiff sigh.
“That’s what the last one said, too. Didn’t do her too much good,” she said, pointing towards the opposite corner of the room where a black burn marks stained the floor.
“Lit herself on fire. She was here for sixty years, thirty of which we were roommates for.”
“How long have you been here?”
“Plenty of reasons to be skeptical—I get it—but it’s best not to ask,” she said. She leaned up now to look at me. “Just live your life, forget the past as much as you possibly can, and you’ll be fine. That’s all the advice I can give you.”
I turned away from her and started to bang on the door again.
“There’s been a mistake, mom’s waiting for me out there! Is anyone out there? Hello?”
Faces of pity lined the other cells I could see. The searched for my voice, found me staring out my window, attempted to comfort me with their expressions.
“I’m Ura Withers from Toronto, age twenty-one, born August thirteenth, 2041—I’m… I’m not who you’re looking for. Please, let me go!”
“Did you say 2041?”
The woman now stood behind me, meeting my gaze at exactly eye level. I nodded slowly, and a pained expression crossed her face.
“I’m sorry, child.”
“Sorry?”
“You’ve been dead for over two-hundred years. Any relatives you knew are gone. You’re alone now.”
Advertisement
- In Serial346 Chapters
V.I.R.A.L
In a world full of superhumans with fantastical abilities the idea of superheroes is seen as nothing more than childish dreams. The superheroes are instead streamers, people stream their crime-fighting ordeals for the world with the whole reason of getting rich and famous, nothing more, nothing less. The concept of great power means great responsibility is thrown out the window for a new era of supers.Alton Brantley is one such person. Working two part-time jobs to make ends meet he keeps his powers a secret not wanting the burdens of his past to define him. This changes however when he is met by a larger than life girl Zinnia, she dreams of being a real-life superhero like the ones of old. Forming Team Rhapsody they begin to climb the ranks gaining new allies in order to become the most famous streamers the world has ever seen.
8 181 - In Serial36 Chapters
System Descendant: Awakening
The misuse of Nanobots drove the first test subjects crazy. These crazy few called themselves the Domains. Most of the Domains rained down destruction on the rest of Humanity. Two Domains stood against the rest, but they were not enough to stop the tide. Humanity was conquered and fell. Wildly mutated animals and constructs threaten the villages and towns that remain. Meanwhile, cities are protected by the effort of large numbers of heroes. One of the Domains that stood against the others has instituted a number of systems designed to help humanity. It's still not enough. But then a relative of the first Domain, one of two that stood for Humanity, awakens from his long slumber. This is the tale of Lucas and his friends as they fight to free the world from the grips of Hades and the rest of the Domains.
8 232 - In Serial15 Chapters
The Djinn's Price
Albek Shokarov, a teenager struggling to survive in a post-apocalyptic world, unwillingly enters into a contract with an entity he calls the Voice. Something changes inside him on that day, and he soon discovers that he wields a power that gives him a leg-up on the competition—though it comes at a price. Albek soon learns that the Voice isn’t the only being with an interest in him. He will soon question everything that he thought he knew about himself and his family as he is drawn deeper and deeper into a web of deceit and evil intentions. We all have a breaking point. Some may be pushed more than others, but everyone has a limit. These are the threads binding us to our identity that, once pulled taut, can't go any further without snapping. When every last thread is cut and we are left to face ourselves in a mirror, will we even recognize the person standing there? This is a tale of loss, of the powerless achieving power, of gods and men, and of the hatred and ambition that propels the founding of a legend. This is a tale of revenge. Either Albek will break his chains, or they'll break him. Updating intermittently.
8 160 - In Serial16 Chapters
Rogun: Companion One in the Orak'Thune Series
Under the White Palace, lies the Dark. For thousands of years, Darkness awaited its chance. Long enough for the world to forget. Coltair, Emperor of Rogun, had only to wait for his father to die. Uniquely gifted to hear the dead, it has taken his lifetime to enact the plan he gleaned from the ancestors. Now, immortality is within his grasp, a prize so irresistible to a man born to fear his successor, he will stop at nothing–not even dark magic and serial murder–to be emperor forever. But when he entraps the necromancer to enact his diabolical plans, not even the ancestors could have predicted the outcome. It is the dawn of horror, ambition and pain. Coltair will stop at nothing, ruining families and hope, one life at a time. Rogun is the first of nine companion novellas to the larger epic fantasy series: Orak’Thune. It is companion to the origin three novels, set as prequel to books one and two. Divik is the second companion and out now for a limited time IN ITS ENTIRETY on Royal Roads right now, but only for a limited time. But did you know you can have the ebook version for free? Check out the website to find it as the current promo! Get it while it lasts! Rogun is now up on Kindle Unlimited (which limits how much I can give free access) If you would like to finish the book, please follow the link: https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B09V3B7LN1 Please feel free to check out the website for more details about what's going on, the reading lists and what's to come. Sign up to my newsletter for news on release dates, freebies and promos. https://www.genevieveginn.com Or visit us on Facebook page or join the Fan Group: https://www.facebook.com/GenevieveGinnAuthor/ Instagram.https://www.instagram.com/genevieveginnauthor/ Thank you readers!
8 112 - In Serial10 Chapters
Natural Alchemist
Will is poor. This is a fact he does not like about himself. Even back at his home village he was considered poor, but poor in the big city means something completely different than poor in a small village... It means ten hour days of hard manual labor with barely enough money to survive, and poor living conditions. He's sick of it, and desperate for change. Perhaps that was what made him decide to spend such a large portion of his savings on a mysterious potion from that beggar... That, and it seemed so special when he held it. But ever since that day, he's been having the strangest dreams... And the work is really starting to take a toll on his body... Author's Note: I wasn't sure which mature content warnings I should put on this novel, as I'm pretty much pantsing the story. I'm putting them there mostly as a percaution, but also to not limit myself as to where the story can go. This is my first time writing and publishing anything substantial. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
8 82 - In Serial277 Chapters
Reincarnated as a World
Eridel Domicus was the trash of the Domicus family, an extremely powerful family that had dominion over a large part of the world, having riches upon riches and ways upon ways. However, it was their greatest pride turned biggest shame to have a young master that... no. Let it not be said. But one night, the 22 year old Eridel had incomprehensibly... died.But even more unfathomable was the fact that against all logic he began to see again. And what Eridel saw... terrified him.Or at least that was supposed to be how he reacted right? Why is it that... ------------------------ The first light novel of [ The Monarch ].
8 1746

