《Etryria [discontinued]》Chapter 4 - My Valkyries
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Chapter 4 – My Valkyries
*uhhhhhh* “What a nice nap. Back to work I guess”
I didn’t know the nap would take about 50 years. I need to check on Etryria fast. Seems like most of the soul force from the dead animals gather in specific places. They have gathered in these 3 places; the grass land now turned to be cursed and black smoke are raising from the ground, these are Black miasma, although it’s not toxic but I’m sure that these negative energy may cause undead and other dark creatures; far north from the “cursed land” was the forest, now full of mist and souls, the animals that lived here rapidly change appearance and now they have more magical energy; and in the far east of the “cursed land” was a weald*woodland* but the trees are all dead, and like the “cursed land” similar black miasma can be found.
Seems like these lands will be a great asset to my game like world.
“I’m getting excited that even though I didn’t created it, it just happened on its own, a natural occurrence. Well technically it was my mistake because I forgot to manage the souls, but the results are perfect. HA HA HA HA HA”
Then I checked at Evrasil, he seemed to grow bigger now, the length would be 8.5 m and his stats are now
NameEvrasilAge50TitleFirst DragonSexMaleLevel73TierDragonClass:DragonSub-Class:DragonStrength450Vitality400Agility410Dexterity390Intelligence550Luck300Offensive PropertiesDefensive PropertiesAccuracy83.5%Defense1025Critical Hit Rate5.28%Evasion10.25%Parry9.75%Magic Defense1300Physical PropertiesMagic PropertiesAttack Power880Attack Magic Potency1295Skill Speed12.2%Healing Magic Potency825Spell Speed15.7%
I just say hi to him and asked him about things that he learned, he also noticed the black miasma from the lands but seems like he can’t do much about it nor doesn’t he want to wake me from my nap. He just observes the black miasma from time to time. After the talk I said my goodbyes and get back to work.
Now it’s time to add more intelligent creatures. Basically I added Humans, my favorite Elves, Dwarves, Draconians, Beastkins, Centaurs, Giants, Golems, Pixie/Faries, Demons, Mermaids, Sirens and other humanoid creatures like goblins etc. and also slimes those cute little gelatinous monsters and other fantasy monsters.
Now that the races have been put in my world I will now add the class which was novice for the moment for the level 0, and as soon as they reached level 10 they can pick their own class from warrior, rouge, archer, priest and magician. The class or job system is an evolving system which they can evolve to different jobs from the basic job. The sub-class will be the ones like the common jobs, blacksmith, alchemist, adventurer, housewife*LOL* the usual rpg style, they can have as many sub-class as long as they can. And also the tier magic and the hierarchy of magic are God, Godlike, Angelic, Dragon, Celestial, Demon, Lord, Hero, Tier 10 to 1 and novice. I let Evrasil do the explaning as soon as they reach the appropriate level, and the requirement to advance the tier.
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I think that’s all for now. I went home to Elysium to relax; I took off all my armor and dive in the pool. I feel kind of lonely because who wants to be alone in this big floating island of clouds with only one resident. Then my attention was now focusing at the four maiden statues at the middle of the pool, the four water bearers. I suddenly got an idea. I will some my first se***** I mean my angels to accompany me.
I gather an enormous amount of mana and then I divided it into four equally perfect spheres. I give the spheres their own characteristics and attribute. The first two was similar because I want these two to be twins, and their spheres were emitting plasma that changes in color, the other two were a dark sphere and a light sphere.
I now give the twin spheres the materials to create their own bodies. Oxygen, carbon, hydrogen, nitrogen, calcium, phosphorus, potassium and so on, were being absorbed by the two spheres, with a dazzling light the two bodies are now standing in front of me. And because they are twins they do exactly have the same proportions of physicality, and sure they don’t wear anything I can now see all of the beauty of the universe, and now I kinda feel hot because of the sight of those perky mountains that seems to be larger than normal. I was lost and daydreaming about being hugged by those mountains.
I came to reality when I heard a giggle. It was the black haired lady. They were both looking at me with smiling faces, they were beautiful like a Goddess, anyone who saw them would do everything or even kill just to get them. I was about two inches taller than them, which I was 1.83 m and they were around 1.78 m. They both have pointed ears like the elves because I love elves, one has black hair with six pairs of golden angelic wings and the other one has red hair with six pairs of silver angelic wings, both have white and silky smooth skin. Now my attention was on those lovely mounds, I grab each mounds and slightly squeeze them, a low voice can be heard.
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“mmmmm… kuhhh… ahhhh..”*heavy breathing*
I was now lost in ecstasy when I heard the sounds of these two lovely ladies. But I hold myself down; there are plenty of time for that. As I stop checking those mounds a disappointed look can be seen from those lovely faces, like “why did he stop, please more”. I just gave a wryly smile and the size of those mounds were E. I can just measure it from looking but I need to double check *thumbs up*.
Now for the other two spheres, I made them the opposite of each other, let’s just see what will came out. The same process occurs with the absorption of materials(elements) and a finishing burst of light. Same as the twins they were elves like, with pointed ears and an angelic face. The light sphere was a blonde with white complexion and has six pair of light(as in pure light taken the shape of the wings) angelic wings, as tall as me and what I can tell from my “physical examination” the size was bigger than the twins it was F. But her expression didn’t change, and was even proud when I “do the examination” she gives a serious aura. Then I moved to the dark sphere, she was rather small about 1.65 m. tall with gray hair, a darker complexion she was the 100% definition of cute, and she also have six pair of a dark shadowy(like black miasma) angelic wings. I didn’t make it like those bath wings like the devils because she one of my se**** I mean angels, Elven angels. Then I proceed to the examination, it’s rather small compared to the others but it’s better than nothing, it was C, no offense for those who have no breast but I’m a boob and ass loving God, still I’m a human….. From my past life..
My Angels will be called “Valkyries” the four servants of The Divine Providence Elous. *the 4 se*** hahaha*
I gave the name Cassandra (black haired) and Diana (red haired) for the twins.
NameCassandraAge∞TitleServant of GodSexFemaleLevel3000TierAngelicClass:ValkyrieSub-Class:ValkyrieStrength13600Vitality13600Agility13600Dexterity13600Intelligence13600Luck500Offensive PropertiesDefensive PropertiesAccuracy2856%Defense34000Critical Hit Rate34.7%Evasion340%Parry340%Magic Defense34000Physical PropertiesMagic PropertiesAttack Power34000Attack Magic Potency34000Skill Speed408%Healing Magic Potency20400Spell Speed408%
NameDianaAge∞TitleServant of GodSexFemaleLevel3000TierAngelicClass:ValkyrieSub-Class:ValkyrieStrength13600Vitality13600Agility13600Dexterity13600Intelligence13600Luck500Offensive PropertiesDefensive PropertiesAccuracy2856%Defense34000Critical Hit Rate34.7%Evasion340%Parry340%Magic Defense34000Physical PropertiesMagic PropertiesAttack Power34000Attack Magic Potency34000Skill Speed408%Healing Magic Potency20400Spell Speed408%
And the other two were Selena (blonde) and Marzanna (Gray haired)
NameSelenaAge∞TitleServant of GodSexFemaleLevel3000TierAngelicClass:ValkyrieSub-Class:ValkyrieStrength13600Vitality13600Agility13600Dexterity13600Intelligence13600Luck500Offensive PropertiesDefensive PropertiesAccuracy2856%Defense34000Critical Hit Rate34.7%Evasion340%Parry340%Magic Defense34000Physical PropertiesMagic PropertiesAttack Power34000Attack Magic Potency34000Skill Speed408%Healing Magic Potency20400Spell Speed408%
NameMarzannaAge∞TitleServant of GodSexFemaleLevel3000TierAngelicClass:ValkyrieSub-Class:ValkyrieStrength13600Vitality13600Agility13600Dexterity13600Intelligence13600Luck500Offensive PropertiesDefensive PropertiesAccuracy2856%Defense34000Critical Hit Rate34.7%Evasion340%Parry340%Magic Defense34000Physical PropertiesMagic PropertiesAttack Power34000Attack Magic Potency34000Skill Speed408%Healing Magic Potency20400Spell Speed408%
*sorry for the repeated stats*
They’re stats are all the same because I don’t want to be bias, they are all the same Valkyrians but with different magical elements.
Now that I’ve given them their name, they are happy to meet each other, and they became close. Diana always hit her sister Cassandra with sisterly love and Cassandra always goes to my back to hide from her sister. I was just smiling at them. Then I asked them;
“Since where all naked at the moment why don’t you all come and join me for a swim”
Cassandra: *joyful* yeheey, I’m going first!
Diana: Hey Cassandra wait for our God.!
Selena: If that’s what our God wants to we’ll be more than glad.
Mirzanna:*being shy* *Nod* Nn. Thank you!
And Elysium became lively.
Thank you for reading.
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