《Of Life and Light》Final Thoughts on Of Life and Light
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First and foremost, I want to thank everyone who read the story. Even though it is said often, I really do mean it.
Anyways, the second bit I want to speak of are the inconsistencies within the story, and there are quite a few. Such as the other two Humans next to Melephas, the Dryads, Goblins, and most specifically, the "game system". If any of you had read my first stories from Origin Point, you'd know it has a system within it, but it's still confusing. Whereas the additive side characters who tend to disappear often don't really fit into the story all that much. This is due to the fact that within this Universe, the story has been retold many, many times over the past one thousand to twelve hundred (1000 - 1200) years.
Which means that up until this point in time, no one really knows what the truth is, but still repeat what they have to the next generation. Not to mention that the God King called Ageless says, "This is my origin story," or, "this happened in my past," people tend to not dispute it. Now, I can't exactly say when they were added, as I've not fully hashed that one out, but can say that one or two may wind up as a part of the next story called 'The Devil King'.
Within this one, it'll have my standard "story within a story" setting, but with a bit of a twist to it. There'll still be two audiences, but besides yourselves, the other will only be one person, of whom will not be named until chapter two or three within. Not to mention this one'll be a Dark Fantasy full of NSFW chapters and controvercial topics that send "sensitive" folks into spirals of death for those who dare tread on their fragile toes. If you've peaked at any of Origin Point's chapters that have been tagged with NSFW, you'll know how capable I am with such topics.
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By the way, this one will also have longer chapters with each one containing the bare minimum of two thousand (2000) words, and I don't exactly have the maximum. What I can reveal is the word count of the prologue, which has a total of three thousand, seven hundred and nine (3709) words contained in it. However, it's not going to be released until after the holidays are over and done with. So~, around 2 January 2017 will be the release date for that, unless Life becomes a pain, then I can't do much of anything about it.
Now, contained within 'The Devil King' will not be an overpowered God who traipses through the world doing whatever he wants, but of a normal man from earth who was sent to Terra. Which means it's the standard Hero Summoning setting, but with a bit of a twist to it, and the man won't have any extra skills except for one. He's a Wordsmith. Which just means he's a writer, storyteller, and the like.
Cookies for anyone who can figure out what he'll become based on what I've written.
After this one, by the by, comes a seven to nine book project called the 'Sins of the Abyss' and the 'Apprentice Chronicles'. The first will have seven worlds with the theme of one of the "Seven Deadly Sins" laden within as well as being called as such. In order they are: Lust, Avarice, Pride, Wrath, Gluttony, Envy, and ending with Sloth. I will also be adding other themes to the books, such as Lust's world being placed within Medieval England and Brittain, Avarice will have tones of Germany, Pride is geralised Medieval Europe, Wrath is Scandinavia, Gluttony is ancient Rome/Greece, Envy is has yet to be hashed out, and Sloth is ancient China/Japan.
Which means these'll be my most ambitious project to date, as they'll be more of Historical Fictions/Fantasies than anything else. There'll also be a "Moral of The Story" added to it, but won't be fully revealed until the end of each book. Though, I will be mentioning quite often with some being blaringly obvious to so subtle you will have to reread the chapter to fully catch it.
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As for the 'Apprentice Cronicles', they'll come either after a specific book within the Sins, or after Sloth. If anyone had read 'Origin Point: Terra', then you'd be able to figure out who the apprentices are. By the way, that book is Pride, but it'll be retold within the Sins' arc. Now, the titles are San'yuu and Siuun, and those are their names. Both of which are half-Draconians and half-Humans called Dragonocks within this Universe with the first being an old male who was granted a longer life, and the latter is a chaotic girl of around eight years or so. Not going to get too much into it, but the style of writing for those two will be in the format of those with RE: in their titles. Which means, Diary.
And after these? The story will switch to being about the Ageless's son, Nox, and his friends as they are unleashed upon the worlds within the Pantheon.
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