《Hellborne》Chapter 1.B
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Chapter 1.B
A Few Months Back
“Billy! Where are you Billy!” I shouted as I run through the halls of the orphanage. The drywall was moldy in places and half of the lights dangling above from single strands of copper with no insulation around them were burnt out. The proprietor of this place was embezzling every extra penny intended for this place that he could.
“Ray Ray?” said a small voice from inside one of the darkened rooms. Most of the other kids went outside during the days here at the Orphanage, it was a way to escape this terrible place, just for a little while. Billy always stayed in though, he got sick and tired easily and the doctors couldn’t figure out why. Running around outside with the other kids was just too much for him.
“Billy!” I shouted one more time before wrapping him up in a big hug.
“Did you bring it?” he shouted as he pulled away from me. I did indeed bring it. A coy smile lit my face which gave away the surprise. My smile must have been infectious because it quickly spread to Billy’s face. “Give it, give it, give it!” he shouted. I pulled the comic from the back of my pants just under my jacket where I had been hiding it. It was the original edition of the 1939 All American Comic, which introduced the Golden Age Green Lantern for the first time ever. Billy grabs it from me and starts shifting through the pages as fast as he can.
“You don’t have to go so fast, you own it now, it’s yours. Also I’ve got some more good news.”
“What is it,” asks Billy.
“I did it, I finally did it. I got into the Army. I leave next week for basic training.”
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“That’s amazing Ray,” says Billy, but the quiver in his voice betrays him and I know he doesn’t want me to go.
“It will just be for a few years and then I’ll be back. I’ll bring money and fame, and I’ll buy us all our own house. A great big one with a backyard and a dog. I’ll take you, and Marla, and all the good kids from here. We will have our own orphanage, but a good one, with good food, and games, and lots of lights, and no rats. All the good stuff.”
“I don’t know if we can hold out that long without you, you protect us all. Even mean old Mr. Percy is nicer when you are around.”
“I’ve thought of that. I’ve collected some money. I’ll spread it around a bit and leave some with you, and I’ll talk to Mr. Percy before I go and make sure he treats everyone good while I’m gone. Just hold out a few years. I’ll go kill some Nazis, and come back here in my uniform and save us all.”
“You are going to be a hero Ray, like Green Lantern,” he says while holding up the comic book to a page showing the Lantern.
“I hope you’re right buddy. Hey listen, stay here for a bit. I’m going to go have that talk with Mr. Percy right now.” He solemnly nods at me and runs into the hallway to find one of the working bulbs to sit under so he can read. As I walk away he yells at my back “A hero Ray! A hero!” I wipe the lone tear coming down my face. These people have too much faith in me. If they knew how many rich yuppies I robbed today to pay for their survival they wouldn’t think me a hero at all.
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I slap each of my cheeks a few times and try to get my game face on. Then I flip out the butterfly knife that I use to rob the yuppies and swing it around a few times in intricate maneuvers. I need to put the fear of God into Mr. Percy. He needs to be so scared that he won’t try any of his usual shenanigans on the kids while I’m gone.
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“Wake up babyface!” shouts Staff Sergeant Murphy. His yell rouses me from my dream and back to reality quickly. I idly wondered how the kids at the orphanage were doing, and I hoped Mr. Percy was treating them right… Babyface, my other nickname besides Ozzy, short for my fake last name Osburn. The name had stuck when the guys in basic training had noticed that I never needed to shave like them. Some of them thought it was a weird genetic disorder, or they figured I was part redskin since the redskins don’t shave. In reality it was because I was 16 and still going through my latest stages of puberty, but I had to hide that from everyone. Much like I had to hide or fabricate most of my past. I’m not Ray from the orphanage anymore. I’m Raymond Osburn, American Soldier.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
8 153The Remembrancer (Dropped)
It's the Golden Age of the Virtual Reality world. The different genres are a dime a dozen and each new game brings a new twist into the fold adding to the ever changing flavor of virtual reality. Corellec Inc. stands at the top of this enfolding world, looking for new ways to push the outer boundaries. Enter Elijiah Pierce, a broken man trying to hold together what little of his life remains. Deciding to take a new turn at life, he makes a new heading on his way to personal peace, towards the virtual reality world. Little did he know that it would change him in the most unthinkable ways…
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8 81Fire Rider
Superpowers. Magic. Dragons. Lavorians. An amazing introduction to a fantasy trilogy full of enthralling adventure. A brilliant book for both teens and adults. If you are a fan of Percy Jackson, Lord of the Rings, or Eragon, you will love this coming of age fantasy. When a young man, Oracus, becomes the Rider of a mythical Lavorian, his world is turned upside down. The arrival of the Lavorian in Oracus's village attracts the wrath of a diabolical King, who destroys his home and murders his father. Now with a Lavorian by his side and superpowers at his disposal, Oracus seeks revenge on the King. But there is a dark secret waiting to be discovered. And when it is, revenge will become far more complicated. Oracus will need a miracle if he is to end the King's reign. Will he succeed? "BRILLIANT! Gripping read." "Thoroughly RECOMMEND it." "This is an AMAZING read." "A FANTASTIC read from start to finish." This fantastic series by Paul Gaskill is what young adult fantasy is all about. As with the famous Harry Potter novels, adults and teenagers alike will relish this brilliantly written trilogy.
8 66Tales of Regventus Book Two: Keene
Max has claimed the title of king. As Ansel and Griffa work to prepare Max for the future, the powers in Aurumist continue on with their dangerous plans. Ansel struggles with his feelings for Griffa while trying to keep both Max and her safe. As Griffa goes through her own troubles, she has to decide if she will become who she was meant to be. The war for the kingdom hasn't begun, but the danger is growing. Book 2 of Tales of Regventus Series. See Book One: Adalwen first
8 175The Student Council | Ray
(y/n) (l/n) never liked the idea of having a group of people to be close to. But when her best friend introduces her to the student government, she tries it for the sake of the good of her wellbeing.Let's hope she survives in the fated council room of secrets, rivalry, and romance.
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