《Re:Hammer - The Hammering》Poll
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I have two paths to take this and can't decide which one to take. Also writing here because you need to write at least a bit here or it won't send.
"Deathbride" plays more into, well, death. Emia turns inwards, creating and heading a Death Cult to embrace the inevitablity of death and accept the fact that sometimes, the holy flame is required to end another, as The Master has showcased. It'd be a subdued and down to earth kind of thing, where she wears a black dress and veil to showcase the end, and take a few other women as Deathbrides. Killing arts more fluid, precise, and ritualistic than before. The underhive is consolodated under the Cult Of The Oncoming End and rise to the surface to see it's state.
"Saint" is, as it sounds. She totally absorbs the Holy Mother and takes it further still, becoming Saint Emia in all it's worth. Blazing with holy glory and benediction, she stirs the cult into a religious fevour, to inspire and brighten the hearts of everyone. Gathering people with voice and vigor, the Underhive flocks to her to be in her light, and the Children Of The Mother surge forth from below to bring the words of the Saint to every waiting ear.
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Alviona (undergoing Rewrite).
This fiction is going to undergo severe Editing and a Rewrite over next few months. Here is what it hopes to accomplish: 1) Fix the glaring issues from Style in every chapter 1-31 (Dialogues, POV switches and Head-hopping too much) 2) Add some new chapters in and justify the development between Sofia and Anita 3) Remove the info dumps and make it more organic 4) Finalize the genres that this fiction belongs to 5) Create warning in the synopsis relating to the contents of the fiction. 6) Overhaul and show what Mira's view on Alviona is (slowly) 7) Introduce new characters 8) Show chapters the way they were intended, as clues apparently were not visible at all! 9) Make Alviona a bit more serious. 10) Make me (Author) enjoy reading my own work more (yes! :)) Hi. I have been gone for quite a long while. With heart surgery and such that has happened two months ago, I had not had a chance to log on RR due to being hospitalized. I had some other issues that the admins were kind enough to deal with on this fiction. It's good to see everything in one piece. The synopsis has been removed. Chapter 1 should be coming out sometimes before christmas. A lot has changed. I hope for the better. Instead of edits, I have re-read every single chapter and found it to be unsatisfying. A lot did not make sense and unless you have previously speculated what Alviona is, many things she does won't fall into pieces. Well then, time to address all of this. Ladies and gentlelmen, this fiction is undergoing a full scale re-write. While the characters and developments stay the same, it's being done differently. So much that the world should feel darker as it should have been. For those who have stuck around and know the story: Awesome. I worked hard on this, and hope that you will like my re-write. For thos that are new: Welcome. Give me some time, as I am super sluggish. I don't know much time is some time, but I gurantee chapter 1 will be up before Christmas. This said, again, thank you and know that I am back. And that this fiction will be completed. AT ANY COST. I will update synopsis after I post chapter 1. I might post Alviona (revised, as this current one is far too.... simplified, watered down, and dissapointing version of it) seperately. Those that want this, here. But I don't want to add chapter 40. It won't make sense without the backup and world-building of re-write. It will piss myself off. Now then, let's write hm? *This beautiful piece of art is provided by Charee from DeviantArt* https://www.deviantart.com/chalii
8 387Edea Chronicles: Hero Summoning Conspiracy
Enter Kazuya, a boy who never had any memories before his adolescent life. He was summoned to the world of Edea where in the final battle against the Demon King, our hero entered the last room to find a welcome he had not been expecting. An unguarded, unarmed demon king who greeted him with manners and etiquette.As if a respectful and well mannered final boss wasn't shocking enough, he was then introduced into an elaborate plot to exploit summoned heroes. Unfortunately, our naive hero chose to trust his companions. He underestimated human greed which led him to suffer alone in darkness for a time he himself does not know how long. When he suddenly woke up, he was surprised to see a younger version of himself. As an amnesiac, he had been thrown into an unknown part of his life. One thing never changed though, his blood-filled desire to get back at those who made him realize his fall from being a hero to a pawn.Follow along as Kazuya finds out about his past and tries to prevent the tragedies he's experienced while discovering what caused them to change the tragic life he led into one that he could accept.
8 183Immortal Martial God
An ancient world, where people from countless cosmos emerge... A world, whose limits can't be perceived... A world, where countless gods and immortals roam freely in the sky... A world, where to be born is a fortune in itself... A world where countless mysteries are waiting to be unveiled... In this vast world, a boy wants to become a God but he has the lineage of Immortals. In this world where both Gods and immortals exist, only one can survive the coming tribulations, as it is known in the Vedas. Will he be able to defy the odds, and cultivate both the blood of an Immortal and the power of the Gods to become an Immortal Martial God? ................................................................................................................................................................... Author's Note:- Guys, the story will become good starting from 9th chapter. It's the turning point chapter
8 163Unexpected Voyage
The main goal of Jasmine's life, like everyone (okay may be not everyone), is to have an adventures life. Who would have been expecting her to find herself in a coffin with a dagger in her heart. Well does it ring any bells? I mean how many coffin with a daggered person do you know in whole 'The Vampire Diaries' series. Yes that's right! Now how will Jasmine , the seeker of adventure, cope with her current situation being a Mikelson or would she be scared to face her reality like every normal human being? Again let's not forget Jasmine was anything but normal and Anastasia is anything but human being. *Most Impressive Ranks: #25 - selfinsert (9/08/20) #13 - selfinsert (19/08/20) #11 - selfinsert (25/08/20) #9 - selfinsert (31/08/20)
8 140Psychopathic (Jungkook x reader)
First and foremost I do now own bighit or any of the members of BTS! This is a horror fan fiction so if you're sensitive to blood, gore or other disturbing images, viewer discretion is advised. Min Yoongi...the name that will haunt you till the day you die. his psychotic smile stained your mind, and the screams of your friends and loved ones tainted your mind. Youve tried to escape him but he will always find a way back...he always comes back. Will you ever find peace and freedom? Will you ever escape the grasp of your psychotic abuser?(cover made by @bmg254269)
8 122How Far I'll Go
"It's just my family I guess." Tommy mumbled upset."What's wrong with your family?" Mr Awe asked, feeling confused. "I don't think it's what's wrong with them, I'm beginning to think it's what's wrong with me." Tommy answered, not looking up to meet his teacher's eyes. "What do you mean by that, Tommy?" The older asked, spinning around in his chair to show Tommy that he had his full attention and would be listened to. "It's just- like- I show them how well I'm doing in school and they don't even care! Like aren't parents meant to be proud of their children or something? That's what I hear but my dad is never proud of me! It's always 'Wilbur this' or 'Techno that' but it's never about Tommy! Am I not good enough for them or something?" Tommy blurted out before he could stop himself. It was like once he got one word out, the rest just came tumbling after. He had waited his whole life to get this off his chest and he had finally found a willing listener. OR, Tommy Craft is a neglected eleven year old who just wants somebody to listen to him. And he finds a few people while enjoying doing something he loves.
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