So yeah... A lot of stuff happened, very quickly. First, my other story exploded. However, that's not why I'm ending this story.

No, that actually is the other thing that happened recently. You see, I sat down to start writing out the Skeleton Knight battle, and I started thinking about the story overall, and I realized something.

When I started writing this story, I had where I wanted the character to end up, and a decent idea of the world I wanted. But I didn't really have a good motivation for the character. So I wound up bastardizing one along the way, and it was pretty weak, as you could no doubt tell.

But it still didn't feel strong enough, and besides that, just the form of the story felt off.

I think that if I come back to this story, it will be totally rewritten, and I'll be giving it a much more well-rounded finish. I mostly went into this winging things, and I think it showed. So while I'm thankful for the support this story did get, and you all were indeed awesome, I just don't think its fair to you all to keep going as is. It'll wind up being a weak story, and I don't want to put that out there if I can help it.

Thank you for everything though!

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