《One Piece - Supreme King》Training Montage
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[1 Year later, 09/ 10 /1472]
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( 3rd Person POV)
A five-year-old Achilles can be seen running around the island. On his back was a backpack filled to the brim with rocks, to act as a make-shift weight. The island has changed as some parts of the forest were cut down to build various tracks filled with challenges for Achilles.
" Come on Achilles, run faster!" Achilles heard his dad yelling at him. He quickly jumped from one bar to another bar trying to reach the end of the course as fast as possible.
" Put more effort into it." Chiron (Achilles' Dad) called out once again. Chiron watched as Achilles put more effort into the course, making him proud of his son.
Knowing that one year ago, Achilles would complain about every single training exercise he would be given. But now he would do everything as he had gotten used to the training, and his work ethic had improved because of it.
Due to the intensity of his training, you can see a 4 pack forming on Achilles' abdomen. Along with some muscles on the rest of his body as well.
Although Achilles' body isn't special, through his hard work, Achilles can now defeat the average adult.
[A/N: When I say Achilles' body isn't special I mean in comparison to Kaido, Big Mom, and Whitebeard. So he has the 'normal' body for that world. Granted he will have a slightly stronger physique than a 'normal' person due to his lineage.]
" Alright, that's enough for today," Chiron called out to Achilles as he reached the end of the make-shift obstacle course.
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As soon as Achilles heard his father's words he fell on the floor gasping for air.
" You should be proud, you beat your old record."
" Th-thanks." Achilles spoke out, still gasping for some O₂.
Chiron chuckled as he ruffled Achilles's hair. Something that made Achilles huff in annoyance over the fact his hair was being ruined.
" You should hurry and go shower right now. Once you finish showering, your mom should be done cooking as well." Chiron suggested, making a shooing motion.
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[ 3 Years Later - 2/20/1475 ]
[ Achilles' Age - 7, five days away from 8 ]
(Achilles' Pov )
" Come on son, is that result of all of your training?" Dad spoke me inside his dream world where we are currently sparing.
' Well, sparring isn't exactly the right word as it's more of me getting my ass handed to me by his illusions.'
I thought to myself as I barely dodged an incoming attack.
My father was having me go against two marine illusions. Though they weren't normal marines as they were capable of using the 6 power. He was having me spar against them because I wanted to learn the 6 powers, and my father thought that having me spar against people who were capable of using it would be the best way to learn.
We were currently focusing on learning Shave as it increased speed exponentially. My dad said that my training in it had been progressing very well for my age, and my lack of prior exposure to it.
*Bam* *
Suddenly I found a fist in my face as I was flung back due to the impact.
" You let your guard down. Why?" My dad questioned, his tone sounding annoyed.
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" I was, thinking about Shave, and the process of learning it."
" Hmm. It seems like we still have quite a bit of work left to do to make sure you don't get distracted as easily."
" Yeah, sorry bout that."
" It's fine, everyone makes mistakes, rather it's how you learn from them that matters. So don't beat yourself up over this, just strive to stay more focused next time."
Whilst we continued our training, my mind couldn't help but wonder what gift I will receive from ROB. I was super excited since I would be turning 8 in five days.
[A/N: The gift will not be a system lmao, we don't do that here ]
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