《Immersion》Chapter 6: Shadow of the mind
Advertisement
The field around Tyr faded and standing before him was a cloaked figure, jet black robes flowing to what would have been the ground. He couldn't see a face. Dramatic effect is nice.
"Congratulations Tyr, you survived when we didn't think that you would." The source of the voice echoed from around him and didn't originate from the hooded form in front of him. The hooded figure reached out a hand and a shadow extended from it until it wrapped around Tyr. The shadow wrapped around his vision and his HUD reshaped with an edge of shadow around it. "As a reward for surviving the challenge we are granting you what others would call an unfair advantage. You have been gifted Shadow, which is a fully functional AI that is going to do everything it can to help augment you towards success. For lack of better terminology it is going to help guide you through the game. However, the condition that comes with it is that you may not divulge its existence to other players. If you do, your access to it shall be revoked."
"So, Shadow is basically like having a quest guide path?" Tyr asked the hooded figure. I do that and so much more. We will become stronger together. I'll level with you, and together we will become a force of nature. Hearing this ominous voice inside his mind made him visibly flinch.
"We trust that you will help develop it beyond just that." The hooded figure started to fade and the game realm started to come back into focus. Unceremoniously Tyr was dumped on the forest floor where he'd been with Brutus. On a quick glance he didn't see Brutus. He's nearby, presumably. He shook his head as the voice echoed within his mind. Shadow nudged in a peripheral of his mind and he started walking in that direction.
Advertisement
After several minutes of pressing through limbs and bushes in the thick underbrush a sword flashed in Tyr's line of sight, right at eye level. Shadow pressed on his mind and his body reacted before he could think. The blade passed so closely that he felt as though the blade could have shaved him.
"DIE!" Brutus' voice boomed as he swung the sword around again.
"Whoa whoa whoa dude it's me!" The sword stopped mid-swing and Brutus gasped.
"Oh wow. I'm sorry man." Brutus' sword dropped to his side, "I thought that Banshee had killed you. What happened?" Tyr shook his head. Tell him you got teleported to a bonus stage, but all you got was some bonus experience after you got your ass kicked. Really? Do you have a better idea?
"I uh... got teleported to some kind of bonus stage."
"Oh sweet! Did you get anything good?"
"Besides an ass kicking?" Tyr laughed at the lie in his throat, "No. Just some experience." Brutus grimaced, and made a face that Tyr had seen him make several times over the past few hours. It seemed to be more of a trademark expression at this point.
"Well, when I get a bonus stage I'm sure it'll be me doing the ass kicking." As he said this he kicked some small fallen branches. "So where do we head from here? By the time we get back to town it'll be almost lunch, so we may as well keep pushing right?"
Shadow pressed against Tyr's peripheral again and Tyr immediately started walking in that direction. I have a feeling you're going to help me more than I thought you would.
"Let's go this way. I have a good feeling about it." Shadows laugh echoed in Tyr's mind as the warrior took the lead and started hacking his way through the brush with his sword. A good feeling... the words echoing within his mind as light started to filter in at dawn's break.
Advertisement
- In Serial51 Chapters
Caligo Tenebris
Can a newborn soul be tainted by darkness from the beginning ? Can there be souls that even God give up on trying to purify? What if this soul was the purest and the brightest of all in the beginning but became darker than the darkness itself with the ages? Surely such soul can be purified by the mightiest of all and everything, the alpha and the omega!Would God give up on it after 1 millions unsuccessful reincarnation ? Like a red wine stain on white silk, some stain can't be cleaned.-----------------Re:incarnation story, God's wrath and punishment of a unclean-able soul.-Author's note: -Warning: Lots of very descriptive sexual acts / Dark humour / Cruelty on defenceless victims / The MC can be a jerk...Some will say the MC is Evil... Some won't... Who said darkness was evil in the first place?-
8 158 - In Serial9 Chapters
The Second Divine
if you could do anything you want to, will you even have anything you that want to have? this story follows a young boy who through various events got the power of an almighty god, only to find out that immortality and endless power isnt all its cracked up to be. will he become the saviour of everything or its ender? will he warp reality or let it be? what is reality to begin with? join him in his philosphical search for answers and adventures far beyond your wildest dreams because everything is possible, especially when you control everything. Note : This is my first novel written ages ago and i have matured since then (back then i only read light novels) Its not edited cause honestly i cant bring myself to read something i already know whats gonna happen in, so yeah alot of typosThe chapters are long as hell so yeah treat them as multiples (i mean by the end of chapter 3 its 10k words)
8 141 - In Serial11 Chapters
Starlight Assassin
Set in the city of Valeris, the Starlight Assassin is a fantasy adventure following a young man and his adventures with strange occurrences and people in the city. Dark things lurk around every corner; not everyone is strong enough to survive unscathed. Edit: Short Permanent hiatus. Author's note: Traumatizing content tag exists for creative freedom in future chapters and because I don't know exactly what content is traumatizing. Blood and swearing will be present. No sexual content whatsoever. I really have no idea how to sum up everything properly, and even if I could, I feel I would rather have you dive in without any expectations.
8 159 - In Serial13 Chapters
Building a World From the Ground Up
A planet named Ereos learning how to exist. She's a child, go easy on her. Lets hope the god of war doesn't find her first. (A full restart of the story. Sorry if you wanted her to be Akana, my draft said the edgiest name ever and I made it Ereos, and DAMN is that a good name or what?)
8 141 - In Serial12 Chapters
243 Wanderers
My name is Karasuma Eiji, a boy abandoned by my parents, and getting picked up by your everyday ordinary drug dealer. And on one particular day, I got careless and got caught when I was delivering the package. After that incident and spending some time in the juvenile and rehabilitation centre, and getting re-educated. By the time I reached the age to enter a high school, I finally had the opportunity to go out of the system and take my freedom with terms. I must attend and finish the boarding school without adding a single bad record. But at the entrance ceremony, my world suddenly changed. The whole 1st-year student is summoned into a fantasy world in order to defeat the demons and become a hero. However, why do I want to do that? What's the benefit? Is it Money? Then how much? Is it Fame? Or just plainly returning home after everything was over? What about our safety? Is there any insurance? And what should I care? This isn't my world nor do I have any special bond with this world.
8 128 - In Serial65 Chapters
The Devil // Eddie Munson Stranger Things
𝙸 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚞𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚠𝚑𝚢 𝙸'𝚖 𝚒𝚗 𝚊 𝚛𝚘𝚘𝚖 𝙸 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚛𝚎𝚌𝚘𝚐𝚗𝚒𝚣𝚎.𝙸 𝚍𝚒𝚎𝚍 𝚊𝚝 𝟻:𝟺𝟻𝚈𝚎𝚊𝚑 𝚒𝚝 𝚜𝚊𝚢𝚜 𝚜𝚘 𝚘𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚜𝚒𝚐𝚗.𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚢 𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚌𝚛𝚢𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚘𝚞𝚝 𝚑𝚎𝚛 𝚎𝚢𝚎𝚜.𝙾𝚛 𝚒𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚛𝚊𝚍𝚒𝚘 𝚝𝚎𝚕𝚕𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚕𝚒𝚎𝚜?𝙹𝚞𝚟𝚎𝚗𝚒𝚕𝚎 𝚜𝚒𝚗𝚗𝚎𝚛... 𝙰 𝚌𝚊𝚛-𝚌𝚛𝚊𝚜𝚑 𝚠𝚒𝚗𝚗𝚎𝚛𝙳𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚕𝚎𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚍𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚘𝚞𝚝 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚗𝚎𝚛...Everyone said to stay away from Eddie Munson. He was the geeky freak of the town. They all warned her about that Devil worshiper of Hawkins, Indiana and the last thing Lennon Seagrave needed was to associate herself with a suspected murderer... Again. But how was she supposed to stay away from the only person that made her feel safe? Some would call it manipulation, others would call it mind-control or witchcraft, but the devil works in mysterious ways and he's inside everyone. But maybe Lennon should have listened when everyone told her not to let the devil take her out for dinner...
8 129

