《Legacy (vrmmo game)》A Change in Perspective
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Hi.
So I got a problem.
And yeah, this isn't a chapter.
I have no motivation to write this series anymore.
1st person is a lot harder to write than 3rd person because I try not to make it sound cheesy but it ends up fucking cheesy anyway. FML
The reason for the rewrite was because I wrote something I have nightmares about because of how fucking bad and out of character it was.
So there are 2 options:
1. Scrap it (which I really don't want to do because I spent so much time on the plot of this)
2. Switch to 3rd person (the MC will still be Daru, but it will be easier for me to write. The "---" thing I do won't show up anymore and I won't have to write down every fucking thing Daru says or thinks.)
So clearly, I'm not doing the first option. I spent close to half a year on this already. Which probably shows how bad I am at writing if I spent half a year on this and the quality is so bad.
Also, if I switch to 3rd person, then there are 2 more options:
1. Rewrite Chapters 1-5 (switch to 3rd person)
2. Only switch to 3rd person starting with Chapter 6
So yeah. There is no poll for this because I've already decided.
This is just a PSA. This story is going to be in 3rd person from now on.
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