《The Naruto system》Torture of the doors
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The moment the door opened was the moment Tristan's life would change. He didn't realise it now but he would in the future.
The door led to a big room. At the end of the room was a table. It looked like a table of a receptionist except the receptionist who usually greets with a smile was actually sleeping with a bubble coming out of her nose.
Tristan walked into the room and closed the door from behind.
He examined the room for a while. The dark blue colour of the walls especially attracted him. The walls looked simple but you could see beauty coming out of it. It was the kind of blue which he had never seen before.
It looked soothing as well as destructive. It reminded him of the calm sea and the violent sea. It reminded him of a still lake and the cracking lightning. The feeling of nature given off the wall was unexplainable. You could look at the wall continually and never get bored.
“So simple yet so complex.” he was reminded of this saying when he looked at the wall.
Tristan sighed in appreciation and walked towards the receptionist.
The receptionist was a woman with big 😏 Ahem! She was wearing glasses and had a pretty face. The bags under her eyes showed how tired she was. Maybe that's why she was sleeping?
Tristan held his chin.
'Should I wake her up or what?
Hmm……’
“Excuse me?”
He tried calling out but the woman didn't respond at all.
“Excuse me!”
He tried raising his voice a little but it didn't seem like it was working.
“EXCUSE ME!!”
He shouted at the top off his lungs and the woman finally got up with a start. The bubble on her nose finally popped.
“Ah!.. oh! Ah...um I'm sorry. How may I help you?”
She quickly fixed her poppy hair and adjusted her glasses.
“Pffft~ Hahaha, I thought it happened only in cartoon!”
The woman looked totally lost on why Tristan was be laughing and just continued asking Tristan some questions.
“Ahem! With the state you're in, you probably climbed up the Ancestral plate. Please tell me if you would like to continue the test or quit and go back to the ground.”
“I think I'll continue….. well it's not like I have a choice.”
The woman looked at Tristan weirdly trying to figure out what he was trying to say.
“I don't know what you mean by that but please walk to the door on the left to continue the trial.”
Tristan looked at where the woman had pointed and saw a door appear out of nowhere. His eyebrows squinted together as he noticed the similarities in summoning the door out of nowhere and the way he had been sent to Helios by the weird masked man.
“Oh by the way what's up with the paint on the wall?”
Tristan had been attracted to the colour on the walls in this room and had been meaning to ask this to the receptionist for a while now.
“This? This has already been present since the day the Ancestral stone had been set up. Nobody really knows what it is made of nor who painted it. It's more like the natural colour of the rock and has always been a mystery.”
The receptionist answered as if she was tired of repeatedly saying it so many times to people and took out a few papers from a drawer and started reading.
“ohh.. ok. Sure…. Guess it's my cue to leave. Adios.”
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Tristan realised that the receptionist didn't really like to talk about the blue colour and he just decided to leave towards the door left to the woman. He opened the door and walked in.
In the room, as soon as the door closed it disappeared just like how it had appeared and vanished into thin air.
The receptionist who was now reviewing stuff now, murmured to herself.
“ All kinds of weirdos show up these days. What a shabby appearance! Good thing he showed up though or I would have slept through the day. Let's get to work!”
Like she's the one to talk…..
She rolled here nonexistent sleeves up and put on a headband before she started working on her documents.
“What the hell happened here?”
Tristan looked at his surrounding which were now filled with blood and dead bodies. All that filled his eyes were dead bodies, rivers of blood and skeletons. The sky was bright red as if it were mirroring the colour of blood. Crows and vultures made noises as they flew down to the ground occasionally to eat.
Tritan’s stomach hurled. The feeling of seeing rotten bodies and smelling the rueful stench at the same time was nauseous and disgusting. No matter how much he liked to fight and no matter how many monsters he had killed, it didn't look as terrifying as this.
Blood and dead bodies everywhere? This definitely didn't look good.
'is this a test? Cause I don't think I'm gonna pass.’
He started walking around but no matter how far he went the stench of blood and dead bodies always awaited him at the front.
He decided to stop for a while and think things through.
'Usually things like these are tests. This is just an endless loop until I figure out how to break it.’
He closed his eyes and tried to to concentrate as hard as possible. The stench blocked his ability to think fast.
'How do I break the loop?..... How?.....’
When he closed his eyes and tried to figure something out, he remembered reading a novel in which the MC had faced a similar problem.
'That’s it! I just have to figure out what this messed up shit can teach me!
Think!....think! What can a field of bloodshed teach?’
He put his hands on his head.
“Ah! Fuck it!”
He slammed his hand together and disrupted the chakra flow within his body.
The surrounding cracked and fell apart like glass almost immediately.
“Phew~ it was just an illusion. Fuck that was hard. It was like walking in a horror house with real ghosts!”
Tristan whole back was drenched with cold sweat. He hadn't been able to figure out what the bloodshed was meant for but there was obviously more that one way to get out of it.
Tristan didn't really mind seeing a battlefield but walking on it for a long amount of time while smelling them, watching them being eaten by scavengers, seeing rivers of blood and watching the limbs flinch occasionally was pretty traumatizing.
Fortunately for him, the illusion was very weak and he was able to break through it immediately.
“I guess that's done? Is the test over?”
In the black space he saw another door appear with pink painted on it.
“More doors? Isn't this great. Looks like the Ancestral stone really likes doors for some reason. Tastes of some people some times astonishes oneself.”
He walked towards the door and stood in front of it. Taking a deep breath in and preparing for whatever was waiting for him inside he opened the door. For some reason he was feeling very weird right now. Just standing next to it made his heartbeat faster. Fear? Nervousness? He didn't know.
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He expected to walk into some kind of forest but the first thing that greeted his legs was air.
“AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
WHAT THE FUCK?!”
He had to experience yet another free fall.
Thump~
The sweet sound of someone falling on a bed rang out in a room.
“Argh! What's with this world and it's free falls?”
As soon as he got up he felt blood rush into his head and he felt his third leg getting stronger.
Blood dripped on the bed while Tristan sat on it dumbfounded at the scene in front of him.
'Girls?! Why are there Girls here?!’
Plump girls with huge breast and booties were sitting on the bed giggling softly.
“Hello handsome. Want to have some fun ?”
“Hell yeah! Wait… wait! What is this?”
He had a freefall and somehow ended up landing on a soft bed with pink colour everywhere. Seriously he could see even the air flowing around with pinkness.
“First of all what's with all this pink stuff and why is my nose bleeding?!”
Sigh~ our poor MC. This is what happens when you don't date till your thirty.
“Why so serious little guy? Are these sisters not to your liking?”
Well some of you might be thinking why there were calling him little guy even though he was thirty. That's basically because the system changed his bone structure along with his looks to make him look young.
The system comes with advantages too you know!
“Its-its not that… wait why are you taking my pants off?! Wait wait wait! Don't take your clothes off!! Where the fuck did I land up this time? Am I even in the right place?”
Tristan wanted to check his own intelligence. He even pinched himself to see if he was dreaming or not.
He slammed his hands together trying to disrupt the flow of chakra within his body but nothing happened this time.
“Shit! It's not a ninjutsu? What does this test even want me to do? Aaah! I told you to stop pulling my pants off!”
“Don't keep talking all to yourself young guy. You look pretty dirty, come let us sisters wash you up.”
Said a woman with voluptuous breast while shaking them with a sly smile.
Tristan had an instant reaction. It was pretty hard for him to keep his calm. He could feel his blood boil. He really wanted to jump on the woman but his mind said not to. He felt his saliva go down his throat.
Gulp~
'maybe? Just one touch?’
He tried to get his hands closer to the woman but a certain unfeeling voice interrupted him.
Please come back to your senses host. It's clearly a trap. Do you want to die?
Tristan's hand froze in mid air.
“.... Fuck… can’t I have just one touch?”
The women on the bed nodded their head while smiling naughtily thinking that he was talking to them and all of them replied unanimously in chorus.
“Of course.”
No.
“Fuck you light….”
Tristan retracted his hand and jumped off the bed, leaving all the women puzzled why he suddenly decided to leave.
“Sorry ladies, looks like it's a no today.”
Saying that he quickly ran away from the bed afraid that the longer he stayed the more he would want to stay.
As he ran away the pink atmosphere slowly vanished and he entered into a black void again.
'sigh~ props for the Ancestral stone to give a lot of torture to men. Many people would probably fail in that test. It's basically checking your control on your body. Thankfully it seems like light can be useful sometimes.’
This time he was sure of the fact that another stupid door would appear in front of him.
And just like he thought another door awaited for him in the front.
He didn't know how he found the doors but it's like they knew where he was and they always appeared at where he was. It was a weird feeling.
“Let's hope it's nothing weird this time….”
He opened the door and walked in yet again.
The moment the door opened was the moment Tristan's life would change. He didn't realise it now but he would in the future.
The door led to a big room. At the end of the room was a table. It looked like a table of a receptionist except the receptionist who usually greets with a smile was actually sleeping with a bubble coming out of her nose.
Tristan walked into the room and closed the door from behind.
He examined the room for a while. The dark blue colour of the walls especially attracted him. The walls looked simple but you could see beauty coming out of it. It was the kind of blue which he had never seen before.
It looked soothing as well as destructive. It reminded him of the calm sea and the violent sea. It reminded him of a still lake and the cracking lightning. The feeling of nature given off the wall was unexplainable. You could look at the wall continually and never get bored.
“So simple yet so complex.” he was reminded of this saying when he looked at the wall.
Tristan sighed in appreciation and walked towards the receptionist.
The receptionist was a woman with big 😏 Ahem! She was wearing glasses and had a pretty face. The bags under her eyes showed how tired she was. Maybe that's why she was sleeping?
Tristan held his chin.
'Should I wake her up or what?
Hmm……’
“Excuse me?”
He tried calling out but the woman didn't respond at all.
“Excuse me!”
He tried raising his voice a little but it didn't seem like it was working.
“EXCUSE ME!!”
He shouted at the top off his lungs and the woman finally got up with a start. The bubble on her nose finally popped.
“Ah!.. oh! Ah...um I'm sorry. How may I help you?”
She quickly fixed her poppy hair and adjusted her glasses.
“Pffft~ Hahaha, I thought it happened only in cartoon!”
The woman looked totally lost on why Tristan was be laughing and just continued asking Tristan some questions.
“Ahem! With the state you're in, you probably climbed up the Ancestral plate. Please tell me if you would like to continue the test or quit and go back to the ground.”
“I think I'll continue….. well it's not like I have a choice.”
The woman looked at Tristan weirdly trying to figure out what he was trying to say.
“I don't know what you mean by that but please walk to the door on the left to continue the trial.”
Tristan looked at where the woman had pointed and saw a door appear out of nowhere. His eyebrows squinted together as he noticed the similarities in summoning the door out of nowhere and the way he had been sent to Helios by the weird masked man.
“Oh by the way what's up with the paint on the wall?”
Tristan had been attracted to the colour on the walls in this room and had been meaning to ask this to the receptionist for a while now.
“This? This has already been present since the day the Ancestral stone had been set up. Nobody really knows what it is made of nor who painted it. It's more like the natural colour of the rock and has always been a mystery.”
The receptionist answered as if she was tired of repeatedly saying it so many times to people and took out a few papers from a drawer and started reading.
“ohh.. ok. Sure…. Guess it's my cue to leave. Adios.”
Tristan realised that the receptionist didn't really like to talk about the and he just decided to leave towards the door left to the woman. He opened the door and walked in.
In the room, as soon as the door closed it disappeared just like how it had appeared and vanished into thin air.
The receptionist who was now reviewing stuff now, murmured to herself.
“ All kinds of weirdos show up these days. What a shabby appearance! Good thing he showed up though or I would have slept through the day. Let's get to work!”
Like she's the one to talk…..
She rolled here nonexistent sleeves up and put on a headband before she started working on her documents.
“What the hell happened here?”
Tristan looked at his surrounding which were now filled with blood and dead bodies. All that filled his eyes were dead bodies, rivers of blood and skeletons. The sky was bright red as if it were mirroring the colour of blood. Crows and vultures made noises as they flew down to the ground occasionally to eat.
Tritan’s stomach hurled. The feeling of seeing rotten bodies and smelling the rueful stench at the same time was nauseous and disgusting. No matter how much he liked to fight and no matter how many monsters he had killed, it didn't look as terrifying as this.
Blood and dead bodies everywhere? This definitely didn't look good.
'is this a test? Cause I don't think I'm gonna pass.’
He started walking around but no matter how far he went the stench of blood and dead bodies always awaited him at the front.
He decided to stop for a while and think things through.
'Usually things like these are tests. This is just an endless loop until I figure out how to break it.’
He closed his eyes and tried to to concentrate as hard as possible. The stench blocked his ability to think fast.
'How do I break the loop?..... How?.....’
When he closed his eyes and tried to figure something out, he remembered reading a novel in which the MC had faced a similar problem.
'That’s it! I just have to figure out what this messed up shit can teach me!
Think!....think! What can a field of bloodshed teach?’
He put his hands on his head.
“Ah! Fuck it!”
He slammed his hand together and disrupted the chakra flow within his body.
The surrounding cracked and fell apart like glass almost immediately.
“Phew~ it was just an illusion. Fuck that was hard. It was like walking in a horror house with real ghosts!”
Tristan whole back was drenched with cold sweat. He hadn't been able to figure out what the bloodshed was meant for but there was obviously more that one way to get out of it.
Tristan didn't really mind seeing a battlefield but walking on it for a long amount of time while smelling them, watching them being eaten by scavengers, seeing rivers of blood and watching the limbs flinch occasionally was pretty traumatizing.
Fortunately for him, the illusion was very weak and he was able to break through it immediately.
“I guess that's done? Is the test over?”
In the black space he saw another door appear with pink painted on it.
“More doors? Isn't this great. Looks like the Ancestral stone really likes doors for some reason. Tastes of some people some times astonishes oneself.”
He walked towards the door and stood in front of it. Taking a deep breath in and preparing for whatever was waiting for him inside he opened the door. For some reason he was feeling very weird right now. Just standing next to it made his heartbeat faster. Fear? Nervousness? He didn't know.
He expected to walk into some kind of forest but the first thing that greeted his legs was air.
“AAAAAAHHHHH!!!!
WHAT THE FUCK?!”
He had to experience yet another free fall.
Thump~
The sweet sound of someone falling on a bed rang out in a room.
“Argh! What's with this world and it's free falls?”
As soon as he got up he felt blood rush into his head and he felt his third leg getting stronger.
Blood dripped on the bed while Tristan sat on it dumbfounded at the scene in front of him.
'Girls?! Why are there Girls here?!’
Plump girls with huge breast and booties were sitting on the bed giggling softly.
“Hello handsome. Want to have some fun ?”
“Hell yeah! Wait… wait! What is this?”
He had a freefall and somehow ended up landing on a soft bed with pink colour everywhere. Seriously he could see even the air flowing around with pinkness.
“First of all what's with all this pink stuff and why is my nose bleeding?!”
Sigh~ our poor MC. This is what happens when you don't date till your thirty.
“Why so serious little guy? Are these sisters not to your liking?”
Well some of you might be thinking why there were calling him little guy even though he was thirty. That's basically because the system changed his bone structure along with his looks to make him look young.
The system comes with advantages too you know!
“Its-its not that… wait why are you taking my pants off?! Wait wait wait! Don't take your clothes off!! Where the fuck did I land up this time? Am I even in the right place?”
Tristan wanted to check his own intelligence. He even pinched himself to see if he was dreaming or not.
He slammed his hands together trying to disrupt the flow of chakra within his body but nothing happened this time.
“Shit! It's not a ninjutsu? What does this test even want me to do? Aaah! I told you to stop pulling my pants off!”
“Don't keep talking all to yourself young guy. You look pretty dirty, come let us sisters wash you up.”
Said a woman with voluptuous breast while shaking them with a sly smile.
Tristan had an instant reaction. It was pretty hard for him to keep his calm. He could feel his blood boil. He really wanted to jump on the woman but his mind said not to. He felt his saliva go down his throat.
Gulp~
'maybe? Just one touch?’
He tried to get his hands closer to the woman but a certain unfeeling voice interrupted him.
Please come back to your senses host. It's clearly a trap. Do you want to die?
Tristan's hand froze in mid air.
“.... Fuck… can’t I have just one touch?”
The women on the bed nodded their head while smiling naughtily thinking that he was talking to them and all of them replied unanimously in chorus.
“Of course.”
No.
“Fuck you light….”
Tristan retracted his hand and jumped off the bed, leaving all the women puzzled why he suddenly decided to leave.
“Sorry ladies, looks like it's a no today.”
Saying that he quickly ran away from the bed afraid that the longer he stayed the more he would want to stay.
As he ran away the pink atmosphere slowly vanished and he entered into a black void again.
'sigh~ props for the Ancestral stone to give a lot of torture to men. Many people would probably fail in that test. It's basically checking your control on your body. Thankfully it seems like light can be useful sometimes.’
This time he was sure of the fact that another stupid door would appear in front of him.
And just like he thought another door awaited for him in the front.
He didn't know how he found the doors but it's like they knew where he was and they always appeared at where he was. It was a weird feeling.
“Let's hope it's nothing weird this time….”
He opened the door and walked in yet again.
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