《Airi》7- A punch of love and...a little bit of revenge
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Dear readers first I want to thank you for reading this first novel I wrote, and I want to say sorry for if I am lacking in grammar since English is a third language in my country and you have to learn it yourself if you want to improve.
Now I want to make some point clear.
First,for those that doesn't like sexual content(raping,banging or just normal sex scenes)you should stop reading because I am going go into detail in these regard since I started this novel with the idea of a girl's perspective in those scenes,with this warning at least you want have to be disappointed in the future but I would still be happy if you continue to read nonetheless :)
Second,this is my first novel like I said earlier so I want to see how much I can bring life to this novel by myself, so I think it would be rare for me to listen to the comment and change the story according to the reader, I think if I change it accordingly I would lose sight of the progression of my story and it will become garbage,that I fear the most...Incidentally I don't think I will post a poll in any chapter but I won't promise ether since I am new perhaps I would seek some pointers.
Third, I want you to excuse me for the fact that I skipped most of the training period, I really hate this part were the story doesn't progress at all for who knows how many chapters >
I hope no one is dissatisfied and that you enjoy this novel to your heart's content...:)
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Chapter 6
When I finished training, it was already late at night we washed ourselves in the river then slept in mother's embrace.
From that day onward I trained until night,improving my martial skills, QI techniques and learning how to read and speak the Dresaldian language...mother was merciless in my training while sparing she even cut my arms and legs...sometimes a head...but when we weren't training she would cuddle me, embrace me and spoil me, with this I forget everything...hmph losing a head is nothing, with the amount of life force I have it would regrow in the blink of an eye, it can't be compared with a mother's warmth...
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Day after day I continued to improve, my martial skills became more swift and accurate and I aimed at weak points more naturally.
When it comes to Qi,I Started creating my own techniques, now I could run atop air slash a river and like running to face it and bock it, I can also wrap my body in lightening to increase my speed to a whole different level, use wind to cut things or make a tornado that if I put all my power unto I am sure I can destroy a forest with it, creating a wall of earth etc...but the attack I am most proud of is still my explosive punch, I wrap my hand in normal Qi,then another layer of intense fire, and then I compress that fire with wind,the end result is yeah...terrifying. Anyway I have a lot of other techniques, but that”s for another time.
When I take a break from training I go explore the forest and hunt,but I got bored of hunting very quickly, I don't need to eat and even if I want to eat for the taste I don't know how to cook nor do mother,not only that...I am now a divine beast a part of me thrust for battle but when compared to the spares with mother when losing a a head is normal occurrence, the magical beast in the forest are too weak...they can't even take a punch...in the end I just sat in front of the mountain looking at the cave entrance trying to figure out the feeling in my chest.
What puzzled me is that mother never taught me how to transform into into a complete tiger, I tried doing it myself but never succeeded...
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Time passed,a year later I am now facing mother a distance of 100 meter away form each other in a gracy plane without any tree nearby, I am in my 16 years old form but wearing white dress with black strips made from fur,tightly wrapped around my body with a black belt,I made it with my own power like mother taught me. I was bare footed since I love the feeling of touching the ground.
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Looking at each other with a concentrated expression with a savage smile.
Mother started transforming her hands and feet and I did the same,lightening started condensing around my body while wind started revolving around mother, a few second later we pounced at each other, leaving behind a waste land.
BANG
Our fist glowing with a silver light collided, leveling the earth around, after some time pushing each other, we flew back.
The first to regain her balance was me, stepping on air I jumped a few times closing the distance, I slashed at mother, she reacted by dodging to the left and and slash at me with her right leg, I bent my body mid air turning upside down to dodge by a hair breath, reaching the ground I crouched on all four and pounced aiming a punch at her face.
Blocking with her right foot,she used my own strength for roundhouse kick aimed at my head, with mother's strength my head will surely explode if it connect since my QI is still concentrated on my punch...
Suppressing the chill I dived down escaping by hair breath, and back kicked at her exposed back...or so I thought. Using the momentum of the her kick she turned around and with a left punch tried deflecting my attack, but I had the upper hand.
Mother was sent flying with her left arm bending in the wrong way...
CHANCE
I love you mother, that is why I want you to accept my most powerful attack,hehehehe...
Seeing my fist enveloped with fire and wind, mother showed a panicked expression you rarely see on her, she put her two arms infused with all her QI in front of her while her left arm hasn't fully regenerated yet.
Rest in peace mother, I pounced and delivered a punch full of love and a bit of revenge for the past year of harsh training...
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-Hah, what an ungrateful daughter...to think you would destroy half the body of your own mother...(Elanora)
You think mother is scolding me?That's If you call a mother who is smiling and cuddling a 5 years old daughter sitting on her lap and showing her a affectionate smile scolding.
I mean stop thinking of us as humans here, we are beast, and the exalted white tiger divine beast at that, a life and death battle isn't something to fear, but be welcomed with a smile, it's in our nature to seek a life filled with the sent blood, and I felt like this since the day I killed the Cerberus.
-Hehe, praise me more mother.(Airi)
I said while raising my head and showing my tongue in a cute way.
PICHI
I was countered with a forehead flick.
-Stop acting cute would you.(Elanora)
-Ouch,mother is a tsundere...(AIri)
PICHI
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-But still I have to admit that you reached a terrifying level.(Elanora)
Following mother's gaze, there was a scorched ground that extend beyond a normal person's view, with flames still burning here and there.
-Don't you know how to go easy?(Elanora)
-Like I could go easy on you mother.(Airi)
I pouted and mother just gave a wry smile, but suddenly her expression became serious. Reacting to the change I stopped playing around.
-Airi I Think it is time for you to learn the white tigre's ultimate technique.(Elanora)
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