Uwaaaah I feel like an incompetent writer! Noo, keep reading for a sec don't leave, I feel like the direction I'm going in isn't great compared to other reincarnation stories...So it's my first time making a 're:' story and character building and PoV's are my weak point.

So I was thinking about doing another time skip to where he is 10yrs old and he goes to an academy and shows his powers and stuff, however I wanted the story to be gritty action scenes and 18+ scenes mixed with happy-go-lucky moments. Like a balance of the two...however I'm a one-track writer not a jack of all trades. As you can see with my other two novels, Second Horizon is more happy-go-lucky and then Martial Morpher is more serious/graphic. Right now I am trying to make a balance and it's pretty damn difficult.

So if you guys have any tips for character building, PoV's, theme balancing, suggestions, whether I should go 1st person perspective or 3rd person, then can you please enlighten me? This selfish one needs thine help for thy tale! To smash the indestructible writer's block that is rudely taking up residence in my puny mind!

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