《The Lord of War [Dropped]》Chapter 5 - Qi user!
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‘To all the new students this year, please make your way to the hall’
"Damn it!" The young man woman said as she put her sword away and walked back to her room to change.
Van came out of the room with the bird on his shoulder and moved out of the room, the moment he stepped out of the room the many people who were waiting to see the corpse of the young man was dumbfounded, not only has their prediction been wrong but it was completely thrown away when they saw the bird on his shoulder, they all knew who the bird belonged to and when they saw that the young man was not harmed in any way and had the bird they knew something must have happened in there.
Van just gave the people a glance and moved away slowly towards the stairs where the people made way for him as he got closer to them, they all watched how he left without saying anything, they all wanted to enter the room and take a look at what just happened in there and if the young girl was still ok, but their question was answered when the young woman came out of the room and made her way down the stairs and towards the hall. The people were now looking at her back as she left, they were left with more questions now that the girl was not in their sight anymore.
"What happened? why did the Heavenly queen give him her bird?" One of the people asked and the rest all put on a confused expression.
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In the hall that was once empty was now filled with people who unlike the others on the academy didn't have on armor but their normal clothes.
After Van entered no one looked his way as everyone was looking at the group of boys and girls with the fancy clothes and servants by their side, some of the people were whispering among themselves as they looked at the fancy group.
Van found a random seat next to a short-haired boy who seemed to be at the age of 21, his looks were average and his body build was similar to Van's. His eyes were light brown and he had on a yellow robe while reading something.
"Can I take a seat?" Van asked and the young man looked up at him before nodding his head. Van sat down and waited for the teachers to arrive, a while later the young girl entered and many people looked at her and the group that was in the middle of attention stood up to greet here and told her to sit with them, she couldn't be bothered with them so she just sat next to them.
Shortly afterward a white-haired old man entered the room, the old man was the same old man that gave Van his emblem, he went to the front of the room and looked at everyone in the room, everytime he swept his gaze over someone they felt as if something was not right with this old man as they looked away from his eyes, when the old man looked at Van he raised an eyebrow as he saw that Van didn't look away at all, with a smile he looked back at the people in the hall.
"Welcome to Medwerth Academy, as all of you know this year we have students from the capital as well as students from many different places's but I would like to point out that no one is going to get a different treatment than anyone else whether your rich, poor, or good looking as long as you have strength none of it will matter, is that clear?" He said with a cold tone and no one spoke up.
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"Good, now the fact that you are all here means that you are all at the Qi User level, whether you're at stage 1 - 9 it doesn't matter, in this school as long as you show your use in the field you are fine. In this school we have a strict rule and that no matter what if you refuse the orders from someone who is at a higher rank than you for no reason you will get a punishment, and if someone abuses their power and rank that will also result in a punishment.
The ranks we have in this school is as following, everyone who is at the first stage to the third stage in the Qi user level is a mere Soldier and have no authority.
The next rank is the fourth stage to the seventh stage which is the Second lieutenant rank. They have the power to order the soldiers under them in a fight but they don't have the give out their own orders they will give out the orders from their superior and unless given permission they don't have the right to issue any commands.
The third rank is the First Lieutenant rank and they have the highest authority in the Qi user level, they have to be at stage 8 to become one and just to make it clear, you can't just become the first lieutenant because you are at stage 8, you have to start from the start and move your way up by collecting merits.
After we are done you will all enter your own chosen divisions and you will just be a mere soldier whether you move up will depend on how much merits you managed to gain while listing to your orders, anyone who goes against the orders will be labeled as a traitor and killed, am I understood?" The old man said and everyone replied with a 'Yes sir!'
"Good, now I will only tell you that every day you will have lessons alongside your missions and all these lessons will be held by your division captains, if you skip any lesson you will not be given any second chance as you will be kicked out of the academy immediately, so make sure not to skip any lessons, the only time you are allowed to skip your lessons are when you are doing missions and your captains will be informed by your Major's for that, now off you go, the division leaders should be just outside waiting for you" The old man said and left the room, everyone else followed him including Van.
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